Pokemon Diamond and Pearl: A New Dawn (Complete.)

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Rosario Dawson said it best: "I'm disgusted, and repulsed, and...I can't look away..."

Very well written, funny, etc. Nice job, +rep/
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YAY!! UPDATES!!!!!!!!

And teh tentacle i wash waiting fors :)
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Very nice. I never thought this could be a turn on, but I have to admit I find them very arousing. XD
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Thanks for the kind words, everyone. I don't know when this story will be updated again, since my main problem is I hate the fact that every chapter repeats the past ones.

Dawn finds Pokemon < Seduces Pokemon < Sex < Capture (Sometimes) < Repeat.

It's just a chain of events that I can't seem to break away from. I wish I could figure out a way to make things a bit more refreshing, but after reading more Fanfiction.net reviews, a friend told me a certain line that made a lot of sense - "If it ain't broke, don't fix it."

People seem to like the little chain I have going on, so I really don't see that big of a reason to mix it up that much (excluding the vine thing I did for the hell of it.) If you guys have any ideas that you think would improve this story in any way, please let me know. The reason this story dies once in a while (or for a year in this case,) is mainly because I'm blank on ideas.
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Well, since you didn't have plot mapped out to begin with, I think the current method is fine. Maybe you could throw in a two or three-parter to mix things up. Maybe add in some references to the canon to give us a sense of progression.
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ZeroOBK wrote...
Maybe add in some references to the canon to give us a sense of progression.


I thought I did that once or twice? Maybe I read it wrong when I wrote it.
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Well, here are a few ideals ive thought up that could give the story some interest.

1: Ash and Brook find out about Dawns fetish, and she runs away from them (they follow shortl after.) Just as they catch up, Team Rocket kidnaps them, and they take her away somewhere. Jessie leaves to set the trap for the twerps, leaving James and Dawn alone. Suddenly, James reveals a sadistic side that even Jessie didnt know about.....

make it a two parter and have them rescue her chapter two, after a major confrontation with an out of the closet sadisticly evil james :P

2: Change it by having a human have sex with her

3: Do a chapter or two about her entering a contest and her promising a special "prize" to which ever of her pokemon wins.

Thats all I can come up with on teh spur of teh moment. #1 was completely random starting out FYI.
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Josun Tomoro wrote...
Well, here are a few ideals ive thought up that could give the story some interest.

1: Ash and Brook find out about Dawns fetish, and she runs away from them (they follow shortl after.) Just as they catch up, Team Rocket kidnaps them, and they take her away somewhere. Jessie leaves to set the trap for the twerps, leaving James and Dawn alone. Suddenly, James reveals a sadistic side that even Jessie didnt know about.....

make it a two parter and have them rescue her chapter two, after a major confrontation with an out of the closet sadisticly evil james :P

2: Change it by having a human have sex with her

3: Do a chapter or two about her entering a contest and her promising a special "prize" to which ever of her pokemon wins.

Thats all I can come up with on teh spur of teh moment. #1 was completely random starting out FYI.

I seriously appreciate the suggestions. I like all input I get, and appreciate any comments, whether they're positive or negative. However, I do have some thoughts about your suggestions.

No offense intended.

1. Hell no. James and Dawn? Hell no. I love Team Rocket in the anime just because they're awesome, but James and anyone besides Jessie just doesn't work. At all. That, and the idea's just kind of ... Meh. I don't like it much. I don't like human interaction in this, which leads to my answer for #2:

2. This one's a BIG no. I have told people this multiple times from story reviews, but this is the first time I'll say it here - I won't change the plot. It's staying Pokeality.

3. This is actually not a bad idea, I'll give that one some thought. Thanks for that one.
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Hey, no prob :) glad an ideal worked, and I dont really care if ya dont use any of my ideals. Most authors dont xD

I have an unusual problem that most stories i read I get a bunch of my own ideals that could possibly make the story interesting.

I am usually stupid enough to send those ideals to the author :P

And as I said, the james one was random as i was thinking up 2 and 3.
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Josun Tomoro wrote...
I have an unusual problem that most stories i read I get a bunch of my own ideals that could possibly make the story interesting.

