[Locked] ~Fakku Girl's Club~ (V3)
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
Revelation wrote...
zis is mostly for a school thing, somebody snooped through my journals then talked to the poetry team people at school and now I guess I'm on the team... They hunted me down...I do have a little something I've written but I don't know if I like it.
[color=#ff69b4]Oh Revy! I don't know if you saw or not but keep a eye on this over the next few days for your badges.
http://katsucha.minus.com/mbxiTiufXuLTz8
Katsu-chan had Mills and Saber post this.
Nyaa nyaa~
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Misaki_Chi
Fakku Nurse
Revelation wrote...
zis is mostly for a school thing, somebody snooped through my journals then talked to the poetry team people at school and now I guess I'm on the team... They hunted me down...I do have a little something I've written but I don't know if I like it.
Yay to hunting! Post it and then we'll tear it to shreads we can help critique it for you if possilbe (^^)
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
Misaki_Chi wrote...
Revelation wrote...
zis is mostly for a school thing, somebody snooped through my journals then talked to the poetry team people at school and now I guess I'm on the team... They hunted me down...I do have a little something I've written but I don't know if I like it.
Yay to hunting! Post it and then we'll tear it to shreads we can help critique it for you if possilbe (^^)
[color=#ff69b4]LOL. Misa XD
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
[color=#ff69b4]I was never really good at writing... baka Dyslexic... ._.
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
Aramos wrote...
Now im gonna hit the bed..gnite.[color=#ff69b4]Night night Aramos ^^
Nyaa nyaa~
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Revelation
Defender of DFC
Misaki_Chi wrote...
Revelation wrote...
zis is mostly for a school thing, somebody snooped through my journals then talked to the poetry team people at school and now I guess I'm on the team... They hunted me down...I do have a little something I've written but I don't know if I like it.
Yay to hunting! Post it and then we'll tear it to shreads we can help critique it for you if possilbe (^^)
sigh... okay
Death,
That which finally ends it all
That which makes people cry
That which separates the strong from the weak, the powerful from the powerless
Death happens to all of us
Those whose lives are taken from them when they are in their prime youth
Those that have lived they're lives in full, who have reached their end
Then there are those who have decided to stop living, those who have lost all hope
I can only hold on to this feeling of hope that one day my dreams and wishes will come true
But until then, I cannot know what it is truly like to live
Rough Draft, dont be too harsh, I plan on changing things
EDIT: Be gentle, its my first draft...
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
[color=#ff69b4]My hair just ate my hair tie for a minute ._.
Also, not bad Rev ^^
Also, not bad Rev ^^
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Misaki_Chi
Fakku Nurse
Revelation wrote...
Misaki_Chi wrote...
Revelation wrote...
zis is mostly for a school thing, somebody snooped through my journals then talked to the poetry team people at school and now I guess I'm on the team... They hunted me down...I do have a little something I've written but I don't know if I like it.
Yay to hunting! Post it and then we'll tear it to shreads we can help critique it for you if possilbe (^^)
sigh... okay
Death,
That which finally ends it all
That which makes people cry
That which separates the strong from the weak, the powerful from the powerless
Death happens to all of us
Those whose lives are taken from them when they are in their prime youth
Those that have lived they're lives in full, who have reached their end
Then there are those who have decided to stop living, those who have lost all hope
I can only hold on to this feeling of hope that one day my dreams and wishes will come true
But until then, I cannot know what it is truly like to live
Rough Draft, dont be too harsh, I plan on changing things
It's pretty good! I would say work on the end a little bit more, but you have a good base to work off of in my opinion (^^)
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Misaki_Chi
Fakku Nurse
Revelation wrote...
sleep time, see ya guys tomorrow and thanks for ze feedbackNight Revy, can't wait to see the finished project (you have no choice but to show it now bwahahahaha!!)
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
Revelation wrote...
sleep time, see ya guys tomorrow and thanks for ze feedback[color=#ff69b4]Night Rev.
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Tsamari
C.E.O of Pancakes
Room101 wrote...
Hello Ladies (and Gentlemen).[color=#ff69b4]Hello Room.
Nyaa nyaa~
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Room101
Waifu Collector
Just being the usual bland me.
Been thinking about going sightseeing, but it's much too cold outside, and my best winter coat broke. Will probably go at some other time, especially since I've been going on walks all the time lately.
So just lazing around in my room.
Also, latest episode of Strike the Blood. Just D'Awwww, and Awesome.
Been thinking about going sightseeing, but it's much too cold outside, and my best winter coat broke. Will probably go at some other time, especially since I've been going on walks all the time lately.
So just lazing around in my room.
Also, latest episode of Strike the Blood. Just D'Awwww, and Awesome.
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Misaki_Chi
Fakku Nurse
Nyannyanse wrote...
sakicchi! *glomps**hugs back*
Hello Nyan-chan, how are you today?