Bad End Heaven

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    CGrascal on April 13, 2013
    I will become the king of a new world!
    Comments on Bad End Heaven
    Top Comments
    idmb22 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 2:32 pm) +31 points
    Bad NTR is bad.

    I am not saying NTR is bad, but this one is really bad. He just snapped his finger and all "became" her sex-slaves... Serious Lee? Come on, at least he should have fucked them a couple of times until they start begging for his penis, but no, just snap finger, ok.
    Mr.Dickenson (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 2:47 pm) +9 points
    this work should be sorted more to the "brainwash" or mindcontrol tag or something along those lines...
    and the NTR here was pretty weak, it just didnt click my berserk button...
    seeyou0 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 4:32 am) +3 points
    NO NO it just odd he dont even know most of them and he have sex with never saying how he met the other women in this one . random sex partner
    knightsect (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 2:16 pm) +2 points
    I dont think we have a tag like that yet.
    Mother2 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 9:01 pm) -6 points
    It was near the end but yeah it was type weak. But on another note

    C-C-C-C Combo breaker!
    m0nkeypill0w (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 6:53 pm) +7 points
    Atleast the art was good. It's all i'm really looking for in a NTR.
    qpopc (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 7:23 pm) +2 points
    but it is still too violent :
    raey1999 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 7:13 am) +6 points
    yes, i agree with you, buddy.. finally, the story of SAO's bad ending is publish, BUT! the story is really bad, i hate ntr without story and foreplay, beside, it doesn't follow the plot of the real one,, i can't feel the NTR sense there... it just a hardcore doujins..
    hunybunymuny (Wed Apr 17, 2013, 12:53 am) +2 points
    same here, I don't feel the NTR thing in the story.