I am usually stupid enough to send those ideals to the author :P


So wait ... Are you saying the story isn't interesting to begin with, or am I reading that wrong? o.o Sending ideas isn't stupid at all. I just didn't care for them and don't really want to use them.
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Your story ish very interesting, I just have an overactive imagination, so whenever im reading something my mind tends to come up with ways to make it more interesting, dramatic, funny, etc.

In my case sending ideals is usually stupid, as i 9/10 never get a response back :P and usually the times I do its "let me write the story" or some varient of it.
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In the next chapter, Dawn's Buneary is going to evolve into Lopunny. I think that would make the perfect thing for the lesbian chapter everyone wants, and it gives me yet another chance to do some yuri'ing. None of this story will go on my blog, so the only place you'll find it is here or Fanfiction.net.

Forum Image: http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh294/__Phantasmagoria__/PKMN/lopunny2.gif

Lopunny.

Only thing I HATE about this story is that it labels me as a furry when I'm not one. Oh well, what are ya gonna do.
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wow i just read all of this and use quite a lot of handkerchiefs that was epic i didn't mind the beginning to much is there any way you could compiles this all into a word file and upload it? i would love to read it on the road that was extremely erotic keep it up and i'm serious about the upload i would really like it + rep for this 5*'s.

Edit: err i would give rep but i have no idea how xP i'm new to fakku but loving every minute of it
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xoulz wrote...
wow i just read all of this and use quite a lot of handkerchiefs that was epic i didn't mind the beginning to much is there any way you could compiles this all into a word file and upload it? i would love to read it on the road that was extremely erotic keep it up and i'm serious about the upload i would really like it + rep for this 5*'s.

Edit: err i would give rep but i have no idea how xP i'm new to fakku but loving every minute of it


Thanks for the compliments, and as for rep, there should be a + or - option near my name where it says "Reputation."
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ok ur repped :P are you gonna upload in the future? i like you're writing it's good
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So yeah, new chapter. This doesn't have much to do with the overall story besides some quick dialogue in the beginning, but I needed something to do this morning so here you go. The Lopunny chapter is nowhere near done.

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Chapter 17: Misty's Training Session

Cerulean City – For a city, it wasn’t that big. It was one of the areas in the Kanto region where Pokemon trainers would go to find the Cerulean Gym – The place to get the Cascade badge.

“Jeez Misty, you really can’t keep up a Gym that well, can you?”

Misty’s three sisters had once again showed up to see how Misty had been keeping the Gym since she was left in charge, and took no time in insulting her.

“I know exactly what I’m doing!” Misty yelled. The four girls had been touring the Gym so they could see what the place was like since they’d gone. The pool was always clean, the floors were spotless, and the place was overall nice to be in. “It’s a Pokemon Gym, not a beauty parlor!”

“So hostile, little sister …” Daisy said. “We just needed to make sure everything’s fine before we head to Twinleaf town tonight.” Lily, Violet, and Daisy (or the “sensational sisters” as they were known as,) were off touring the world or some other stupid thing Misty never bothered to remember. “I have no idea why we’re going to such a tiny town when Sinnoh has such huge cities. I mean, it doesn’t even have a mall!”

“You three never take anything seriously.” Misty said. “Life is not a shopping spree!” Her sisters gasped as if she’d just swear at them. Misty was the “runt” of the girls (or so she’d been called all her life,) so her sisters were used to the finer things in life – Namely, stuff - Lots and lots of stuff.

“You’d have better taste if you hadn’t spent those years walking around with your little boyfriend and his Pikachu.” Violet said. “You’d have thought seeing everything would have made you a little more refined.”

“We actually had stuff to do!” Misty said, angry yet again. “Ash actually had goals, unlike you three!” Ash’s life was dedicated to getting Kanto’s eight Gym badges and fighting in the Pokemon League – A goal which he accomplished, and quite impressively if Misty had her say. “All you three care about is getting guys to throw themselves and their wallets at you!”

“We’re not that shallow.” Lily said.

“We’re not?” Violet looked at her. Lily glared at her, quickly shutting her up.

