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"Not so fast! I activate my Spell Card!"
Komomo is very cute. I think she'll get another boyfriend very fast, this wont ruin her life. On the other hand it would be much worse if he didn't choose Mitsuki. The ending isn't so bad.
its a decent ending..ive seen better but the way it started at least mitsuki didn't kill herself and at least he had the balls to tell komomo the truth instead of letting her find out another way i think with something like this they could of ended it better maybe go a couple years in the future and their getting married or are married its just hmmm... its hard to tell with how this story kinda flipped flopped id give it a solid 3 out of 5 not super great but the "nice"(and i use that word VERY lightly) at least kept it from being banished to the pile of crap thats lucky if someone decides to read it out of bored interest
"Not so fast! I activate my Spell Card!"
Komomo is very cute. I think she'll get another boyfriend very fast, this wont ruin her life. On the other hand it would be much worse if he didn't choose Mitsuki. The ending isn't so bad.