    the story is only 'bout girls needs some fuck.
    Sanji05 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 5:54 am) +2 points
    Well, for me EVERY NTRis bad.
    Mizuho (Tue Apr 16, 2013, 3:04 am) +1 points
    A big part of it is that I just don't like (hate?) Sugou...
    Ryu007 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 8:11 am) +1 points
    Oh Asuna why?! Aww bad NTR but cool illustrations and lol is Kazuto gonna be sold like a whore in the end? I'm senseing femdom in SAO doujin future lolol
    ItzPeteyPablo (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 3:09 am) +1 points
    I think because its SAO. I dont hate it but honestly its overrated. These doujins I could care less for since SAO is weak. Sick and tired of fanboys/fangirls that the doujins are meh to me. I only read it because of the tags but this was weak. I was more interested in the end when he was tied up on last page. Im pissed it was not that.
    MMagister (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 3:51 pm) +1 points
    Agree i didn't feel that soul burnig out power of darknes
    jackz13 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 7:59 am)
    i'm probably in the minority here but i couldn't give a fuck about the story. i look at the artwork. seeing you guys so worked up over a fictional pornographical (pretty much any NTR) art work always makes me laugh.
    Lurker3173 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 10:23 pm)
    meh. i guess no one would make that ultimate bad end for SAO
    ZeroRequiemGX (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 11:19 pm)
    You know I was really planning to rage at this bastard but the moment I saw page 26 I was like, that you?
    That Troll face is Hazama's!
    moarsi (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 3:52 pm)
    It's because he had the power to change their memories and emotions. The light novel explains it well, and I think the anime did too.
    Diceking (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 1:12 pm) +13 points
    be careful my friends
    Sighing (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 1:41 pm) +8 points
    The title is pretty self-explanatory...
    Kaugummi (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 3:00 pm) +3 points
    I just decided against reading it. All those who like NTR enjoy it.
    Miroku74 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 4:25 pm) +2 points
    I shall call the Childhood Friend Brigade to help heal the injured brothers with *A-HEM!* 'comforting sessions'.
    Rhythmless (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 3:21 pm) +1 points
    miklymick5 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 2:28 pm) +1 points
    ikr that title makes me want to not read it but i will and i will regret it. Hope i make it back people.
    AssasinZAssasin (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 10:41 pm) +2 points
    Yeah, i mean anybody who is going to ignore not only the title, but the tags, and the front page...
    They probably disregarded their souls already.
    polarpwn (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 1:13 pm) -3 points
    NTR SAO is always good if only cuz there are way too much vanilla doujins out there already
    Diceking (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 1:17 pm) +1 points
    that may be true but im a big fan of SAO i know some NTR is nice but somehow i cant stand it with SAO
    Marcos OC (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 1:50 pm) -1 points
    true, its a nice change of peace.
    Miroku74 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 4:26 pm) -1 points
    I think I'd rather have my testicles smashed repeatedly with a ball peen hammer. It'd hurt LESS.
    anime_noob1002 (Thu Jul 11, 2013, 5:07 am) +1 points
    TBH when i first read this. i never watched SAO so it was honestly just a ahegao and never really paid attention to Kirito. Now that i finished the series. Im too afraid to see this............
    Rocketfist (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 4:12 pm) +1 points
    That won't be a problem if you have embraced it for a long time...
    MiStErRaGgY (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 4:53 pm)
    My eyes! My eyes!!!! I didn't read your warning in time my friend :(
    Dt512 (Sat Apr 13, 2013, 3:00 pm)
    He give it a amousphere at the end... GGO Kirito as a continuation meaby??
    Recent Comments
    Kyrodu (Thu Apr 10, 2014, 4:30 am) +1 points
    Why do I keep reading netorares? I honestly don't like them but I keep reading them... I'm more of a vanilla fan ;-;
    silverpotatoes (Tue Apr 8, 2014, 6:21 pm)
    Why are these comments so uptight? Come on people, I was expecting some funny reactions, instead you all have to act like college professors rather than just having some fun
    TotallyNotaFemale (Thu Oct 3, 2013, 6:33 pm) +1 points
    hmm..i don't really see this as NTR (not a good one anyway) since i didn't have my soul and heart crushed from reading it. there needs to be some resistance from main female lead until she finally gives in to her needs of being satisfied by giant cock other than that, it's ok i guess.
    hpemo420 (Wed Jun 26, 2013, 4:30 am) +1 points
    What will happen to kirito
    Jai1434 (Fri May 3, 2013, 7:30 pm) +1 points
    The person who made this should die in a hole be sold to someone the same way, i love the teisted shit but this is just depressing and i hate this,
    Slick Dick the Sick Prick (Fri May 3, 2013, 8:20 am) +1 points
    Great art. Weird writing, but I'm down.

    I especially love the whole "true face" portion.

    Imagine Kirito walking in and seeing his sister's and lover's faces sucking another dudes cock.
    Fuckin' priceless.
    ToshiroIreto (Tue Apr 23, 2013, 8:09 pm) +1 points
    i just love it so much... not the Hentai Part, just the Irony of it all.
    Lelouch6thBritannia (Sun Apr 21, 2013, 7:46 am)
    Very disappointing, D:

    Never knew what, 'Netorare' actually was & now I've seen a Plot-Line, I can't forget.

    Anyway, 3/5 for Art. 0/5 for Story.
    (Art would of gotten a 5/5, but I hate that, 'Synister_ Scientist'

    And, I also hate having to read an Anime which has, F*t people.

    ^ So disgusting.
    But anyway, I shouldn't be talking - I'm reading these to see the 'After-Storyline' of the Story.(Mainly due to wanting to see more of the Anime).

