[Locked] [Community Project] Shadowblaze Chronicles
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                        Masayoshiii
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                Yanker wrote...
just letting u guys know im not dead, chapter is in progressOkay thanks for letting us know.
I'll be looking forward to reading your chapter at its best, so take your time, no rush. ^_^
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                        I actually have a few characters to contribute, if that's okay. If not, just take whichever one suits the story best. They're all characters with relations to current ones, and I want input from the character owners before you make your decision, if possible. Here they are:
Name: Samantha Desmond Fitzgerald, called SDF by some for short.
Age: ???
Race: Unknown (Appears to be human, but with unusual features similar to the Empress and Vastenarok. There are rumors that she was once an elf...)
Alignment: Antagonist
Elemental Affinity: Wind
Eye color: Golden
Hair color: Silver
Skin color: Pale Caucasian
Weapons of choice: Arcane Arts, Wrist and Ankle Claws, Throwing knives.
Noteworthy abilities: Has complete mastery of all arcane arts, and a master of close combat, as well as throwing weapons. Has never missed a target with a thrown blade.
Short Bio: A comrade of Vastenarok, working with him by choice, rather than by force. Unbeknownst to Vastenarok, she secretly has feelings for him, which drove her to work hard to climb to his level. She opts to confront the party in Vastenarok's place, hoping to curry favor with him by slowing their progress and helping with Vastenarok's plans.
Name: Cardigan V. Lithum
Age: ??? (TBA)
Race: Human
Alignment: Neutral
Elemental Affinity: Earth (Tentative, can be changed if necessary)
Eye Color: ??? (TBA)
Hair Color: ^^^^^
Skin Color: ^^^^^
Weapons of choice: N/A
Noteworthy Abilities: N/A
Short Bio: The daughter of Andrew V. Lithum, she is a hostage of Vastenarok, and the only reason someone of considerable power and even more considerable pride chooses to obey Vastenarok, despite obvious qualms with his methods and schemes. Unbeknownst to her father, and even herself, Vastenarok is slowly brainwashing her into becoming one of his loyal servants.
Name: Quarrala Solshine
Age: 147
Race: Drow
Alignment: Antagonist
Elemental Affinity: Shadow
Hair color: Snow white
Skin color: Jet black
Eye color: Blood red
Weapons of choice: A Nodachi carried on her back, and twin axes carried at her sides. The Nodachi used to belong to Elgaraf Moonshade.
Noteworthy Abilities: A master of combat using both swords and axes. She is able to use her twin axes as bladed boomerangs, throwing them in arcs that curve to places she can catch them. She can wield the Nodachi with startling speed, despite her small stature and the Nodachi's length exceeding that of her own height.
Short Bio: Elgaraf's former bride, she betrayed him by killing his entire family, out of revenge for misdeeds that Elgaraf's father did, resulting in the death of her own parents. Elgaraf cannot contain his anger when he meets he, but at the same time, she still yearns to return to him, even if she can never be forgiven.
                Name: Samantha Desmond Fitzgerald, called SDF by some for short.
Age: ???
Race: Unknown (Appears to be human, but with unusual features similar to the Empress and Vastenarok. There are rumors that she was once an elf...)
Alignment: Antagonist
Elemental Affinity: Wind
Eye color: Golden
Hair color: Silver
Skin color: Pale Caucasian
Weapons of choice: Arcane Arts, Wrist and Ankle Claws, Throwing knives.
Noteworthy abilities: Has complete mastery of all arcane arts, and a master of close combat, as well as throwing weapons. Has never missed a target with a thrown blade.
Short Bio: A comrade of Vastenarok, working with him by choice, rather than by force. Unbeknownst to Vastenarok, she secretly has feelings for him, which drove her to work hard to climb to his level. She opts to confront the party in Vastenarok's place, hoping to curry favor with him by slowing their progress and helping with Vastenarok's plans.
Name: Cardigan V. Lithum
Age: ??? (TBA)
Race: Human
Alignment: Neutral
Elemental Affinity: Earth (Tentative, can be changed if necessary)
Eye Color: ??? (TBA)
Hair Color: ^^^^^
Skin Color: ^^^^^
Weapons of choice: N/A
Noteworthy Abilities: N/A
Short Bio: The daughter of Andrew V. Lithum, she is a hostage of Vastenarok, and the only reason someone of considerable power and even more considerable pride chooses to obey Vastenarok, despite obvious qualms with his methods and schemes. Unbeknownst to her father, and even herself, Vastenarok is slowly brainwashing her into becoming one of his loyal servants.
Name: Quarrala Solshine
Age: 147
Race: Drow
Alignment: Antagonist
Elemental Affinity: Shadow
Hair color: Snow white
Skin color: Jet black
Eye color: Blood red
Weapons of choice: A Nodachi carried on her back, and twin axes carried at her sides. The Nodachi used to belong to Elgaraf Moonshade.
Noteworthy Abilities: A master of combat using both swords and axes. She is able to use her twin axes as bladed boomerangs, throwing them in arcs that curve to places she can catch them. She can wield the Nodachi with startling speed, despite her small stature and the Nodachi's length exceeding that of her own height.
Short Bio: Elgaraf's former bride, she betrayed him by killing his entire family, out of revenge for misdeeds that Elgaraf's father did, resulting in the death of her own parents. Elgaraf cannot contain his anger when he meets he, but at the same time, she still yearns to return to him, even if she can never be forgiven.
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                        Yanker
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                        Sounds very interesting, especially Elgaraf's bride! But if I were in Elgarafs shoes I'd just fk her and write a h scene lol                    
                