“Our bus to the airport should be outside, so we’ll leave you little sis.” Daisy said as the four of them headed for the Gym doors. “Make us proud, okay?” Misty nodded like she always did, watching the three girls step onto a rather large bus and disappear from sight.

“Okay, that’s finally taken care of …” Misty muttered as she made her way back into the pool room. She grabbed a small blue cell phone from the bleachers. “I hope he picks up this time …”

“Hey, Misty!” She called Ash who was still traveling in the Sinnoh region. At Brock’s suggestion, he’d got a cell phone so he wouldn’t have to worry about keeping in touch with anyone since Pokemon Centers (and video phones) weren’t everywhere whenever he needed one. “It’s been a while.” Ash said.

“Yeah, I’ve missed you.” Misty replied, her eyes lighting up at the sound of the boy’s voice. “How’s Pikachu?” That didn’t take to long to get an answer, hearing a “Pika!” shortly after asking. “I guess he’s fine.”

“Yeah, we’re all- Oh, hang on.” Ash paused for a moment before returning. “Dawn wants to take Pikachu out somewhere.” Dawn was the girl that was traveling with Ash and Brock while they went through Sinnoh, but that wasn’t the weird thing – She wanted to take Pikachu away? This sounds kinda like …

“Hey Ash, could I talk to her?” Misty asked, hoping she didn’t sound too suspicious.

“Sure, hang on a second …” Ash said. It was on a moment of silence before a female’s voice came to the phone.

“Hello?” Dawn had the phone in one hand, with Pikachu in her other arm. “This is Misty, right?”

“Yeah, I have a quick question to ask ya …” Misty asked, halfway hoping her suspicions were wrong. “You’re taking Pikachu out … Alone …”

“Yeah, it’s exactly what you think.” Dawn said. Misty gasped, shocked to hear that someone else did that same deed with Ash’s electric mouse.

“So … You do it, too …” Misty asked, stammering a little. Dawn gasped, sounding surprised.

“You and Pikachu have …” Dawn started before Misty cut her off.

“Yeah, back when we were in Kanto – Often, I might add.” Misty replied. “I never thought that he’d try it with another girl, though. Good luck kid, you’re gonna need it.” And with that, Misty closed her phone and ended the call. She’d call Ash back later anyway. “That little Pokemon, I swear …” Misty muttered as she sat on the bleachers. “I can remember it now that I think about it …”

The memory was apparently a very good one, as shortly after it came to mind, Misty’s right hand slowly made its way between her legs, beginning to rub through her jean shorts.

“I can’t remember the last time I wore this …” Misty said, looking down at herself. She had on her old red suspenders with a yellow top, and the blue jean shorts that the suspenders were connected to – The clothing she wore when she traveled with Ash. She liked to alternate between them and her new clothing – It was mostly for show, anyway.

Her right hand made its way into her shorts, rubbing at the soft material of her white panties. The feeling of the cloth against her skin caused her to get even wetter than what she already was – And she was already dripping a bit. A soft moan escaped her lips as she continued pleasuring herself, thinking of the various acts she’d done back when she traveled – All of which Ash had no idea about. It was taboo, it was dirty – But damn did it feel good.

Pikachu, Charizard, and once even Pidgeotto (she couldn’t remember why in the world she went that far,) Ash’s Pokemon loved Misty in more ways than one. She wondered if Dawn had limited herself to only Pikachu or if she’d tried out Ash’s other Pokemon. It was difficult for Misty since the only Pokemon she had that was even remotely capable of such a thing was … Well, Psyduck – And there’s no way in hell that’s happening.

Back when she had challenged Ash at a battle when they first came to Cerulean, he tried to send out Pikachu, and the mouse refused. Ash thought it was just because Misty was his friend – The boy had no idea. That was one of Pikachu’s reasons, yes, but there were more than just that. Misty snickered at the memory and how stupid Ash used to be. But those days were behind them – She’d eventually confessed to him, and the two were now a couple. She wondered if he’d ever told Brock, though. Not like it mattered.

