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here's my ( gallery ) trash ( please help... )
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Hi ! Im atlus59 ( it's tsuna on pixiv and setsuna75 on devientart ) ! I'm here to post some of my works but it's only trash. For the story i draw since 12 and i wanted to be a hentai artist since 16 but too amazing artists make me give up. I always thought art is only for talented peoples..I'll restart to draw since two years now but it seems i'll never be good. If someone have a idea or a critique please tell me. My skype is Athrun.
Here my trash : http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1059267
Here my trash : http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1059267
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SneeakyAsian
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[color=#993300]Nice, links are broken, but overall work is good.
Pros: Well defined lines and decent shading. Good ability to reproduce work , clothing and hair detail.
Cons (and by no means do I mean to antagonize you, you have very good talent): Only a few layers of shading, especially with color. This is a very big and difficult thing to develop of course, but just to lead you in the right direction, experiment with a greater gradient of shading. Other than that, the rest is all taste and personal preference problems. If you'd like to know them, let me know.
Other than that, wonderful job and I'm looking forward to seeing more work.
Pros: Well defined lines and decent shading. Good ability to reproduce work , clothing and hair detail.
Cons (and by no means do I mean to antagonize you, you have very good talent): Only a few layers of shading, especially with color. This is a very big and difficult thing to develop of course, but just to lead you in the right direction, experiment with a greater gradient of shading. Other than that, the rest is all taste and personal preference problems. If you'd like to know them, let me know.
Other than that, wonderful job and I'm looking forward to seeing more work.
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I don't think the link are broken. Do you have a pixiv account ? Well in case i'll repost the link. Thanks for reply but i need to focus how to make a good body. If you have tips for it, i'm open.
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SneeakyAsian
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[color=#993300]I do have a pixiv account, many in fact XD (I like to go by many differeent aliases due to the nature of my art style). However, even then, the links that you posted on this thread no longer show the images.
If it is really body you'd like to work on, I'll give some critiques on that. First of all, you should first focus on the face, since this the most important part of practically any character sketch. From the looks of it, your faces seem to be a bit long and unsymmetrical in very subtle notes i.e. Akihiko's eye line. I'd recommend considering drawing the face guides in a more circular shape if that's what you're looking for. Other than that, body really comes more from practice. Try redrawing other images you see to help with that.
If it is really body you'd like to work on, I'll give some critiques on that. First of all, you should first focus on the face, since this the most important part of practically any character sketch. From the looks of it, your faces seem to be a bit long and unsymmetrical in very subtle notes i.e. Akihiko's eye line. I'd recommend considering drawing the face guides in a more circular shape if that's what you're looking for. Other than that, body really comes more from practice. Try redrawing other images you see to help with that.
