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Hello everybody, I´d like to share some of my art pieces.
I´m pretty much a newbie , started drawing like 1 and a half , maybe 2 years ago, and I only get to draw sporadically on the weekends, but I think it´s worth sharing :D

I hope to get some critiques , please just make them constructive,and if you feel the need to insult,
at least make it funny, ok.
All my drawings are done with ink and copic markers (yes , some people still use this shit :) )

Now this first one I actually drew quite recently , as a celebration when I joined fakku.
Unfortunately I didn´t look at this forum at the time, and my only reference was fakku´s twitter avatar :D Probably gonna do a version with the correct clothing :D



Now this one is actually older, but in my opinion better.
No need to comment on the fucked up hand , I know that already.



And this one I just finished today, probably my favorite of all my drawings up until now:

I'm really digging on all of these, honestly. I loved what you did with the Fakku! mascot (for the life of me can't remember her name). The very last girl was super adorable and... just the tiniest bit hot.

~my bi side might be showing a little~

These are all really nice. Like you had pointed out, the only thing that is the tiniest bit awkward are the hands in drawing #2 and drawing #3, but other than that they are really good examples of adorable ecchi.

I would also like to note that all of these seem rather sex positive, which is always a plus for me. The girls all seem like they're having a good time and it doesn't feel exploitative. While I'm into really kinky stuff occasionally, most of the time it's refreshing just to see girls being girls.

I think her name is Momoka :D If only I knew before I drew it.
Now Thank you very much for your kind words. Please forgive me for using you as my test subject, to ckeck out the comment system.Do you get a notification only when I quote you or whenever I post reply ?

Also I agree ,it´s really nice to see girls in like, more feminine , less violent positions.
These are always the pages I get stuck , staring at the artwork.

Like Hybris said, the mascot's name is Momoka. It's actually stated in the sticky in this forum

On topic: Nice work, I like the coloring. Though the proportions on the last one look a bit weird to me.

you mean the position of the breasts? Can you be a little bit more specific, please :D

I really like the art style! It is erotic but also very cute! if you finish any more keep it coming!(no pun intended)

The torso in general, actually. It's like back-breakingly bent.

Normal English text:

HHHHHHH Not bad for an amateur... Looks better with some naked girls.

Gangsta English text:

HHHHHHH Not wack fo' a amateur... Looks betta wit some naked hoes.

looks very good, if i were to give any advice, when you do the shading on the body, the shadows cast should be the color of the hair or cloth that is casting shadow on them, so if u havea pink or red hair, it casts a diferent color shadow than blue or black hair

Hm. Your linework gets a little off in some places (most notably the second picture with the feet and perspective), but it's generally very solid. Your colouring is fantastic, and I'm rather fond of watercolours in general.

Keep it up.