Thankfully, working at the Gym also meant working with the Gym’s Pokemon, and her sisters got her a very nice gift for her last birthday – A Golduck. Her Psyduck still hadn’t evolved, and she was beginning to wonder if the little duck ever would – But now she didn’t have to worry. Fortunately for her (and unknown to her sisters,) Golduck was powerful in more ways than one – The Pocket Monster was very, very well endowed. Thinking about Pikachu did turn her on, and she was completely alone … Not a bad idea to kill some time.

Making her way into her bedroom, she locked the door and tossed a Poke Ball to the floor, the ball returning to her palm as soon as the blue creature appeared. She always locked the door for some reason (even though she had no real reason to, since she always knew when someone entered the Gym.) Golduck smiled as it – Well, he – looked at the room he was released in; he knew exactly why he was summoned. Misty was very good to him – Not only did he get to battle often against trainers who wanted the Gym’s badge, but no matter whether he won or lost, Misty would always reward him for trying his best.

“Golduck, you wanna train a bit?” Misty asked, smirking. Golduck nodded, watching as his trainer removed her clothing, standing in just a pair of panties. “You look more than ready.” Misty said, standing in front of Golduck and moving down to her knees, wrapping her fingers around the blue duck’s rather large dick and pumping her hand back and forth. Golduck made a quiet pleasured sound as Misty sped up her hand, leaning in closer and taking her Pokemon’s dick into her mouth, slowly bobbing her head.

Misty felt Golduck’s flipper-like hand move down to rest on her head as she kept moving back and forth, feeling the Pokemon getting even bigger in her mouth. She pulled away slowly, pumping her hand again as she swirled her tongue around the tip, only taking the head into her mouth as she gave it a few rough sucks. Golduck’s cock began to throb in her hand – He was ready for more. Misty continued pumping her hand slowly, smiling as she saw pre-cum begin to drip from the tip, quickly swirling her tongue around to lick it up, causing Golduck to begin throbbing much harder.

“Okay then Golduck, I won’t keep you waiting anymore.” Misty stood, walking over to the bed and pushing her panties down, tossing them aside as she lay down. She smiled as Golduck got on as well, positioning over her and slowly sliding his throbbing dick inside of her soaking wet cunt - A soft moan came from her almost instantly.

Golduck took this sound as approval, beginning to slowly thrust in and out of his trainer. Misty’s moaning became louder as he moved, her hands moving to grip the sheets under her. Seeing this, Golduck began to move faster, his dick sliding in smoothly as his speed increased – Being a water-type Pokemon made you slick everywhere.

“Golduck … You’re so big …!” Misty moans became louder as Golduck began to speed up even more, pressing his flippers onto the bed for balance. “Harder …!” Misty said, gripping the sheets even tighter. Golduck’s speed turned into forceful thrusts, slamming inside of the girl, going as deep as he could manage without hurting her. Misty’s screams of pleasure told him he was doing good, this only making him go into her harder. “Golduck …!” Misty yelled in pleasure, Golduck still slamming into her every second. “Faster, please! I’m gonna cum!” Hearing this, Golduck began to slide inside and out of her much faster than before, feeling her walls begin to tighten around him. This increased his pleasure as well, making him slam inside as he continued speeding up.

Misty’s legs slowly wrapped around the Pokemon’s waist as he continued thrusting into her – She couldn’t speak anymore, only moan as she felt Golduck’s dick slamming into her harder by the second. Her walls had tightened around him as much as she could manage – The pleasure was getting too intense now. It wouldn’t be long before …

“Golduck, I’m cumming!” Misty screamed as she felt herself climax on Golduck’s dick, more screaming coming from her as she did so. This set the Pokemon off as well, Golduck giving her one final hard thrust as streams of his warm cum shot off inside of her. The two didn’t move for a moment, both of them panting heavily as Golduck pulled out of her, his cum dripping from her as he did so. It didn’t take Misty long to sit up, leaning in and licking the warm cum from Golduck’s still throbbing cock, pumping her hand as fast as she could, making more of it shoot onto her face. She looked up at her Pokemon, who was still panting softly. “You have anything left, Golduck?”

