OOOOOH, that was really good.

>Avoids the usual setup cliches.
>Believable.
>Good designs.
>Great dialogue.
>Great love scene.
>Great fashion sense.
>Just a hint of deviousness.

Very nice. I'd say towards the middle it fumbles a bit before our two mains get it on. I think her looking at the comments on definitely-not-twitter are all the info we need. Her outwardly expressing how stressed she is isn't necessary IMO since we've already had enough exposure to her as a character to know what she's about. The dialogue before the act slumps a bit in quality and falls into the usual. "I've been holding back." "I'm feeling hot" "make me feel really good" etc. But once our MC starts insisting a bit more and we find out about Nono's preferences the whole scenario is elevated. The aspect of her liking rough sex is very endearing. Though, again, could've been delivered slightly better. I like seeing our MC take delight in "sullying someone else's property" in a way. Kinda kinky but weird considering these two are childhood friends. Hell, the admission from our boy that she's basically never had any other friends is a bold one. You telling me your her entire world? That's some crazy shit. Still, I like that the story maintains it's vanilla veneer and doesn't veer off course too much.

TL;DR Streaming is a good pasttime you and your SO should consider it. Just don't get too crazy about it, it's not healthy. LMAO

Something about this doesn't sit right with me. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but the power dynamic of their relationship seems off. He seems to hold all the cards and she is completely dependent upon him.

SORRY GUYS KEY BOEARD WHENT NUTS

Let the record show that certain visitors to Nono's stream can dream, fantasize and even speculate as much as they like ... Yoshiyuki has already, so-to-say, "closed the deal".

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