Drakengard 3 Fan Fiction

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echoeagle3 Oppai Overlord
So I have gotten pretty into the game Drakengard 3. After beating it and reading all the official short stories I found there was still more I wanted to know. So if it wasn't explained I decided to write it.

This first one is my initial attempt and I think its really good. It takes place just after the short story "A rain to end and a flower to begin"

The Birth of The Sisters
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It was dark, so dark, and yet somehow warm. It was a comfortable place. Wherever this place was. Its as if being strung up and whipped had happened ages ago, not just this morning. I let go of such thoughts and allowed myself to sink deeper into the dark. Then like I was waking up from sleeping I started to feel raindrops on my skin, the constraints digging into my arms and legs, and I came to realize that I had returned to the world from this morning. However, something was missing. The severe bruised and bloody lashes on my back, I could not feel them. Now that my mind was growing clearer I remembered, I was dying. I had been left hung up next to those rebels with my wounds still bleeding, left in this rain, wasting away. But now I did not feel like I was dying, quite the opposite really, I felt alive, I felt full of energy, full of power.

I pulled against my bindings and easily broke them. Then I immediately started running. Seems no one expected anyone to escape so there was no one to stop me. After I was a good distance away I finally stopped to contemplate what just happened. I checked my back and realized it was spotless, not a mark on it. You might think that the whole brutal scene of when I received all those lashes was just a dream. But that seemed easily contradicted. It’s a fact that I woke up chained and constrained exactly how I remembered. So surely my memory of the whipping is also correct. Then how did this happen? I try and think about the last thing I can recall. It was a flower, I remember seeing a flower. I was completely enraptured by it. By its beauty. Then .. after that, what was it? The flower, the flower, it did something, it....

Racking my brain as hard as I could it came to me and I let out a gasp. It started to grow larger, much much larger, large enough to... I had to stop my thoughts and collect myself before finishing that thought I even said it out loud to try and lessen its impact. "Large enough to swallow a person" Of course common sense screams at me saying the complete foolishness of such a possibility. But I already knew it to be true. I felt it, I felt a presence, there was something within me that was not there before. This thing would not allow me to deny the fact that I had indeed been devoured by the flower. Trying my very best not to panic I looked at the positives. This thing, this "flower" must have healed me, not only did it bring me back from the brink of certain death but it filled me with such overflowing strength. Could it be that I have actually had a stroke of unbelievably good luck?

I was about to start crying, my life which had held nothing but pain, sadness and loneliness, could I have finally arrived at the turning point? I reached out with my consciousness, reached out to find the presence in me, to greet it, and say thank you. I was happier then I had been in so very long. I was filled with hope, maybe now I could live a normal life, like a normal girl, no more stealing, no more killing, just peaceful days. That’s when I touched "It", the Flower. Never, in all my life of blood, pain and despair had I witnessed something so horrid, so terrifying, so malice filled, so brutally visceral. I nearly threw up on the spot. No, this was not a stroke of unbelievably good luck, it was a turning point though, but a turn for the worse.

"God dammit!" I screamed "Fuck this world! This world just won't stop shitting on me! To hell with you all!" Beyond my rage I heard a voice in my head. "Destroy it." The voice said. "Destroy it" "Destroy that which has so wronged you. Destroy the world" I stopped my shouting. "Huh? You fucking with me? Now Im hearing things? I’m just supposed to go crazy now?" I knew I wasn't going crazy though. It was "that" that "thing". After touching It I realized that it wasn't joking. This thing really wanted to destroy everything. And I felt its power, its truly god like power, destroying the world would be very possible. All of that now lives inside me.

I thought long and hard about all this. The temptation to do what it said was very real. What did i care what happened to the world, the world hated me and I hated the world. Or even, this could be my big chance at revenge. But when I thought back on the people I had killed, remembered their faces, how they asked me why I was doing this and then how I was unable to provide an answer. I have still never figured it out, Before I knew it the killing was just a habit, sort of like biting your nails. No real reason, it’s just something you start doing. But its those faces, those faces full of complete and utter despair. I never thought about it at the time but now those faces fill me with an even greater despair a despair like what I felt touching the flower inside me. I don't want to see any more of those faces.

And so I arrived at a decision, I had to get rid of this thing, to stop it. Since I had no idea what it was or where it came from I didn't know anything about its weaknesses. I did however know one thing, it lived inside me. If it lived inside me then it was likely that it could not continue if I no longer lived. It's not like I'm particularly attached to my life. Not a single dam good thing has come of it. Its a pointless and empty life. Not one that means much to throw away. I chuckled And does this mean I’m doing something like saving the world? How ridiculous. I got a pretty good laugh at the notion of me saving the world. Soon enough though it was time. Fortunately, I happen to be good at killing people. I knew exactly where to aim the blade to strike a killing blow. Without hesitation I plunged my sword all the way through my heart.
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Suddenly, I open my eyes. A state of confusion instantly assaults me. the air flows around me. The rain has ceased, I feel the touch of grass beneath me. I also feel a wetness on my chest. looking down I see my shirt stained red. A whole in the fabric shows a hole in my chest. I can see my own heart. "What? What is this? How am I seeing this right now?" As if in answer a terrible pain suddenly racks my body. Managing to pry my eyes open since they were shut from the pain I see this amorphous liquid coming out of the hole in my chest. It certainly was not blood, not only was it not red, but it was raising up into the air instead of dripping down to the ground. Before fainting I see that thing suddenly shoot off into the distance with blinding speed.

