Pieces of work !

Hi !
First of all, be gentle with my english, i'm from switzerland so it's not my main language !
after... 5 years of reading doujs on Fakku, i've finally decided to create my account and share some pieces of my current work.

i'm trying to make a little 16-18 pages douj, release date is for 10 september i think... there is no text on it at the moment (because it's in french !) but the final version will be in english.

so here is some pieces of pages, let me know if you liked it or not ! :3
lines are pen on paper, greys are with SAI.

Hope you like it and ty for watching <3

[EDIT]: Yeah it's finshed !
you can read the thing here :
---> g/737192/a8bce312d1/

[EDIT 2]: Faakkuuuuu !
my work is now on Fakku, that's AWEESOOOOOOOMME, thank you, really ! :D
---> https://www.fakku.net/manga/sleeping-island-japanese

hope you will enjoy <3

I liked it. Show us more and I'm looking forward to the completed project!

I like it and agree with Shikinokami looking forward to finished project :D

Can't wait to see it all!

Hey there!

Good stuff! Definitely likes :)

Will we be able to see the rest of it once it's completed?

Oh guys thank you for your answers !
i'm happy if you like my project !

i've added 2 more previews (with my little logo on it because the old one was... beurk)

@rin^2: yeah sure, the complete work will be free on internet, i think its not good enough to put it on fakku sadly, but i will put it on g-e galery !

Your art style is so lovely and unique, espically the expressions you convey on her face; so lewd and seductive. Can't wait to read the finish work and best wishes in your future art and such!

Hi guys !
The chapter is finished !
the link is on my first post, hope you will like it and ty for your comments ! <3

I really love the art and the grey tones. Though I'm not a big fan of tentacles but I would definitely recommend it to people who are. Amazing work! I hope to see other genres from you too~~ ^^

I don't think I have any negative things to say about your work. The way you have her body move and the poses are very nice, her facial expressions are just lovely (there was one scene where she bit her lip and it was just cute as heck), her lingerie is something I want! I liked the end a lot too lol.

For your first work, I would give it a 5/5 (which is what I did give lol). You have a nice sense of originality as well which is nice to see in artists. I wish you luck on your next work!

I'm not a huge fan of tentacles, personally, but I can say with certainty that it's the best tentacle hentai I've read, even if that list is rather small. I never would've guessed it was your first work if you hadn't told us! I wasn't exactly paying close attention while reading, but I don't remember noticing any issues with the language. I'd say your English is pretty good, actually.

The girl is absolutely adorable and I wouldn't mind seeing more of her. I also really love how you included some extra storyboard stuff at end! Good luck with anything else you make!

very nice! you should see if you can get this posed on the site if its not already.