HotDogMaster wrote...
I actually like it a lot. Very nice and cute.
Some criticism I might add however, for improvement:
1. The proportions are a bit off, noticeably for the arms. Normally arms should be a bit longer than that; especially in the first picture.
2. Shadows and highlights are important, especially on colored characters. Set a imaginary light source and darken the underparts, and highlight the areas facing the light. Especially on the face; shadowing the areas under the bangs, shadowing the chin and neck would really bring out the face.
That's about it really. The characters look a bit flat (especially on the face), but with touch-up, I think it'll look even more fantastic. One thing I'm really impressed about is the eyes. IMO it's the hardest part to draw (if you look at bad artworks, it's usually the eyes that ruin it) but yours look really alive and moe. Kudos to you.
Agreed :>
And, hey Ammy, I've been thinking about making a Momoka shortstory-compilation-doujin. I want to draw some chapters, but I would appreciate other artists to join aswell with artworks, own chapters, 4step comics or whatever. If you'd like, here is a thread I opened:
https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=71591