This time I am much less surprised to find my eyes opening. I don't even bother checking my chest as I can feel the wound closed. I lay on the ground and stare up at the sky. Depressing thoughts fill me. I should have known, It saved me from death before. There is no way this thing is going to let me die. I can't even end things myself Then I soon turned to anger. You fucking flower, I swear to every god that there is, I will end you. Fuck saving the world, I just want to make sure you suffer for forcing this on me. You will regret this. And then a realization Wait a moment, if the flower is still with me then what the hell was that thing that flew off into the distance? Soon I realized that I could feel it. Off in the distance there were 5 presences. They felt just like the flower. Does this mean that it copied itself? There are 5 more of these fuckers now? This supposed to be some kind of defense mechanism to make sure I don't finish you off? Well too bad, this just means I can have fun destroying you a whole six times.

It didn't take me too long to find what i was looking for considering I simply followed the flower's presence. I could feel them, the others. Its a strange feeling, almost akin to a sort of 6th sense. When I approach what I am met with surprises me, they are girls, young girls who look only a little younger than me. Instead of maintaining the guise of a flower it decided to become human? They looked a bit confused. The girl with the short white hair notices me. "Hey, you, who are you? you don't feel like the other people. You.... you feel more like us." It's talking to me. The flower. Is this a human standing in front of me? It can't be. "Hey, did you hear me?" The other girls were now rallying behind the white haired one, like she was the oldest of a group of sisters. With that thought I said "I’m your sister, your older sister. You are all sisters."

That seemed to clear up some of the confusion amongst them. The girls all looked at each with bright and happy faces. The blue haired girl asks "What’s your name big sister?" Ah... right. I still haven't gotten that issue solved. My name, what is it? I am a nobody with nothing. I have no reason to possess a name. I am simply empty. But I don't think that’s going to satisfy these girls. As I ponder over what my life is an answer comes to me. "Zero" I answer "My name is Zero" The blue haired girl smiles and says "Nice to meet you Zero I'm..." she stops. The girl seems to be thinking hard mumbling to herself "Uh.... I am?" The others latch on to her train of thought and develop troubling expressions on their faces.

The white haired one holds her hand in front of her face as if to confirm its existence. "Who am I?" She says. The blue hair, recovering from her momentary cloudy expression becomes cheerful once more. "Well, if I don't have a name then big sister Zero will just have to give me one." She says with a smile. That’s when they all looked at me with expecting gazes. They want me to name them? Really? I could hardly even come up with my own name. Zero is just representative of the emptiness that is my life. Their faces though, they were almost desperate. they wanted to latch on to anything that can give them answers and here I am telling them I’m their big sister. Of course they are going to look to me for guidance.

There was no way someone like me could come up with cute and girly names. Even trying to think of them was becoming a pain. Well let’s just go with what’s easiest, if my name is Zero then I point to the white haired one and say "Your name is One" next the cheerful blue hair "Your name is Two" Then I pick the one with long purple hair "Your name is Three." After her was the one with brown hair. "Your name is Four" lastly, the blonde "Your name is Five". Rather than complain about such stupid names they all seemed to be pretty accepting of them. I was thinking they had nothing else to propose. As they were all growing accustomed to their names I began to mentally berate myself. Dammit what are you doing? Are you here to play house or are you here to kill them?

Just then the one I had dubbed Two grabbed my arm and started pulling me saying "Come on big sister come play with us." Four says "Should we really be playing?" One seemed to be deep in thought; Three appeared to be absently staring at the clouds. After dragging me into their group Five says "You are really cute sister, will I be as cute as you when I grow up?" I don't even know what to say, I don't know what to do. Their faces, the emotions on their faces are clearly genuine. These things, these girls, they are real humans. While wrapped in my indecision I was forced to play with Two, avoid angering Four who seemed to be all business and give advice on how to be beautiful to Five. One had begun pacing back and forth like she was some sort of strategist not a little girl. Three laid on the grass and fell asleep.

Later that night I was standing above the sleeping little ones with my sword in hand. Alright, I’m going to do this, let’s try a beheading this time. Just then I heard One's voice call out "What are you doing?" Remember how I said killing was a habit? Especially when there is a witness my body moves before I can think. I rush at One and instantly decapitate her. Even though I know it shouldn't be my first thought is Oh shit, I just killed her. Fuck. Then of course I remember. No, stop acting attached you are TRYING to kill them right? This is good. As if I needed more reminders that these sweet little girls came from the flower, I see a bunch of dark energy come out of One's severed neck and reach out to grab her head. It then successfully reattaches it.

In less then a minute One opens her eyes. She seems confused reaches up to feel her neck sees that it is attached then looks over to see me holding a sword coated in her blood. I had already surmised that One was probably the most intelligent and fast to understand of all the sisters, I was sure she understood almost right away. She stands up and instead of asking the pointlessly obvious question of why did you try and kill me. She instead asks a much smarter question, "What are we?" My answer "Destruction, we are all fated to bring destruction to the world." Maintaining a calm attitude One simply replies with "I see." She then asks "You will continue to try and kill us?" "I’m afraid so, but obviously conventional methods won't work so I’m going to have to find out what will." I turn and begin to walk off. One says this as I part "Don't think we will simply lay down to die." I wave back to her and say "That would spoil the fun if you did."


These next ones are a series of the different sisters going through the same or similar events. Different perspectives lead to a different story even through the same events.

Sisters Summoning Series

Two
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I was the first to arrive at our sister meeting. Im always so excited for these things. Even though we are always together in our fight against evil these events seem even more special. Word is that One has more knowledge to share with us. I swear One must be like the smartest girl in the whole world. I thought while waiting for the others. I mean she is always reading and studying stuff. Pretty much everything we have learned about ourselves came from One. Except for the very early things from big sis Zero, but mentioning Zero seems to be a taboo around One. One doesn't seem to like Zero and tells us not to like her too. But she hasn't said why yet, I guess that’s just another one of One's big plans. I try not to worry about stuff, One worries enough for all of us so I have to be cheerful enough for all of us.

