~Fakku Girls Club v4~
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I think I've gotten more free movies in this last week than people have their entire lives... I've seen seven in the last two days alone. Working at a theater is pretty awesome.
How are you today? Done anything fun? Doing anything fun? Planning to do anything fun?
How are you today? Done anything fun? Doing anything fun? Planning to do anything fun?
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DatYuriThough
Goddess of Nature
crazr wrote...
I think I've gotten more free movies in this last week than people have their entire lives... I've seen seven in the last two days alone. Working at a theater is pretty awesome. How are you today? Done anything fun? Doing anything fun? Planning to do anything fun?
Friend came over, that was the extent of my day other than doing some writing.
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DatYuriThough wrote...
Friend came over, that was the extent of my day other than doing some writing.
Anytime spent with a friend tends to be fun, so that's good to hear. I'll be hanging out with mine as well. We've all finally settled into a schedule that we can all meet at on a bi-weekly basis.
Speaking of writing, I read the first chapter of your RWBY fanfic a while back and I haven't gotten a chance to mention it. Care for some comments and criticism?
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DatYuriThough
Goddess of Nature
crazr wrote...
DatYuriThough wrote...
Friend came over, that was the extent of my day other than doing some writing.
Anytime spent with a friend tends to be fun, so that's good to hear. I'll be hanging out with mine as well. We've all finally settled into a schedule that we can all meet at on a bi-weekly basis.
Speaking of writing, I read the first chapter of your RWBY fanfic a while back and I haven't gotten a chance to mention it. Care for some comments and criticism?
Criticisms tend to demotivate me, so no. God no.
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Back from running errands for the family business.
Criticisms tend to demotivate me, so no. God no.
Criticisms tend to demotivate me, so no. God no.
Same here.
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Really now? How the Hell are you supposed to get better if you don't even know what to get better at? You know what, fuck it! We're just going to get in another argument because we're both too damn headstrong. I'm going to drop it before it starts.
Anyway... would you like to hear some comments then?
DatYuriThough wrote...
Criticisms tend to demotivate me, so no. God no.
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
DatYuriThough wrote...
Criticisms tend to demotivate me, so no. God no.
Same here.
-____-
Really now? How the Hell are you supposed to get better if you don't even know what to get better at? You know what, fuck it! We're just going to get in another argument because we're both too damn headstrong. I'm going to drop it before it starts.
Anyway... would you like to hear some comments then?
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DatYuriThough
Goddess of Nature
crazr wrote...
Back from running errands for the family business.-____-
Really now? How the Hell are you supposed to get better if you don't even know what to get better at? You know what, fuck it! We're just going to get in another argument because we're both too damn headstrong. I'm going to drop it before it starts.
Anyway... would you like to hear some comments then?
Perhaps I'm not interested in getting better and only do it for fun? Anyway, 'better' is subjective so to other people I may not get 'better' if I follow criticisms from you and you may feel the same from what they say.
*Shrugs* Depends on what you plan on saying.
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Enos29
Black Mouse Rising
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
Hello~*Gropes avi*
*gropes back* How are ya Bud?
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DatYuriThough wrote...
Perhaps I'm not interested in getting better and only do it for fun? Anyway, 'better' is subjective so to other people I may not get 'better' if I follow criticisms from you and you may feel the same from what they say.
*Shrugs* Depends on what you plan on saying.
Well, whether you do it for fun or not or whether you're criticized or not, everyone gets better in their own way. If you plan to write as your future, I'm sure you'll get better one way or another. Now that I think about it since you mentioned it, would you say that fun is subjective as well?
Let's see here... Well, the writing was very simplistic and it was lovely and easy to read. Your descriptions were doing some serious work and I managed to picture everything pretty clearly. The love was quite sincere and it made me feel a little warm inside in plenty of parts. The lemon scene was fantastic(part of the reason I read it was for inspiration for my own story) and it was both passionate and compassionate.
I do have one question, however. It's not complaint, but rather a mystery I'd liked solved. Are neither of them huntresses any more? I mean, I know Weiss is loaded and can support both of them, but I thought being a huntress were both of their dreams. I would also like to add that I got a very strong Danni/Chlo-Chlo vibe from it.
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Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
Hello~*Gropes avi*
*gropes back* How are ya Bud?
Got my week off with the other co-workers. Time for a long morning nap in the next hour.
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Enos29
Black Mouse Rising
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
Hello~*Gropes avi*
*gropes back* How are ya Bud?
Got my week off with the other co-workers. Time for a long morning nap in the next hour.
Nap is always good!
Are you ready for Ramadan? :>
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DatYuriThough
Goddess of Nature
crazr wrote...
Well, whether you do it for fun or not or whether you're criticized or not, everyone gets better in their own way. If you plan to write as your future, I'm sure you'll get better one way or another. Now that I think about it since you mentioned it, would you say that fun is subjective as well? Let's see here... Well, the writing was very simplistic and it was lovely and easy to read. Your descriptions were doing some serious work and I managed to picture everything pretty clearly. The love was quite sincere and it made me feel a little warm inside in plenty of parts. The lemon scene was fantastic(part of the reason I read it was for inspiration for my own story) and it was both passionate and compassionate.
I do have one question, however. It's not complaint, but rather a mystery I'd liked solved. Are neither of them huntresses any more? I mean, I know Weiss is loaded and can support both of them, but I thought being a huntress were both of their dreams. I would also like to add that I got a very strong Danni/Chlo-Chlo vibe from it.
Everything is subjective so yes.
If you looked at the tags it mentions 'alternate universe' and the other chapters references them in school together. The site is based on Fan FICTION for a reason...it's just a regular universe. Like ours.
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Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
Hello~*Gropes avi*
*gropes back* How are ya Bud?
Got my week off with the other co-workers. Time for a long morning nap in the next hour.
Nap is always good!
Are you ready for Ramadan? :>
Always.
Of course.
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DatYuriThough wrote...
Everything is subjective so yes.
If you looked at the tags it mentions 'alternate universe' and the other chapters references them in school together. The site is based on Fan FICTION for a reason...it's just a regular universe. Like ours.
Sorry, I tend to nitpick everything and disregard things like the ones you mentioned above. I don't really pay much attention to tags and whether it's original or fan made, I ask questions that I find odd about the work. Anyway, it was very good. Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to read more.
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DatYuriThough
Goddess of Nature
crazr wrote...
DatYuriThough wrote...
Everything is subjective so yes.
If you looked at the tags it mentions 'alternate universe' and the other chapters references them in school together. The site is based on Fan FICTION for a reason...it's just a regular universe. Like ours.
Sorry, I tend to nitpick everything and disregard things like the ones you mentioned above. I don't really pay much attention to tags and whether it's original or fan made, I ask questions that I find odd about the work. Anyway, it was very good. Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to read more.
*Pats* it's fine~
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Enos29
Black Mouse Rising
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
Hello~*Gropes avi*
*gropes back* How are ya Bud?
Got my week off with the other co-workers. Time for a long morning nap in the next hour.
Nap is always good!
Are you ready for Ramadan? :>
Always.
Of course.
Good good :) *gives a pretzel*
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Enos29
Black Mouse Rising
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
BigBudNineOneActual wrote...
Enos29 wrote...
Hello~*Gropes avi*
*gropes back* How are ya Bud?
Got my week off with the other co-workers. Time for a long morning nap in the next hour.
Nap is always good!
Are you ready for Ramadan? :>
Always.
Of course.
Good good :) *gives a pretzel*