Eru Shindo - One-Top Girl

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    Red Vodka on August 2, 2011
    Comments on Eru Shindo - One-Top Girl
    Top Comments
    Black*star16 (Tue Aug 2, 2011, 6:47 am) +23 points
    ...THIS IS NOT MINE BREAK!!!!....she was broken (in a way) from the beginning.
    Ramzen Zeners (Tue Aug 2, 2011, 11:53 am) +12 points
    Definitely, I'll be supporting your comment.. I'm going to defend your comment even if it cost my reputation.
    ilikeitrough (Tue Aug 2, 2011, 4:22 pm) +5 points
    I think it is a mind break...
    Having a fetish doesn't mean you're broken.
    ilikeitrough (Wed Aug 3, 2011, 4:56 am) +5 points
    I understand everything else but the masturbating part...
    What's so "broken" about smelling something while masturbating?
    In lots of hentai there's girls smelling guys' shirts while masturbating. And there's guys smelling girls' panties while masturbating.

    What's wrong with her masturbating while smelling things?
    Vividrops (Sun Aug 12, 2012, 8:00 pm) +2 points
    It's confusing because the boys are jealous of her soccer skills, so they use her fetish agaist her and try to somehow diminish her sucess on the account that she's a pervert.They're just jealous bastards.

    She is a pervert, she's a great soccer player. She's awesome! Haters gonna hate!
    Thalsian (Tue Aug 2, 2011, 9:08 pm) +2 points
    She masturbated with their clothing before they even touched her, and she willingly licked his armpit. She got into it just by looking at them. She enjoyed it the second they started. Calling this a mindbreak is beyond insane.
    lloiddy01 (Wed Aug 3, 2011, 5:55 am) +3 points
    Is it just me that find short haired gals more exciting? ^_^
    Rei0 (Mon Oct 17, 2011, 4:10 pm) +2 points
    yes yes they are a lot more fun my friend.
    dasfish (Wed Feb 1, 2012, 1:58 am) +1 points
    not that i dissgree. but i herd a snap sound at about pg 7 but thats me
    Boristheblade01 (Mon Jul 8, 2013, 8:03 pm) +1 points
    I don't think she was broken she was more addicted to the scent of men, since she is a tomboy and being in a all men's school it has most likely men only changing rooms so the smell would become notorious to her...
    DeathPlox (Tue Aug 2, 2011, 4:47 am) +6 points
    Lol on page 29 it looks like their dicks are worms. Not hard at all. Especially that one in the bottom left looking like its doing like its doin loops lol.
    freezero (Tue Aug 2, 2011, 9:23 am) +3 points
    I was about to check the tag to see if their was "tentacle" there XD
    Recent Comments
    Robobomb5000 (Wed Dec 4, 2013, 11:51 am) +1 points
    Those girls in the last page know to much rape them at all costs!
    JijoSohma (Thu May 2, 2013, 3:37 am) +1 points
    I like to think of it as progression of a fetish. She was already at a state of scent perversion it just escalated to the only level it could. But if we're really going to take a look in this girl's head, the scent and memory parts of the brain are right next to each other. So what we could gather from that tidbit is that this "sweat fetish" could have been around since childhood. Or if when she was in Brazil she became attracted to someone with over active sweat glands and the smell just reminds her of him. Needless to say, I fapped to this crazy hard.
    negika (Sun Dec 16, 2012, 2:35 am) +1 points
    Hahahaha. I like her face ^^ nice job !
    Kurihara13 (Mon Nov 26, 2012, 10:21 pm) +1 points
    Well...That was...something. As one that can't smell anything, I think this odor fetishist girl is going to become an obsession for a little bit.
    fruitfly_123 (Mon Jul 9, 2012, 7:06 pm) +1 points
    Death of vanilla :(
    I mean why introduce a love story if its going to end like this D:
    Noopklu (Tue Jun 12, 2012, 8:27 pm) +1 points
    I gonna have to say this is netorare becouse for some reason I feel really jelouse, I wouldn't want a bunch of guys turning the girl I love into a whore x)
    Regal_Wrath (Thu Jun 7, 2012, 5:29 am) +1 points
    I was a member of my school's soccer team, and I'd be pretty sad if they did something like this. Definitely wouldn't join in. I fapped to it, but it was still saddening to see soccer players depicted in such a way. No happy ending with sad fapping; just a big let down halfway through the sex scene when you realize you can't fap to it anymore because all of the dicks have turned into worms.
    PandaLove (Sun May 27, 2012, 10:39 am) +1 points
    you should make a second one, i feel so bad for nagajima though >.
    anybody (Thu Apr 26, 2012, 4:41 pm) +1 points
    you got to have reputation before your can lose it... burn.
    inchescm2 (Tue Mar 20, 2012, 8:28 pm) +1 points
    Is it wierd that I get turned on by the same thing she dose???
    Algernon (Tue Mar 6, 2012, 1:33 am) +1 points
    I think it's a mind break because she may have started with just a fetish for odors but she ended with a full on need of dick lol thier is definitely a snap along the way when she is screening I love dicks
    rinster (Sun Feb 26, 2012, 11:44 pm) +1 points
    damn there is a lot of sloppy seconds going on
    guiltymouse (Fri Jan 20, 2012, 3:53 am) +1 points
    Idk why but she reminds me of Sakura from street fighter o.O
    Tru3Ph03niX (Wed Jan 18, 2012, 7:33 pm) +1 points
    Kinda messed up but what Da Hootch says goes so BANZAI!!
    moonflapper (Fri Dec 23, 2011, 3:27 am) +1 points
    Seeing the pictures before reading it made me think rape... Now I see why I'm wrong...
    The lopakiss cat (Sat Nov 26, 2011, 3:48 am) +1 points
    wow... it isn't mind break, well not a full mind break.
    what do you call a half mind break?
    Zeroz (Fri Nov 18, 2011, 9:35 pm) +1 points
    Fapped then laughed.
    Normally the smelling thing would turn me off but
    they really pulled it off here.
    PyroCrusader (Mon Nov 14, 2011, 10:28 am) +1 points
    e____e what da fawk...?
    dfly120 (Fri Nov 11, 2011, 8:22 pm) +1 points
    she is smelling theres sweaty clothes instant turn off.
    vampyz3 (Wed Nov 9, 2011, 7:19 pm) +1 points
    Uh-uh. no way. that sucked cock.
    Pedobear234 (Tue Nov 8, 2011, 11:01 pm) +2 points
    Looks like our protagonist