Four was next to arrive and as I expected she was practically dragging Three with her. She was saying to Three "I told you before that One called a meeting today and then I find that you are still doing all that weird stuff. What other choice did I have but to bring you with me." Three replies with "It's not weird, I'm experimenting." I decide to call out to them "Hi Hi! Three! Four! How’s it going?" Noticing me Four smiles and says "Ah Two! Wonderful to see you still in good spirits." I walk over and give Four a big hug which she seems to hesitate and then returns my embrace. Three walks up to me and says "Experimenting is not weird, right Two?" I don't know anything about experimenting but I think I recall hearing One ask Three to do some experiments. Three is more inclined to do all that science stuff. It seems One is more on the magic side. And if One asked her to do it it can't be weird.

"Nope, Not weird." I reply as enthusiastically as possible. Three seems to give a "I told you so" look to Four and Four looks like she is about to burst. I had to step in before they started fighting "Ok, Should we play something before the meeting starts?" Four says "You play too much sister." Three just looks at me as if to say "Really? Play?" Four continues by saying "With your strength your time would be better put to use fighting the evil lords." I reply "I am doing my part trust me. But these crazy muscles are hard to get used to. Just when I think I got the hang of them they go and get stronger." A sort of angry look showed on Four's face. While Three seemed to be staring off into the clouds as she so often does.

Our wonderful leader, big sis One arrived next. She said her greetings asked if there was any news then sat down to wait for our youngest sister before starting the meeting. Sometime later Five stumbled towards us. Her clothes were completely disheveled, and her hair a unkempt mess. After seeing us she made an effort to straighten herself out but not before Four went off. Oh man, now she is going to yell at her. "How long did you intend to keep us waiting?!" Four was shouting at Five Those two don't get along at all. We are all sisters why can't we just be happy to be with each other? "And look at you, I would think that you of all people little sister would make sure to maintain a proper appearance at all times. Aren't you always going on about beauty?" Four's barrage of words continues.

Five puts up her hands in a gesture to try and calm Four. "Sorry dear sisters I thought I would have plenty of time for a nice romp in the woods. I hadn't tried it before. So of course first I had to find a man and then...." Five continues to give the details of her outdoors love making even though none of us really wanted to hear it. If its Five we are talking about we all kind of assumed that’s what she was doing. One took this opportunity to stand up and speak. "As much as we may not want to hear the details of how Five satisfies herself it is for that very subject that we are meeting here today." Apparently Five had been on a part where she was mentioning her chest, so she says "oooh are we going to talk about my breasts?"

One continues as if ignoring Five "It has only been a few years since we started our quest to rid the land of evil. Our bodies have grown at extremely fast pace. much faster than normal humans. We of course are not normal humans, we are Intoners. " She pauses for a second as if to let that sink in. I am proud to be an Intoner, I wouldn't have it any other way. One continues. "It seems that each of us has a certain part that grows even faster than our sisters. Two's muscles, Three's hair, Four's fingernails and yes Five, your breasts." Five giggles. One's speech resumes "Today I have asked you all to gather because I have confirmed another aspect of our growth. With Three's help the two of us analyzed and compared and determined that Intoners have a much greater sex drive then humans."

With that Five says "You see Four, it’s not my fault." I did not hear Four's reply. I was thinking. I can't deny that what One says seems to be true. All too often I am hit with the uncontrollable desire to touch myself. Ah if only I had a dashing prince to do it for me, wouldn't that be heaven? "Through more of my own study" One resumes "I have found a solution. We are going to summon a being known as a Disciple. These disciples are going to serve two purposes. They will serve as a conduit to focus and enhance our Intoner powers, and also as a man with which to sate your desires." So he will be our lover? But what if I don't like him? No, bad Two, you have to be positive. I am absolutely sure I will get the man of my dreams, just wait and see.

One teaches each of us the process of how to summon a disciple, I was so nervous the whole time just thinking about who he might be. I remained positive though, positive thinking is the best way to get through any situation. I started working on the ritual and before I knew it all that was left was the final word of summoning. I tried to calm my anxious heart Its ok Two, you followed big sis One's instructions exactly, there is no way you messed up. I shout "Incurio!" and the magic circle lights up with a blinding bright light. For a minute I was unsure of whether the light had vanished or not. for the man standing there now was just as bright as that light had been he shined beautifully and my first thought of him was Oh my god, He's gorgeous! The man says "I see you are enraptured by my beauty. I am drawn in by your own amazing beauty my lady, yours is truly the only beauty that surpasses me"

ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod my heart is beating way too fast. I have never been this excited in my life. He is the dashing prince of my dreams! Even his voice is dreamy! Ah I could just melt away right now. "May I ask your name my lady?" He asked me such a simple question but it took me forever to be able to open my mouth. Even then I stuttered badly. "T...Tw....Two. My... my n,,name is Two" "Ah.." he said and then began repeating my name "Two, Two, Two, Two." I had to stop him I was going to explode at this rate. In a quiet voice almost like a whimper I say. "Stop saying my name so much." He replies "But I must carve your name onto my very soul. That way I will never forget you." Am I dead? Did I die? My summon ritual exploded and killed me. I must be in heaven, there is no other explanation.

Seeing me in my completely frozen, bliss like state he must have decided to move forward since I wouldn't be coming out of that on my own. "If I may have the honor of having my lady refer to me by the name Cent." Cent his name is Cent. I was far to embarrassed to do what he did and say his name out loud but I said it in my head. Cent, Cent, Cent, Cent, Cent. "I am here to be your partner in all things my lady." I finally remembered the reason we had summoned disciples in the first place. As if it was even possible I blushed even more at the thought. He is going to be my lover? No way, really? This is too much, I am going to burst from all this happiness. Is that possible? Can people actually die of happiness? I would be the first one to go if so, so I guess that means you can't.

