Gather around kids, Uncle Freaky read from his magic tome.

A selection from 'Trap'.

I started to lick gently around her virgin like nipples and they became rock hard. She was moaning and holding my head in place while I went from one nipple to the other gently sucking, licking and biting each of them. I took my hand and went down between her legs. I found her honey hole that was about to have an orgasm! She was so hot and wet and smelled so good. She was on her knees and spread her legs slightly so I could get a good rub in. I continued to suck on her tits and rub her cunt. I leant up and looked at her. I removed by fingers from her cunt and put them to my lips and licked them clean. I said I was gonna eat her cunt. She was in a trance. She just shook her head and lay back on the bed. I laid her down and got between her legs. She was clean shaven without a hair in there. I first took my tongue and went straight to her swollen clit. She was moving around wildly. I grabbed her by the hips to hold her still. Once she was still, I took my hand and spread her cunt lips and set my mouth right over her clit. I swirled my tongue around her clit and then I put my lips over it and sucked gently. She was moaning and withering under of me. While doing this, I took one of my hands and reached up and rubbed and pinched her nipples gently moving from side to side. Then I took the other hand off her lips and passed for her honey hole. I took one finger and inserted it gently in her. She was so damn tight! I kept my mouth firmly on her clit sucking so gently and then slid two fingers in her lovely sweet hole. I moved my fingers in and out slow at first and then picking up speed. I then felt Azamat behind me. He was hard on. I pulled my mouth off of Shelly’s clit but kept my fingers in there slowing my speed and looked around at Azamat. I said: “Fuck my ass…I want you fuck my dirt ass!” He did just what I asked…He first stuck his cock into my soaking wet cunt and took it out then rubbed all my love juice on my anus. He put his cock deep in my ass and I let out a wondrous moan of pleasure. He kept up the tempo with grabbing my hips and pulling me back onto his cock. I then turned back around and looked at Shelly. She asked me to go on and don’t stop either. No need to tell me twice…. I dived my face back down onto swollen clit but now I sucked it feverishly. I increased the speed of my two fingers inside her cunt and she was withering and bucking like crazy. Azamat enhanced the force fucking my ass and was now pounding me like a drill. I screamed not to stop as I was so close to cumming. At that time, Shelly let out a squeal that would have been heard around. With a corner of my eye I noticed Jenya sitting beside and jerking off. His eyes were fixed on my arse. Shelly was cumming so hard and I removed by fingers from her cunt and set my mouth over the honey hole to lap up all of the cum that she could give me. She was holding my head down on her cunt like a professional porn star. At that time, I lifted my head from her cunt and let out a scream, I was cumming. While I was licking Shelly’s cunt some other cock entered me.

Long story short, you got fucked in the ass.

Kaerf si kunrd

Im not that drunk... im still able to type clearly and ..... what was i saying?

What you been drinking?

Blood orange brandy, ale, and gold label Johnny.

That Johnny sounds nice.

too long didnt read?

tl;dr

In all honesty I'd enjoy drinking a beer while listening to freaky tell me all his crazy tales that have happened through out his life.

Oh...

I read the first half of the first sentence and then the very last sentence. I don't need to read it all to know it's a masterpiece.

So liek where part 2?

That ending

Do you want a ending?

Should be "leaned."



Should be "removed my fingers."



Should be "and laid back on the bed."



She laid down and then you laid her down. Redundant.



This is not correct anatomy. And if she actually does have hair inside her vagina due to some freakish disorder, why would she have such a freakish disorder? If it doesn't make for good storytelling, then there's no point.



We are now Hiroyuki, of "Jam it in!" and "Doujin Work" fame.



Should be "... I want you to fuck my dirty ass!"



When you're going to start a new sentence you still have to put a space after the ellipses. Should be "He did just what I asked... He first stuck his cock into my soaking wet cunt and took it out then rubbed all my love juice on my anus."

And it should be "all my love juices" as well.



You did not need to put a period after the ellipses.



Should be "I dived my face back down onto her swollen clit but now I sucked on it feverishly."



How far away the squeal would have been heard is not adequately described.



Should be "In the corner of my eye I noticed Jenya sitting beside us and jerking off."



Should be "...and I removed my fingers from her cunt..."



Should be "At that time, I lifted my head from her cunt and let out a scream; I was cumming."

These minor details are the only things I can see that you can improve on, because everything else is perfect.