Swirling Winds

This will be the thread where I post My updates, and the visual novel itself that I am currently making. I am new to this, But I really hope you enjoy the work and effort I put into this. =P

I am currently coming up with the story as I go along, But I am planning on making this a romance, one where you can choose the women/man you're with in the end, depending on the chooses.

Screen Shots



3/23/2014 Update
Beginning Draft Updated.



3/24/2014 Update
Beginning VN update.

Found out rest of the bugs, and fixed just about all of them for what I have made so far, might be some minor spelling errors, but that can be easily fixed.
Story plot has increased.
Characters now have emotions.
More sound effects.

update 3/25/2014
Changed out Yuuki's character for a different one.
Added the first serious choose option.
I'm also adding the little sister as a possible love ending.
its going to be harder from now on, each choose will split the game and some dialog I have to write twice, with mild changes to it, while other goes off to complete different parts of story.

So now that make 5 possible love endings, also going to have some bad endings, and normal, even thinking of making one or two death endings.
bought ComiPo, thinking it I could also use to it make different kinds of character, sadly I am able too, but the choose from it are limited, and the dlc is spendy, looking for a cracked, or dlc alone to download for it instead of buying it.


Newist release of game update so far.




Credits:
Main Story Scenarios: Illumia
Backgrounds: http://unyokan.ojaru.jp/
Background edits: Illumia
Sound Effects/Music: Royal free.
Voices: Nyanners.
Character Design: Illumia/Bass.



Currently Up to date.

So, what is this and why should I download this?

Give some information. All I know here is the title, that you made it and that it's incomplete, nothing else.
What is this about? (Synopsis)
Any pictures of the art/text apart from the title screen?

Better?

Yes, much better.

There Has been another Update to the game.

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What wrong with having Taylor help? she only one of the people going to help me with some of the voices. I also found some one who is really good at doing different ones and call also do some male voices, But it would be mostly for younger male characters because they sound like there balls haven't dropped yet.
Still looking though for some more male to help though..

I really respect that someone outside of Japan(I hope) had taken an interest into making a visual novel. Good luck making this!

I know, and I'm from The United States.

NYANNERS! THE FUCKING VOICE IS NYANNERS, OH GOD I WILL PLAY THE SHIT OUT OF THIS, just hope it gets h-scenes.

holy shit. lol You okay there? I know she does some youtube videos, and the whole stalking her thing went on for awhile, but that is an overreaction I have to say.

yeah im fine. Im just a big fan, i use to hate her but i love her videos now. uhh stalking thing? i don't think ive ever liked someone so much as to stalk them.

The typos are strong with this one. But you have Nyanners.
You could literally write this in greek, pass it off as English, and still have a gratuitous trail of horndogs pelvic thrusting in your general direction at warp speeds. (You said Hikaru is overreacting, but you do know she use to have a ten minute loop of her eating a watermellon on youtube -- with an insane number of views, right? People are odd.) I had thought about asking her to do some dubbing for an RPG I've been working on too, but I don't really know her well enough to spring that on her.

I'd love to do some spellchecking and critique if you're up for it, but not everyone is a huge fan of criticism even if it's meant to be constructive. So I'll just leave it out there as an offer.

All in all, looks like you're going to have yourself a pretty successful venture, good sir! Best of luck.

Who's Nyanners?

Back on topic, what's your visual novel going to be about?

bumping because I am still interested

Production of the visual novel will continue in two weeks time.

I know you propably hear this all time, but im adding my voice to the crowd:
Get someone to proofread it. Yes, even the beta/test-versions. Because nothing breaks the immersion quite like typo in wrong place.

going to start it up again when I get the time

so i am trying to play your game but everytime i try to open i get this

I am going to be rebooting the intire game from beginning, and making it more better, I already started to write the script and stole line and chooses