The major question now was what do we do now. At the moment we were both gazing into the others eyes, could we do this forever? "My lady, I think it may be best if we found more comfortable surroundings in which to get to know each other better." Kyaaaaaaaa!!! Is that an offer to take me to bed?! Alright I am seriously about to faint, calm down Two, calm down. I clearly start hyperventilating. I think I just need to get away from him for a minute. Cent looked worried about me but I told him I needed some air and walked off. I know this is probably really rude, but fainting in front of him would have been too much for me to handle.

After getting a fair distance I take a deep breath. Ok Two, when you go back you have to be the best Two you can possibly be. You can't very well be a stumbling idiot in front of him now can you? I take a moment, slap my face, have another deep breath, and then return. I put on my biggest smile and say to him "Nice to meet you Cent. I’m looking forward to being with you."


Three
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Stupid Four. I was in the middle of an experiment when she had to burst in and drag me with her. After the previous task One gave me I found a fascinating area of study. The sensitivity of the human body. Different places are more reactive to outside stimulus then others. And different people are more sensitive then others, Why? Why does it vary from person to person? Is the human body not built as a copy of the same
template? What creates these differences? Is it possible to modify them? I have to know. Unfortunately I can't seem to pry myself from the gauntlet of my little sister. I could be making a breakthrough right now, or even working on making a new doll. I audibly let out a little gasp at a realization. Oh no, I don't know how long I will be gone. I hope my test subjects don't die. Maybe I should have left them a water bowl or something. This is just as annoying as having pets. Dolls are so much better.

I decide to go over the results from the previous experiment and think on my hypothesis for the current one in order to pass the time. Before long I could see Two ahead and so I finally ask Four "Why are we here?" She looks back at me with that face she gets all the time. "I told you before that One called a meeting today and then I find that you are still doing all that weird stuff. What other choice did I have but to bring you with me." Weird? I don't think so. "It’s not weird, I’m experimenting" just then Two runs over to us and with her usual cheery self says "Hi Hi! Three! Four! How’s it going?" Why is she so happy all the time? Is there some secret? Is it something only she has? I wonder if I could find out by researching her? Would she let me do experiments on her? No, I guess not, we are sisters right It might be wrong to experiment on your sister.

Two hugs Four and Four looks uncomfortable at first. I wonder if she was worried Two might crush her How strong is Two now? Could she actually do it? Could she crush a person by hugging them? A fascinating question. Two isn't the kind of person to like killing though. So I don't think she would do it, even if I asked. I guess Four realized that Two wouldn't crush her and so she hugged back. After Four calling my experiment weird I wanted to ask Two. "Experimenting is not weird, right Two?" She takes a moment to respond as if formulating an answer and then happily says "Nope, Not weird." I turned to look at Four to see if she was ready to change her judgment, she didn't seem to be. Then Two says "Ok, Should we play something before the meeting starts?" and Four replies "You play too much sister."

Play. It certainly is a word that Two uses a lot. What does she mean by play anyways. I suppose my dolls could be considered playing. I don't think Two has any dolls though. If I recall her usual method of play involves running around chasing each other. Is that considered play? Why does Two play so much? Why does Four hate playing so much? My thoughts continued on the same such patterns until I saw One arrive. One said hello to each of us and asked if there was anything important to report but then sat down. I first thought she would be taking a nap but then it occurred to me that maybe she was just waiting for Five. But on that thought I decided to take my own nap.

I noticed One get up just before Five stumbled towards us. She looked different, she was messy. It's opposite Five. Almost like an expected chemical reaction in one of my experiments Four starts shouting at Five. Four must really like shouting at us. She shouts at me and at Two and at Five. I wonder if she gets some level of enjoyment from shouting. Does it give her pleasure? That would indeed be a new level I have not tried. I feel like if I asked her about it she would just shout at me. So I would not gain any useful data.

Five seems to be talking about having sex with some man. Not that its anything surprising coming from her. She obviously hasn't learned to keep that a secret from the others. I remember one time I was in the middle of trying out all the different sexual positions I had learned when Four arrived to tell me some sort of news. I saw no reason to cease what I was doing when I could hear her just fine. She started shouting like usual saying how that’s a private thing that others shouldn't know about. When I asked Two later she agreed. So clearly its less of a pain to just not tell the others about it. Guess Five doesn't know that.

I often don't listen to much of what the others are saying, its generally completely useless. I don't start paying attention again until One speaks. "As much as we may not want to hear the details of how Five satisfies herself it is for that very subject that we are meeting here today." Five says to that "oooh are we going to talk about my breasts?" I would so desperately love the chance to study Five's breasts. They are so big and they have been growing at such a rapid rate since we were kids. That said I would also love to study Four's fingernails and Two's muscles. But what would be most interesting to study would be My thoughts get cut off as I remember that I should be listening to One.

She must have already been talking, she was now saying "It seems that each of us has a certain part that grows even faster than our sisters. Two's muscles, Three's hair, Four's fingernails and yes Five, your breasts." Can One read minds? That’s just what I was thinking about. She continues "Today I have asked you all to gather because I have confirmed another aspect of our growth. With Three's help the two of us analyzed and compared and determined that Intoners have a much greater sex drive then humans." I experimented on myself and then on various human men and women. It was a very interesting experiment that lead me to my current research on the sensitivity of the human body. Well, after that experiment I gave my results to One. I wonder if she experimented on herself? I wish she would have let me join.

One was saying "I have found a solution. We are going to summon a being known as a Disciple. These disciples are going to serve two purposes. They will serve as a conduit to focus and enhance our Intoner powers, and also as a man with which to sate your desires." Oh? an interesting solution sister. It’s alright to experiment on them right? Maybe he will be just like my dolls, I do love my dolls so much after all. Ah I should have brought them. I wonder if the others would like them as much as I do, they are so cute after all. One finds me not too much later to explain how to summon my disciple. I follow the procedure accurately and the say the word of summoning "Incurio!" When the flash of light disappears there is a short old man standing in front of me. I was wondering what he would say so I just wait and see if he talks.