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                        Yanker wrote...
Sounds very interesting, especially Elgaraf's bride! But if I were in Elgarafs shoes I'd just fk her and write a h scene lolMe too lel. But I wasn't sure if the project leader wanted h scenes in this story or not.
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                        LoliCreamPie wrote...
Okay thanks for letting us know. I'll be looking forward to reading your chapter at its best, so take your time, no rush. ^_^
I just figured I'd let ya know he's done with chapter 2. I'm starting chapter 3, should have it in a few days, at the latest this Thursday/Friday.
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                        Masayoshiii
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                Spikedpikes wrote...
I actually have a few characters to contribute, if that's okay. If not, just take whichever one suits the story best. They're all characters with relations to current ones, and I want input from the character owners before you make your decision, if possible. Here they are:Spoiler:
Okay, I'll add them all shortly, and update the opening post again to let people know it's alright to ask for multiple characters to be added.
Also, I will reserve chapter 4 for you, so no worries. ^_^
@justgivemelove-9645460 Alright, understood. I look forward to reading both of your chapters throughout this week. ^_^
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                        LoliCreamPie wrote...
Alright, understood. I look forward to reading both of your chapters throughout this week. ^_^You know what's funny? I was less than a paragraph from finishing chapter 3 today, then my computer overheated and needed to reboot. I lost everything, have to restart now...
I'll probably finish the chapter this evening, actually. Anticipate reading both chapter 2 and 3 in one day.
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                        Yanker wrote...
Chapter 2 – Shadow in the Evening SunSpoiler:
So, dats a pre cool chap, if only *someone* would post chapter 3 already, i could start mine. From what I heard, they already finished, so what da hell's takin them?
Also, dude, ya know we can make more than 1 character now, don'tchya want more?
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                        Sorry it took me so long, I had been throwing up these last few days, and didn't make the changes I promised Yanker until this morning. Here's the third chapter, hope you enjoy:
@yanker-7487918 I added more to the end of the chapter, be sure to check it out and give me feedback. It mostly involves the new character introduced, Marie Ekielon, and Elgaraf Moonshade's general mistrust of her.
@lolicreampie I removed the end bit where I mentioned Vastenarok, per request of the next person, Spikepikes. He mentioned that he'd like to write the end of his chapter leading into yours, and said you guys had discussed it already.
@spikedpikes-7014049 I'm sorry this took so long man, I've been really sick the last five days. I feel better today, though.
@complete-horizon-4579257 I added a few more lines of dialogue for your character. Let me know what you think about it when you get the chance.
<< Chapter 3 - The Scout, The Shadow, and The Enigma: >>
Also, I'd like to introduce one more character to the character list, if possible:
Name: Natalya Ludmilla (I bet you didn't know I'm 1/8 of both German and Russian)
                    