The Pokemon nodded, watching as Misty moved back in front of him, now on her hands and knees. Golduck grabbed onto her sides with his flippers, slowly moving close and sliding inside of her still soaking cunt from behind, taking no time in going faster than normal. Misty’s soft moans caused him to speed up more, slamming inside as he felt her tighten up. This was usually just what the two did when Misty hadn’t had enough after their first session – It usually didn’t take her long to get off the second time.

“Golduck … Pull out, okay?” Misty said, Golduck slowly making his way out as Misty’s cunt loosened up. “I want to try something new today, okay? Move up a little bit.” Looking at her, Golduck knew exactly what she wanted. Thankfully, his shaft was so slick already that he didn’t need to worry much about lubrication - Cum still on the head and the smoothness of his cock made it very easy for him to slowly slide into Misty’s asshole. Misty screamed at this, much louder than Golduck had ever heard. “I’m okay … P-Please, don’t stop …” Misty said quietly. Golduck nodded, grabbing her sides again and thrusting slowly into her. Her ass was much tighter than her pussy, but Golduck wasn’t complaining – This only made him move slightly faster with every thrust.

After some smooth thrusts, Golduck’s speed eventually got much faster, Misty screaming in pleasure as she clutched the sheets under her, almost to the point of grabbing the mattress. She managed to say the Pokemon’s name through her moans, telling him to either speed up or go deeper. Her slit was still dripping wet, Misty feeling herself climax a few times from the extreme pleasure.

“Golduck, I’m not gonna last much longer …” Misty said as Golduck thrust into her as quickly as he could. “Cum in my ass …” She moaned, moving in rhythm with the Pokemon’s thrusts. Golduck nodded, continuing his fast thrusts and beginning to leak pre-cum into Misty’s asshole. Her constant moaning and screaming was just making him approach climax even faster, eventually making one last, deep thrust into her. His cock throbbed hard as he shot stream after stream of hot cum into the girl’s asshole, pulling out and spraying it down her ass and onto her slit. He quickly moved back into Misty’s pussy, slamming away until she let out one last scream, cumming much harder than she had before. “I’m cumming! I’m cumming!” Misty yelled as she collapsed onto the bed, feeling herself climax multiple times. She smiled as Golduck lay next to her, looking at her.

After the two recovered, Misty sat up and recalled the duck to his Poke Ball. She got dressed and placed to ball back onto her belt loop as she unlocked the room door, walking down a very large hallway. For her first time trying anal, it was much, much better than she had expected.

“I’ll have to try that again.” Misty thought out loud as she made her way into the pool room. “I guess I’ll-” She paused, seeing a young boy and an Ivysaur standing in front of her, their jaws dropped in shock.

“I’ll … I’ll just come back later."
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Haha, already told you, but I loved the chapter. Pokemon and humans having sex is just plain hot. XD
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awesome! ^_^ +rep for you
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Very nice chapter Joe-kun. +rep, can't wait for the rest of the seies for however long it may be.

edit: an idea popped into my head as a suggestion after I made the post, so I justed edited it. If you want to use it cool if not that's fine too. Anyway so far you have had pickachu have fun with all the main heroines of the pokemon series ( i.e. Misty, May, and Dawn ). My idea is to have a Group session between them and pickachu ( and other pokemon if you feel the need ). As i said just a suggestion that pooped into my head.
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HIM520 wrote...
Very nice chapter Joe-kun. +rep, can't wait for the rest of the seies for however long it may be.

edit: an idea popped into my head as a suggestion after I made the post, so I justed edited it. If you want to use it cool if not that's fine too. Anyway so far you have had pickachu have fun with all the main heroines of the pokemon series ( i.e. Misty, May, and Dawn ). My idea is to have a Group session between them and pickachu ( and other pokemon if you feel the need ). As i said just a suggestion that pooped into my head.


PIKACHU. P-I-K-A.

Sorry, I get SO MANY TYPOS like that in FF.net reviews and I'm kind of required to correct them anymore. Either way, nice idea. I'll think 'bout it. Thanks.

... Or maybe you weren't misspelling it and were trying to be funny. >.> Still.

Thanks for the rep too. :D
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