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"Do you like riddles?" I ask. The old man says "Uh.. well I suppose." "Then I suppose we can get along." Another minute of silence passes. "Why are you so short?" I ask. He replies "Don't let my height fool you my lady, I assure you my trouser snake is as big as they come." "Really? How big is it?" The man immediately takes off his pants and shows me. I don't really need to measure it to see. "Ohhhhh That is big." The man smiles and says "I am very confident in my abilities my lady, I can guarantee you will writhing with pleasure in no time. One night with me and you won't be able to think about anything else." "Is that so? I will have to test your hypothesis then."

Tomorrow after our experiment I say "hmmmmm.... you're wrong. My mental state is still capable of other thought." He seems a little disappointed. "Are you saying you didn't enjoy yourself my lady?" I answer him "No, I only said your claim that I wouldn't be able to think of anything else was incorrect. This experiment was very enjoyable. And it will be easy this way, I won't have to go out looking for humans to have sex with now. I can focus on my experiments and my dolls." The man says "I am known as Octa." "Like octopus." "uh.. may I know your name my lady." "Oh. Right. Three."


Four
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Fully cleaned and dressed, Check
Wearing my gauntlets, Check
Map of the area, Check
Lunch for the trip, Check
Everything organized and secured, Check

After confirming all the items on my checklist I was ready to head out to the sister meeting that One had called. Normally I wouldn't leave this early but I was sure I would have to pick up Three otherwise she would completely forget about the meeting. I bet she is doing more of those weird creepy experiments. One time I walked in on her doing some sort of disgusting sexual position with a man and she didn't even stop after noticing me. What the fuck is with that? How mentally wrong in the head can you be? What does she even do to get these guys? Try and act all mysterious and whatever I bet. What a joke, you are not mysterious, you're a fucking psychopath. And those dolls you seem so proud of are really disturbing. Honestly, why am I stuck with such a creature as a sister. I sigh and head out to find Three, hoping I can avoid anything that makes me want to gouge out my eyes.

I have asked myself why I put myself through such suffering, babysitting the others. Basically the reason is that if I didn't it would cause trouble for One. The last thing I want is to cause trouble for One. She has enough going on already, so I have to do all I can to support her, even if that means looking after our pathetic excuses for sisters. Of course when I find Three she seems to be poking and prodding at some random man she had chained up. I did not want to witness this scene for a second longer then I had to. I simply walked up grabbed Three by the arm and walked out. She struggled for a minute but I am not about to let her go. Thankfully she remained quiet for the whole trip offering little to no resistance. And then once we have arrived she asks "Why are we here?" I knew it! I knew she would forget there is nothing but psycho shit in that head of hers why would you ever remember something One said. Maybe all that hair screwed with her brain.

I try to restrain my anger even if I feel it is justified. "I told you before that One called a meeting today and then I find that you are still doing all that weird stuff. What other choice did I have but to bring you with me." Three says ""It’s not weird, I’m experimenting" I choose to ignore that since Two has now called out to us "Hi Hi! Three! Four! How’s it going?" Oh boy there she goes. There is no way anyone could possibly be this happy all the time. And yet I find myself saying, "Ah Two! Wonderful to see you still in good spirits." She runs right up and hugs me. Grrr. dammit I didn't say you could hug me, get off. I decided long ago its best not to make waves so I return her hug until she lets go. Afterward Three asks "Experimenting is not weird, right Two?" I should have known she always seeks the others to tell her she isn't the obvious nutcase that she is. Two's answer is just as predictable "Nope, Not weird." she says.

I get the feeling Three thinks that just because Two said that that it means she is now certifiably normal. Two would say that sticking knives up your ass is a perfectly acceptable way to clean your shit if it meant not upsetting one of her precious sisters. Then Two says what is basically her catchphrase. "Ok, Should we play something before the meeting starts?" Play this, play that, play all the dam time. Am I ever going to get through to this woman that the world does not revolve around playing? "You play too much sister." I say. She would be best put to use slaying giants or something. With her simple mindset and ridiculous muscles. But no, look her smiling that pretty smile in that perfectly formed body, She has these outrageous muscles but they don't affect her appearance at all. And she has no appreciation for it, not one bit.

I tell her "With your strength your time would be better put to use fighting the evil lords." She answers "I am doing my part trust me. But these crazy muscles are hard to get used to. Just when I think I got the hang of them they go and get stronger." ARRRRRGH!! DAM YOU! DAM YOU AND YOUR AWESOME MUSCLES!! I really had to calm down at this point so I decide to walk away for a minute. Fortunately my saving grace soon arrived, One. There is nothing at all that is wrong with One. One is perfect. If everyone else in the world hated me it wouldn't matter as long as I had One. I love her. She greeted each of us and asked if there was any big news to report. I of course had loads of things I wanted to talk about, but nothing that would be important big news, so I had to restrain myself. I must be the best sister to One that I can be.

After greeting everyone One sits down and waits. Clearly she is waiting for our youngest sister to arrive. We ended up having to wait far longer than we should have. And then when Five finally decides to get her ass over here she looks a complete mess. Her dress is crumpled and her hair unkempt, I could not contain myself "How long did you intend to keep us waiting?! And look at you, I would think that you of all people little sister would make sure to maintain a proper appearance at all times. Aren't you always going on about beauty?" You claim to be a paragon of beauty but look at you, You look like some slut that was just fucking in the woods. Five puts on that look like she is apologizing, I bet she isn't sorry. ""Sorry dear sisters I thought I would have plenty of time for a nice romp in the woods. I hadn't tried it before. So of course first I had to find a man and then...."

