a haiku I wrote a while ago

My life at it's end.
Slowly dying in my room.
Death knocks at my door.


I know it sounds really emo and stuff, but I was bored and made it up.

Any thoughts or comments about it would be nice. :D

"Haiku's can be easy
But sometimes the don't make sense
Refrigerator"

Haiku's are fun.

lol its olryt :)

That was really good
If I do say so myself
What is the Title?

that's my opinion
of your Haiku in form of
a Haiku as well.

How's That?!
How about making this the "HAIKU" thread?

I haven't thought of a title for it :P And your response in the form of 2 haikus is genius :D

haven't thought about making this into a Haiku Thread

You might want to +rep me for that, just one more post and you'll be able to!
anyways, if ever you have a new haiku, why not just post it again in this same thread, it'll be a waste to create various of threads with basically the same idea. And if ever I get inspired, I might consider posting some Haikus of my own in this same thread. 8)
think about it, it only needs a few editing from the topic title to the initial post. I simply like your idea of posting a Haiku... maybe I'll +rep you for this later!

When I'm freakin' bored
Haikus became my resort
Here are what I wrote...

“Stopping By…”
Let’s visit Fakku!
To see if there’s something New
For us to Fap to!

“Sorrow”
Why can’t I be freed
From this World that’s full of greed
I can only grief...