Hasyim Arts
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looks alright but something bout her right side of the body looks so off especially right where it comes down from the cleavage, and her legs area seems so strange on both sides... Ill show u what it is that I see.
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woa!, i need learn draw soon possible, thanks for show me where wrong. i want post drawing after holiday
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I think I'm so a jerk for doing this again but bear with me its kinda a habit when I can't explain things to well without showing.
K first off Id like to say you did a good job on that drawing and the colors look good too so kudos.
K as u can c i circled the parts that look really weird and strange to me because the her right leg seems to be pointing or facing the wrong way and seems to be way to apart from the other leg and there doesn't seem to be any sign of hips IMO.
I'm bit confused at the red part cuz that looks like the end of the scarf hanging behind her or is that clothing?
Lastly I think the chest and stomach area just doesn't look right to me.
K first off Id like to say you did a good job on that drawing and the colors look good too so kudos.
K as u can c i circled the parts that look really weird and strange to me because the her right leg seems to be pointing or facing the wrong way and seems to be way to apart from the other leg and there doesn't seem to be any sign of hips IMO.
I'm bit confused at the red part cuz that looks like the end of the scarf hanging behind her or is that clothing?
Lastly I think the chest and stomach area just doesn't look right to me.
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Dunno what you speakin' of Kanu, looks okay to me. The direction of the legs looks fairly natural as well, considering the pose.
And yes, it would be logical that the green thing showing between her torso and left art is indeed her scarf. Since, you know, it's the only green thing from the outfit.
And to Hasyim, I really enjoy this last work you posted. In the first one I couldn't really tell your true skill, but I think this one shows much better your how good you are. I'd really like to see more works from you.
ps: And it'd love if you could have a try at Challenge Me~
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Thanks Kuroneko 1/2. I will join challege Room... and thank for comment kanuUnchou. i try fix it but that charcter for assigment project hehe..
today i got free and maybe i will join challege Room. before that here my character and i redesign 2007 into 2010.
this my artwork in 2007 :
redesign :
today i got free and maybe i will join challege Room. before that here my character and i redesign 2007 into 2010.
this my artwork in 2007 :
redesign :
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nvr did the challenge thing mainly cuz it just didn't fit me because I just mainly do my own stuff and use lots of time but probably is fun to others.
Hmmm good character and the designs are good but unfortunately Ill get to the crits like trrw or so.
Hmmm good character and the designs are good but unfortunately Ill get to the crits like trrw or so.
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i back, yesterday i just finish 2 character name Panty and Stocking. and here it is.
Panty
High Quality Image :
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y257/hasyim1987/Art06-PANTY.jpg
Stocking
High Quality Image :
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y257/hasyim1987/Art05-STOCKING.jpg
Panty
High Quality Image :
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y257/hasyim1987/Art06-PANTY.jpg
Stocking
High Quality Image :
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y257/hasyim1987/Art05-STOCKING.jpg