Oh my god, I can't fucking believe it. I made that fucking in the woods comparison because I thought that even you wouldn't sink that low. You have got to be shitting me. I get one little sister and I’m stuck with this bitch that would shove any phallic shaped object into any one of her holes. Fortunately, One like the savior she is decided to save us from Five. By beginning her speech "As much as we may not want to hear the details of how Five satisfies herself it is for that very subject that we are meeting here today." With that line Five just had to say "oooh are we going to talk about my breasts?" Not everything is about your dam tits. God I hate those things. You flaunt them around like crazy and you tease me about being flat. It’s not like I want to be flat ok. You don't have to fucking rub it in.

One seems perfectly capable of ignoring Five though, I wish I could, she continues "It has only been a few years since we started our quest to rid the land of evil. Our bodies have grown at extremely fast pace. much faster than normal humans. We of course are not normal humans, we are Intoners. It seems that each of us has a certain part that grows even faster than our sisters. Two's muscles, Three's hair, Four's fingernails and yes Five, your breasts." I try my best to ignore the fact that Five giggled at the mention of her breasts. I had already subconsciously tried to hide my hands. That’s the reason I wear gauntlets after all, my fucking fingernails, I go one day without chopping them off and I literally have claws. There is no way I can show that to people. One continues "Today I have asked you all to gather because I have confirmed another aspect of our growth. With Three's help the two of us analyzed and compared and determined that Intoners have a much greater sex drive then humans."

I didn't have enough time to collect all my thoughts on this before Five says "You see Four, it’s not my fault." If ever there was a time I wanted to just pound Five in the face this was it. Sure go ahead and blame this for you not going even half a day without fucking some guy. You realize this applies to all of us you know. I have been suffering because of this. I am not the type to corral random men into my bed. Its low and crude. Even so that doesn't make the desire go away At this point I am too tired of her crap to really get angry. All I can manage to say to Five is in a very exhausted sounding voice "Just shut up Five." One then resumes "Through more of my own study I have found a solution. We are going to summon a being known as a Disciple. These disciples are going to serve two purposes. They will serve as a conduit to focus and enhance our Intoner powers, and also as a man with which to sate your desires."

I don't care if it is a man created for the express purpose of fucking our brains out that doesn't mean I’m going to let him touch me. I’m not about to sink to Five's level. Bonds of love are what lead to physical romance. I am not going to let this dam desire change my principles. But with that said, if One wants me to have a disciple then I will have a disciple. With her speech finished One starts going around teaching each of us how to summon a disciple. After instructing me I think Well let’s get this over with. And set up the ritual. After completing it I say the final word of summoning "Incurio!"

When the bright light fades I am met with this tall middle aged man. He actually looked like quite the gentleman, This might go better than I thought. He kneels down and acknowledges me "My lady." As I already stated I’m not going to jump into bed with him. So what use can I get out of him? Considering this I decide on my first words to this disciple. "Would you die for me?" He answers "Yes of course my lady." If he had just stopped right there everything would have been just fine but no, his answer continued. "You are free to use and abuse me in whatever form you desire. I can be your human shield in battle and take all the injuries that would have gone to you. If I ever displease you feel free to punish me in the most severe manner possible. There is no need to hold back. Kick me, me step on me, anything. I can and will take any form of suffering and agony all for your sake."

This was a first. Never in my life had I been at a complete loss for words. So instead of trying to find a response to whatever that was I decided to simply move forward. "What is your name disciple?" "Decadus my lady. Of course if it pleases you you may call me be any derogatory term you can think of." This is the second time already he has said something weird like that. So it wasn't a fluke? Ok I got to find out just how weird this guy is. Let’s see what he says next. "Do you know what your duties as a disciple are?" "I do my lady, I am to aid you in battle, help focus your powers and be your willing bedmate." A surprisingly normal answer. "You can forget about the bedmate thing. I won't be requiring you in that regard."

He makes a face that looks part shocked, part excited and says "Are you sure my lady? You won't let me serve you?" The way he worded that kind of creeped me out, I reply "That’s right, you won't be sharing my bed." He shivers and Is that a moan? Did he just moan? "Are you cold?" I ask. "No my lady." "I thought I just saw you shiver." "I did indeed shiver. It was because you were the cold one my lady. To deny me the duty I was made for, it is too painful, I could not restrain myself." Another speechless moment, two of them in as many minutes. Here I tried to think like One, avoid all the fluff questions and ask the one that really gets to the heart of the matter.

Thinking about it for a minute I found the perfect question. "Why would something painful make you shiver?" He answers me with "The exquisite sensation of pain is very enjoyable. I was unable to contain my pleasure at the painful thought of being denied one of my purposes." Great, just fucking great. This guy is a completely helpless masochist. I am unable to restrain my look of disgust and so Decadus says "Don't look at me like that my lady, you are going to make me shiver even more."

I turn to walk off, not even saying anything else to him. I hear him moan again behind my back and then rush to catch up to me. He asks "Can I know your name my lady?" There is no way I am telling this thing my name. After I clearly ignore him he says "Oooooh.. to be ignored so completely. What a cold shoulder. You must truly understand me my lady. I will serve you till the end of time." It was not until quite a while later that I was forced to tell him my name.


Five
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I was just finishing a amazing meal made by this super famous chef I had been tracking down forever when I remembered we were going to have a sisters meeting today. Now this is a problem. If I head over there now I will miss my after lunch love making. It does take some time to find a good man after all. I swear someone should open up a brothel for women not just ones filled with women. I would really rather not have to wait until after the meeting, after lunch is the best time really. After lunch and before bed, every day. That’s been my routine now for I don't how long. I don't see why I should have to break it. But I don't want to keep my dear sisters waiting too long. What to do what to do?
In order to save time I was already looking around for a man while thinking of how to cut down on time in order to get the meeting sooner. Then it occurred to me, Weren't we going to me just outside of a forest? I think I have a marvelous idea. I smiled at my own genius. As much as I may complain it actually isn't difficult to find men. Most of them are looking for women anyways. I just go up to them show off my world class breasts and ask if they want to come with me. 9 times out of 10 that works. As for the tenth time I bet those guys prefer men over women, I mean look at me, what man wouldn't want me?

