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on February 7, 2012
“After another discontinued series, Aoki’s editor asks the disappointed mangaka to pump some sex and oomph into her manga. For that, he calls his friend, who’s an expert in that field to give her some pointers." -Fueta Kishi
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 8:12 pm)
The woman and the art is beautiful and really sexy. . . but for some reason I couldn't enjoy it.
I think it was mostly because of that guy with huge honking nose and arrogant attitude. Made me wanna punch him in the fucking face.
Now I just feel silly. . .
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 10:36 pm)
i didn't mind the guy at all the part that i cared about was the ending. it just ruined it for me.
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 9:13 pm)
Sorry man, I can't agree. Even if the guy was a prick, this wasn't NTR and that artwork was too sexy to not enjoy.
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 8:24 pm)
totally agree. Aoki deserves only the best most passionate vanilla sex scenes. this really put me off. Leave that kinda shit for Iwase. (hint hint to all my dojin creators out there)
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 11:03 pm)
Have to agree. Besides everyone would enjoy Iwase's pride taking some damage. Feel sorry for Aoki.
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 9:32 pm)
Hell no. This was awesome.
(Thu Feb 9, 2012, 8:00 pm)
I couldn't enjoy it because I kept thinking about red solo cups
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 5:33 am)
ditto that thought
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 12:40 am)
I can agree to that and the ending thing too
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 6:54 am)
Thanks for that comment, me being a fan of Fueta's work, I'm quick to enjoy the sex in his works, but after seeing your thought and everyone else's, I guess I should stick to Fueta's past vanilla works till the next Fukuyama-san update.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 12:43 pm)
At first, I didn't like the guy, but then i didn't care too much, but the end killed my boner
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 4:53 pm)
Really? I liked it alot and It kinda seemed like a vanilla till the end lol.
(Tue Feb 19, 2013, 4:53 am)
There is no way Sasaki would approve that shit, thats what killed this for me.
(Sun Sep 30, 2012, 6:44 am)
If it was Takagi it would have been better.
(Tue Sep 11, 2012, 2:00 pm)
dammit why did the last scene cut off? I was half hard then the gang bang started and I was a rock!
(Thu Jun 21, 2012, 9:46 am)
(Tue Mar 6, 2012, 7:49 pm)
The end made me want to kill myself.
(Mon Feb 27, 2012, 11:21 pm)
Although I'm always wary of fapping to doujins based on series I actually read and enjoy (like Bakuman), I am glad that I at least looked at this one; if only because the Editor in Chief's comment was rather hilarious. Plus Fueta Kishi is one of the Gods of Hentai.
(Sat Feb 25, 2012, 10:45 am)
I hereby bestow the rating 8/10 upon this doujin
(Wed Feb 15, 2012, 12:00 pm)
Bakuman has an excellent story and a high degree of character development. In Fueta Kishi's derivitive work, "Aoman" the author chose to ignore both characters and story. In "Aoman", he offers a weak story with characters consistently acting completely "out of character."
Neither the "story line" nor Aoki's reactions in it were believable. No editor would pimp for an author, especially THIS character, nor Aoki have accepted the pimping. No complaints on the art, but the supposed tie to Bakuman did not materialize. Don't most derivities use characters from the manga - else why bother to use it?
You can probably tell, but I didn't like this at all. The art was ok, but the rest was just crap.
- Klutzybear: I think the reason you didn't enjoy it is that none of the characters - especially Aoki - were doing things that would be consistent with those characters. Icky feeling, eh?
(Thu Feb 9, 2012, 6:32 am)
nice ass !!!
(Thu Feb 9, 2012, 3:35 am)
I can't spoil Aoki's innocence with this smut KEEP AOKI OUT OF YOUR DOUJINSHI...vanilla only :D
(Thu Feb 9, 2012, 1:20 am)
I liked the Gendo face the editor in chief had.
(Thu Feb 9, 2012, 12:08 am)
IS IT TRUE?! Page 16, was there really a facial in Bastard? I love the shit outa that OVA. Too bad the manga was never fully published in English.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 10:01 pm)
Group doesn't typically bother me... Nor does "sex for seemingly absurd reasons" for that matter. But the whole sex slave mentality doesn't do it for me... So to speak. I'd have to say this one is lacking severely.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 3:30 pm)
this one sucked
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 12:43 pm)
Every story I have read that had the word 'lewd' ended wierdly. Coincidence this one does too? I think not.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 7:28 am)
Why you silly asian man read hen-tie? go fuck under age girl
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 6:47 am)
Why does it feel like NTR???... Damn...
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 6:26 am)
As long as it's Fueta Kishi, its a-ok.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 5:33 am)
what people do to get ahead in the manga industry *shakes head*
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 4:37 am)
That was awesome....i just came in buckets!!! Yuri-tan!!!
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 2:59 am)
All i got from this is i would be great at makeing hentai
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 1:25 am)
am i the only one who thought of spongebob when i heard big bubble butt
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 12:51 am)
This was great...All it needs is a better looking guy(or maybe it was just the damn nose) and of course, a different ending...Or just make it Vanilla. That's solve everything.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 12:26 am)
....believe it or not there are lots of females who do Hentai Manga, though I'm not sure how active they are in real life by comparison, lol.
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 11:16 pm)
Guy should have been hotter...
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 10:12 pm)
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 10:09 pm)
Having a "I'm a total cum whore now and a pornstar!" as a ending is such a cliche'd thing in hentai doujins and makes the entire thing lazy.
However, I love the art d'so I'll let this one slide.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 7:20 am)
No, it's a "I'm a total cum whore now and an H-mangaka!" ending. Not cliche at all.
(Wed Feb 8, 2012, 8:11 pm)
I was generalizing, but nearly the same thing.
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 9:43 pm)
Dude the ending killed my boner!
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 9:03 pm)
That ending made no sense. The manipulative jackass was going all semi-vanilla on her and making her an honest woman...and then gangbang with random guys and she's a total slut.
...Whatever. Aside from the last page the rest is cohesive and entertaining.
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 8:57 pm)
NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
(Tue Feb 7, 2012, 8:51 pm)
I could literally feel her softness body with her amazing paizuri scenes and just simply her amazing lewd breasts in this chapter. xD Damn, I couldn't help but fall in love with her cute/sexy facial expressions as a mangaka, she has the motivation and natural skill to always improve! lol I guess she pumped some sex in her manga and her real sex life, this is how all FAKKU Artists get their inspiration from! Team Vanilla thanks for this translation...