                @yanker-7487918 I added more to the end of the chapter, be sure to check it out and give me feedback. It mostly involves the new character introduced, Marie Ekielon, and Elgaraf Moonshade's general mistrust of her.
@lolicreampie I removed the end bit where I mentioned Vastenarok, per request of the next person, Spikepikes. He mentioned that he'd like to write the end of his chapter leading into yours, and said you guys had discussed it already.
@spikedpikes-7014049 I'm sorry this took so long man, I've been really sick the last five days. I feel better today, though.
@complete-horizon-4579257 I added a few more lines of dialogue for your character. Let me know what you think about it when you get the chance.
<< Chapter 3 - The Scout, The Shadow, and The Enigma: >>
Spoiler:
Also, I'd like to introduce one more character to the character list, if possible:
Name: Natalya Ludmilla (I bet you didn't know I'm 1/8 of both German and Russian)
Spoiler:
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                        Masayoshiii
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                JustGiveMeLove wrote...
Spoiler:
Hey, thanks for finally getting back to us! I enjoyed reading your chapter, It was very descriptive, and further detailed the relationship between Masayoshi and Elgaraf, while keeping a lot of action, and introducing another character to boot.
You also established the relationship of the new character with the current ones, and gave insight into what future chapters should contain some of, because of their animated reactions to each other. It will be a nice change of pace at times.
Excellent work, and keep up the great work!
@Allthepeopleinthisthread - Chapters 6-9 can now be reserved, and I hope you guys take the time and decide amongst yourselves which chapters you want. That's 4 chapters, so it'll be a while before they're started, or finished, especially since we're still 2 chapters away, but let's not be too pessimistic - I'll have my chapter 5 done the same day that I receive a draft of chapter 4 from our current writer: Spikepikes.
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                        Alright, so as soon as I'm finished with chapter 4, I'm just going to post it here. IF there are complaints or things wanted afterward, I'll fix things. No more huge delays.                    
                
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                Spikedpikes wrote...
Alright, so as soon as I'm finished with chapter 4, I'm just going to post it here. IF there are complaints or things wanted afterward, I'll fix things. No more huge delays.Fair enough. I hope to see it soon ^_^.
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                        LoliCreamPie wrote...
Fair enough. I hope to see it soon ^_^.Today. Almost halfway done. Will update post. Till then. This.
Update: So, I split this chapter into 4 scenes, since it's from 4 different points of view. Enjoy. Also, those who didn't think I could do this in less than one day can suck it.
===Chapter 4: A Shattered Alliance:===
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Scene One: Evan the Tyrant
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Scene Two: The Allies' Attack
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Scene Three: Vastenarok's Apprentice:
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Scene Four: Evan VS Elgaraf
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                        Masayoshiii
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                Spikedpikes wrote...
======================================Scene Two: The Allies' Attack
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Spoiler:
So, just one minor fix that I can see so far... the diplomat was actually Terack Norfel, and Carant Wortun hadn't been introduced yet.
Now, for my review: Very good overall, though the third scene and its events seemed very rushed. The fourth scene more than made up for it, though. Great work ^_^
@complete-horizon-4579257 I can't reserve both, so I'll put you down for the one no one else wanted yet. Is that alright?
 
                         
                         
                         
                        