I grab myself a handsome hunk, or at least the best I can find around here, and then bring him along walking towards the sister meeting. The man starts getting rather impatient with all the walking. I find myself having to reassure him that this is all worth it. I certainly hope he is all worth it. I like a man that is not afraid to speak his mind but too much complaining is a big no no. As we get close to the meeting site I veer off into the forest and find a good spot. Then I turn around to my man who was looking significantly annoyed and say "Alright! Time for some forest fucking! Think you can satisfy me?" The man smiles, clearly confident and comes towards me

Later, after I bid farewell to this afternoons lover I started walking the last bit to the meeting. I was so caught up in thinking about his performance that I didn't even think to check my appearance until I was already in sight of my sisters. When they see me is the first thing they do greet me? Say hello to their wonderful and beautiful little sister? No, I hear this "How long did you intend to keep us waiting?!" Ah that would be Four. She continues talking but once Four goes into lecture mode I tend not to listen to her. I swear that girl needs to get laid. Although I wonder if she is so tight that she would crush any man that tried to enter her. Well plenty of foreplay could loosen her up. Going a few rounds with a well hung stud would be the best thing to get her to relax. If only she would let me introduce her to some men.

After It seemed she finished I put on my most apologetic face, I really did try and get here early after all, and say "Sorry dear sisters I thought I would have plenty of time for a nice romp in the woods. I hadn't tried it before. So of course first I had to find a man and then" I thought I might lighten their spirits with the tale of my first time doing it in a forest. It was a rather engaging story I thought. Apparently One didn't think so. Just when I was getting to the part where he started massaging my chest she says "As much as we may not want to hear the details of how Five satisfies herself it is for that very subject that we are meeting here today." That very subject? What does she mean? "oooh are we going to talk about my breasts?" I voice my thoughts out loud. It doesn't seem so as One goes on talking. Did she hear me?

"It has only been a few years since we started our quest to rid the land of evil. Our bodies have grown at extremely fast pace. much faster than normal humans. We of course are not normal humans, we are Intoners. It seems that each of us has a certain part that grows even faster than our sisters. Two's muscles, Three's hair, Four's fingernails and yes Five, your breasts." I let out a giggle. So she was listening, It is hard not to acknowledge this perfect bosom of mine after all. One keeps talking. "Today I have asked you all to gather because I have confirmed another aspect of our growth. With Three's help the two of us analyzed and compared and determined that Intoners have a much greater sex drive then humans."

I knew it! When I would talk to some of the human women they were surprised at how much sex I had, It almost seemed like they thought it wasn't normal. Ah ha! This means that it should be totally fine for Four to do it too. I bet she has been suffering not having any men. I try to tell her that it’s not just me "You see Four, it’s not my fault." Being late like that earlier could happen to any of us. If all of them have the same desire I do then I’m surprised that I don't hear more about the men they sleep with. At first I thought Four wasn't going to reply but then she quietly said "Just shut up Five" She doesn't look so good. I wonder if she really has been suffering because of this and hearing the news has been hard for her.

Before I could think of a way to comfort Four, One's speech keeps going. "Through more of my own study I have found a solution. We are going to summon a being known as a Disciple. These disciples are going to serve two purposes. They will serve as a conduit to focus and enhance our Intoner powers, and also as a man with which to sate your desires." What an excellent idea! Isn't One great? I could never come up with all that complicated stuff that she does. Whatever would we do without her. Now ending her speech One starts instructing all of us on how to summon our disciples. I am really excited about it.

This means I won’t have to keep looking for and switching men. He is going to be my own personal love toy. Not that he won't enjoy it of course. Being mindful of your partners pleasure, not just your own is key to amazing lovemaking. After getting everything setup just like One said I speak the final word of summoning. "Incurio!" A bright light shows up as the summon occurs. As soon as I am able to see beyond it I see the cutest sight ever. Unable to contain my thoughts I say out loud "Oh my god! What an adorable pretty boy!" I am past the point of self-control I just had to grab him and press him to my chest. I swivel myself left and right with excitement with each word. "You. Are. Just. Too. Cute." Then he started hitting me and I realized I must be suffocating him.

I instantly let go and freak out with worry. "Oh no! I’m so sorry! I was just so excited. It’s no good that I nearly suffocated you on our first meeting huh?" He says nothing, still gasping for air it seems. I try and smooth things over "I have met some guys that are into breath play though. They say that my breasts emit the most wonderful smell. But if you aren't into that then its fine, we have lots of things we can get into. Of course if you are I can smoother you in my bosom whenever you want." He just looks at me with this weird look. Have I offended him? What should I do? Finally he speaks "Its whatever, don't worry about it."

He brushes himself off and then asks "So you are the person I am to be serving?" I do the best curtsy I can and reply "Indeed I am. I'm Five." He does a small half bow and says "Alright then Lady Five." "Oh no no no. There is no need for all that Lady stuff. Just call me Five. We are going to be really close after all. What should I call you?" "I'm Dito" "Ok Dito, what should we do first?" He sighs and answers "Do we have to do anything?" "But of course we do! There is so much in the world to experience! We could go on a hunt for some legendary food, or discuss what would be the best matching outfits for us, or even start discovering every inch of each other’s bodies." "I pick none of the above."

I frown "Well then mr party pooper what are you into?" He first looks apathetic "I don't know, I guess like blood and guts and stuff." but then as he goes on he gets pretty excited. "Like have you ever cut off a guy’s head and then looked down through where his neck was so you can see his spine? Its sooo gross, I love it!" No, this is wrong. My cute pretty boy doesn't say things like that. Did I mess up my summoning? I think One said something about being mentally connected with our disciple in some way. I wonder if I can use that to make him not say such things. He is ruining his look with such language.