    *puts on shades* just got analyzed
    dailymotion9001 (Mon Nov 7, 2011, 11:18 am)
    Kindof worried that this isn't considered "rape"... it really should be, on multiple accounts.
    audiphile (Sun Oct 30, 2011, 9:52 pm) +1 points
    So there's a setup for a subsequent chapter, I wonder if that ever happened...
    blackflameviper (Tue Oct 18, 2011, 7:22 pm) +1 points
    there should be stinky, slimy, and sex derpface in the tags :D
    Fakkuza (Tue Oct 18, 2011, 12:44 am) +1 points
    LAMP_213 (Sun Oct 2, 2011, 2:36 am) +1 points
    Where's the sweaty sex tag.
    Animefreak0 (Thu Sep 15, 2011, 10:38 pm) +1 points
    this was.... amazing
    GREW89 (Wed Aug 24, 2011, 11:39 am) +1 points
    BOAH ShindoL hit it again! Awesome stuff!
    Only the poor guy who liked her...
    Indamo (Mon Aug 15, 2011, 10:18 am) +1 points
    Odor blocker it's so powerfull it can turn off Fakku! But then no one can fap, so it makes another Fakku. DOUBLE FAKKU POOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!
    tentacleman (Tue Aug 9, 2011, 7:14 am) +1 points
    lol i was reading another manga and just so happened to click this from the related manga corner. the second i saw her i was like oh god please let this be vanilla and awesome 'cause she is sooooo hot X)!!!!!!course i check the tags afterwards to be dissapointed but then i get my hopes up just a little since theres no force tag and i thought it could be a threesome. damned my naiveness but its fine. since im a sucker for short hair and shes into it
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