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Amague! Chapter 1 "Love is Dead"
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Parody
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26 pages
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Direction
Left to Right
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9 years ago
This is really great! I didn't know there was still free content on here. keep up the great work! :)
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10 years ago
Ok so...I officially created an account so I could fave this! From the cover I could tell it was gonna be sweet adorable vanilla! But it turns out it's also real funny!! Love it!
"FAKKU, this needs to be publish!!" *screams at computer*
"FAKKU, this needs to be publish!!" *screams at computer*
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10 years ago
I liked the whole story, how the girls personality is still, same for the guys. He's a mostly pure guy, with some perverted desires (hentai) that truly wants a clear look to the girl he likes. The girl herself seems to only like Fei because he's honest and a nice person (starving dog). Just as long as you don't try to throw any overused cliches in, and keep it your own. But do please keep it ecchi, or make it hentai. I don't like non-h but ecchi is fine. As is, the story itself so far is great so I'll keep reading anyway.
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10 years ago
Oh my god, that cleaning lady hahahaha
I love the backgrounds (odd detail, I know, but it sets it apart from a lot of amateur* work)!
Since you've said English is not your native language (and there are a few points where that can be seen, but it's not a major detractor from the story), I'd be happy to humbly offer my services if you ever need a native-speaking English grammar checker/proofreader.
*I mean amateur in the French meaning of the word, i.e. "non-paid professional" or "skilled hobbyist," not the English way which usually has a somewhat negative connotation that implies that the subject is a beginner
I love the backgrounds (odd detail, I know, but it sets it apart from a lot of amateur* work)!
Since you've said English is not your native language (and there are a few points where that can be seen, but it's not a major detractor from the story), I'd be happy to humbly offer my services if you ever need a native-speaking English grammar checker/proofreader.
*I mean amateur in the French meaning of the word, i.e. "non-paid professional" or "skilled hobbyist," not the English way which usually has a somewhat negative connotation that implies that the subject is a beginner
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10 years ago
Porter Robinson? Can't blame her. I wouldn't be able to hold myself, either. I got so hard that I'll have to listen to the whole album and all the remixes now.
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10 years ago
I noticed right away from the art style this was probably gonna be a gem. And I was right. xD Ugh I'm still so hype from this, its just the right amount of eroticism, humor, and plot to keep me interested.
For the love of god if you ever need help with anything -ANYTHING- don't be afraid to ask. If you ever plan on making any bigger projects after this or anything that is. Haha. And very much looking forward to more work. YOU earned yourself a sub my friend.
For the love of god if you ever need help with anything -ANYTHING- don't be afraid to ask. If you ever plan on making any bigger projects after this or anything that is. Haha. And very much looking forward to more work. YOU earned yourself a sub my friend.
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10 years ago
Thanks a lot! I have other stories I plan on continuing some day(you can read them on batoto or mangafox) but I want this one to be a big project, that's why I need support!(so I can keep a consistent update sheddule and make this my job so I can concentrate 100 percent on it!) I don't want to spoil anything but the story will be much more complex than people are probably expecting, and will be a mix of slice of life and fantasy/supernatural.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
10 years ago
Wow, I actually love the character design. Very cool and a clever title! I can see the inspiration for it. Seeing that the Amague is an Argentinian dance and the other references to Southern American culture like a latino Christian/Catholic cleaning lady, and our MC's name, I want to say I found this very intriguing. I hope to see more of this on here in the future. Best of luck and I hope you will continue to get better and share those improvements with us.
Last Modified Mon Jul 20, 2015, 11:22 pm
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10 years ago
Is it just me or is there somenthing with his name?
Ok being honest this is really really good and i want MORE...
GIVE ME MORE, MOR..."cough"...
Sorry about that.
Pleas keep on with that GOOD work ;)
Ok being honest this is really really good and i want MORE...
GIVE ME MORE, MOR..."cough"...
Sorry about that.
Pleas keep on with that GOOD work ;)
Last Modified Mon Jul 20, 2015, 10:13 pm
This chapter is part of Amague!.
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Nice of you to put Fakku in.. Fakku ? OH MY GOD, FAKKUCEPTION. Yeah I know, that joke has gotten old.
Well, nevermind, keep up the good work =D
Please make yourself at home!
The Land of Fakku will always support you!
Gotta love where this is goin :D
YOU NEED JESUS!
Yes yes, we all do, stereotypical black cleaning lady. Yes we do.
I'll be waiting for next chapter! :3
Last Modified Wed Jul 22, 2015, 9:22 am
The only thing that kinda need improvement (in my opinion), is the text boxes/descriptions/thought bubbles seemed too long, like some of them could easily be shorten just from context clues. Overall very nice and interesting I hope to see more soon~ ^_^