I try and focus to find that sort of mental connection with Dito. It takes a minute but then I find it. I grab onto it and think Dito, you are not to say disturbing things like what you just did anymore. I guess it worked because I don't hear him say things like that anymore. He is still the same Dito otherwise though, he is my cute little disciple and we are going to have so many fun adventures together.
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer
It reminded me of what I have read on the attempted translation of the Drakengard 3 novel and of course the 'novellas' that accompany the game. I was able to understand what you have wrote mainly because I have some background knowledge about Drakengard 3. I believed it would not make sense to me if I did not play Drakengard 3.

I would most likely add a paragraph of background information if I wanted people who do not much about the Drakengard series to read it. The paragraph would be quite similar to the descriptions in the timeline of the Drakengard universe which would indicate:

1. Who Zero was before she became Zero. She was a serial killer who was apprehended by the authorities of that time.

2. What is the "Flower" and what are its origins. It was a doomsday device sent to the world by the nihilistic Gods who created the world (who now want to destroy it). It possessed the imprisoned Zero. Realising that the "Flower" would use her as a vessel to destroy the world, Zero tried to remove it but to no avail. She attempted suicide resulting in the birth of her 'sisters', women who possessed the evil powers of the "Flower".

I believe that the attempted novelisation of the game, spinoff works based on the game and the game backstory itself contradict each other, making it all the more confusing.

The novelisation suggested that the sisters were based on the people Zero killed.
The game suggested that the sisters were based on the women who were imprisoned along with Zero.
(Correct me if I am wrong)
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echoeagle3 Oppai Overlord
leonard267 wrote...
It reminded me of what I have read on the attempted translation of the Drakengard 3 novel and of course the 'novellas' that accompany the game. I was able to understand what you have wrote mainly because I have some background knowledge about Drakengard 3. I believed it would not make sense to me if I did not play Drakengard 3.

I would most likely add a paragraph of background information if I wanted people who do not much about the Drakengard series to read it. The paragraph would be quite similar to the descriptions in the timeline of the Drakengard universe which would indicate:

1. Who Zero was before she became Zero. She was a serial killer who was apprehended by the authorities of that time.

2. What is the "Flower" and what are its origins. It was a doomsday device sent to the world by the nihilistic Gods who created the world (who now want to destroy it). It possessed the imprisoned Zero. Realising that the "Flower" would use her as a vessel to destroy the world, Zero tried to remove it but to no avail. She attempted suicide resulting in the birth of her 'sisters', women who possessed the evil powers of the "Flower".

I believe that the attempted novelisation of the game, spinoff works based on the game and the game backstory itself contradict each other, making it all the more confusing.

The novelisation suggested that the sisters were based on the people Zero killed.
The game suggested that the sisters were based on the women who were imprisoned along with Zero.
(Correct me if I am wrong)


First of all thank you for commenting. Now moving on, The Flower is always a mystery. Very little concrete information on it exists. I played all the branches and read all the translated novellas and I didn't see anything that for sure said it was a device. To me it seemed more like it was one of the gods themselves. I read through it myself and I don't believe its hard to understand even for people unfamiliar with the series. You said I don't explain this

leonard267 wrote...
It possessed the imprisoned Zero. Realising that the "Flower" would use her as a vessel to destroy the world, Zero tried to remove it but to no avail. She attempted suicide resulting in the birth of her 'sisters', women who possessed the evil powers of the "Flower".


Only thats what the whole first fic was about. So I very much did explain that.

As for exactly what the sisters were based on and their precise method of creation I could not find anything. There was a line in the game that gave me the impression that they sprung forth from Zero's body. So thats what I went with.
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leonard267 FAKKU Non-Writer

Only thats what the whole first fic was about. So I very much did explain that.

As for exactly what the sisters were based on and their precise method of creation I could not find anything. There was a line in the game that gave me the impression that they sprung forth from Zero's body. So thats what I went with.


No, no. It all has to do with my tastes in reading where I want some background information to be provided especially if the story concerned has a fantasy setting.

I did not really say that you did not explain what was happening, what I said was that you ought to provide background information especially for those who are not acquainted with the story. I think the main reason why fanfiction does not appeal to everyone is because the author assumes that the reader is familiar with the universe he or she is parodying.

I can't tell what is happening because everything is told from Zero's point of view. All I managed to figure is a woman encountering a flower and somehow found herself with 5 other persons. It is quite clear that that flower causes anguish and heals mortal wounds but what does it do other than that that makes it so dangerous? In fact, who is Zero? Why should I care about her and what she thinks? Why is she attempting suicide?

There was a very brief mention of the "Flower" goading her to "destroy the world" that is easily missed. Then again I would dismiss it as a product of a deranged mind. How could one lone woman 'destroy the world'? This is where information (if you aren't sure about the origins of the Flower, you can fabricate those origins) about the Flower told from third person or introduced in the introduction would come in.

he Flower is always a mystery. Very little concrete information on it exists. I played all the branches and read all the translated novellas and I didn't see anything that for sure said it was a device.


I guessed what the "Flower" does after going through the spinoffs like Shin ni Itaru Aka and going through the original Drakengard game and the timeline found on the Drakengard-3 website. It seemed to be responsible for the "Red-Eyes Disease" that sends those afflicted into some bloodthirsty rage.

To give you credit, it reads like The Pit and the Pendulum by Edgar Allan Poe, a work I genuinely hated (but everyone else loves) because it does not say early in the story who that our main character is a victim of the Inquisition and I am left reading paragraph after paragraph of him being subjected to torture with no idea why he was there, who he was so on and so for.

However, Edgar Allan Poe has many readers. He is not a terrible author in fact far from it. I regret to say I don't count myself as one of them because of how I view literature. I would like literature to first inform or at least provide some information to orientate the reader then go into the descriptions.