    Anyway, the Storyline in this Doujin was synical, so I'm giving it a 0/5. [ Anyway, your not the 1 who wrote it - So.. Thanks.. I guess. ]
    Shinigami15Fire (Sat Apr 20, 2013, 2:49 am) +2 points
    Oh, don't worry SAO-fans. Suguo is just playing this new game called Virtua Dream Converter by Sega it's still compatible with a NerveGear software device. Basically, he converted his dream to become a virtual reality. Therefore, he is king on His own little World. Or in otherwords, he's just tripping balls with shrooms. This guy will never have a harem! Even with all the money.
    Evnyofdeath (Wed Apr 17, 2013, 7:22 am) +1 points
    I have two things to say. The first is this isn't really NTR. This site needs a hypnosis or mind control tag. Secondly, why is it that half the comments on every manga tagged NTR is of people bitching about NTR? It's a fetish some people have. Everyone has at least one "deviant" sexual fetish. For some that is NTR. If you don't like it, and don't plan on reading it, then DON'T F*CKING COMMENT.
    Shinigami15Fire (Wed Apr 17, 2013, 5:37 am) +1 points
    Artwork is magnificent.
    Storyline is terrifying.

    Do I recommend it? No. Might ruined your childhood. But it's really your choice to read it or not.
    Senjou (Wed Apr 17, 2013, 4:30 am) +1 points
    CGrascal, thanks for the daily dose.
    fullmetalvenom (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 3:40 pm) +1 points
    always kinda conflicted with an NTR. I hate them in general, but the art style is really good
    ItsChipino (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 11:08 am) +1 points
    I didn't know Light Yagami wrote hentai.
    yuzuchan (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 9:45 am) +1 points
    Seriously, it wasn't that bad if you're only searching for a good hentai.
    I just don't care about SAO so I don't care if it was a bad end as well. Just fap to it gyus, stop complaining ...

    DUBST3P KITTY (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 6:59 am) +2 points
    Am I the ONLY one who loves NTR?
    bukkakkelover (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 4:01 am) +1 points
    no.. not suguha-chan..
    zeroxnight (Mon Apr 15, 2013, 2:41 am) +2 points
    This is just Suguo's delusional fantasy after kirito fucked him up so badly that his brain is full on hallucinating. He is in Prison being butt-raped, this is just his coping mechanism.
    Kyrodu (Thu Apr 10, 2014, 4:44 am) +1 points
    Thank you. Reading this helped me go to sleep at night
    Idontreallyknow (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 11:48 pm) +1 points
    Ugh, it looks like I became another causalty in this horrible war, avenge me, beat the NTR. Something I wasn't strong enough to do
    ryo55564 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 11:18 pm) +1 points
    “In brightest day, in blackest night, No Rape shall escape my sight Let those who worship NTR’s might, Beware my power… Vanilla Man’s light! “
    Mrhobbes343 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 9:10 pm) +1 points
    NTR is like like extream rape syndrome ERS
    soultenshi (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 6:42 pm) +1 points
    i hope chested die and go to hell
    Dick Cheney (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 5:32 pm) +1 points
    James Ikanov (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 5:03 pm) +1 points
    The only part of that I liked, was the double blowjob. Aside from that, this was not very good.
    TheAnonymous (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 3:17 pm) +1 points

    It's a bit messed up but something about a girl's mind being controlled to ditch her boyfriend and become a slave of his worst enemy is somehow appealing... D:
    Downvotetia (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 11:54 am) +1 points
    I here to wipe out the vanilla army due to the imbalance of vanilla and ntr I am the goddess of downvotes once I intervene all vanilla comments will become negative quickly.Only the goddess upvotetia can stop me and she is in agreement to much vanilla.
    Ryu007 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 8:05 am) +1 points
    Aw man this was bad. Oh Asuna why?! I think the title trolls us because everyone seem to gone to hell. Lol just in case please correct me but did it look like Kirito was gonna become a whore in the end. Is there gonna be a femdom SAO next? Spoiler perhaps? Sorry if mistaken lol.
    Chekchie (Tue Apr 16, 2013, 11:13 pm) +1 points
    Well if you take Kirito's avatar in the FPS game, it's almost futanari...
    Bojack2011 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 7:59 am) +1 points
    It is disappointing because I'm a huge fan of SAO
    zaberfang07 (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 7:45 am) +1 points
    BurningAngelXXX (Sun Apr 14, 2013, 6:40 am) +1 points
    I usually like ntr but this one i really disliked for some reason! or maybe im starting to dislike ntr! Vanilla here i come!
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