I am bored, i shall write a book!

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Bioman007 World's Greatest Mang
Ok, my general ideas i have developed with the help of Saibot and Flame.

It will be set in the 12th century, it will be about an army of undead warriors which are advancing into the land of Eldras a peaceful land of farmers and traders fearing for their lives everyday. An event happened 2years ago in which a whole town of men women and childen were evacuated out of their town as it was burnt to the ground by undead. They were left homeless wounded and without any hope left. They were evacuated to a church a few miles from their town. The church was the kings secret lab in which research was being done on the undead, the townsfolk with nowhere else to go were used in a experiment to combat the undead. They had serums taken from the undead injected into them leaving them human but the characteristics of the undead, they would have a never ending thirst and a hunger for flesh, luckily enough the serum was thought out enough to make them hunger undead flesh. This lead the townsfolk to become the hunters of the hunters. With their new found powers of strength and regeneration they killed all the undead that had taken their lives from them and were trained in secrecy by the king to combat the invading forces.

The lead character will be named Deliga Black, named after a famous witch hunter from the 1700s named Elija Black.

sounding a little like Claymore here but it wont when i start writing it =P.

Feedback? Suggestions?
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Bioman007 wrote...
Ok, my general ideas i have developed with the help of Saibot and Flame.

It will be set in the 12th century, it will be about an army of undead warriors which are advancing into the land of Eldras a peaceful land of farmers and traders fearing for their lives everyday. An event happened 2years ago in which a whole town of men women and childen were evacuated out of their town as it was burnt to the ground by undead. They were left homeless wounded and without any hope left. They were evacuated to a church a few miles from their town. The church was the kings secret lab in which research was being done on the undead, the townsfolk with nowhere else to go were used in a experiment to combat the undead. They had serums taken from the undead injected into them leaving them human but the characteristics of the undead, they would have a never ending thirst and a hunger for flesh, luckily enough the serum was thought out enough to make them hunger undead flesh. This lead the townsfolk to become the hunters of the hunters. With their new found powers of strength and regeneration they killed all the undead that had taken their lives from them and were trained in secrecy by the king to combat the invading forces.

The lead character will be named Deliga Black, named after a famous witch hunter from the 1700s named Elija Black.

sounding a little like Claymore here but it wont when i start writing it =P.

Feedback? Suggestions?


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It sounds pretty interesting so far. I'm just wondering where you'll be able to take it from here, seeing that the undead have been killed.

((This post may or may not show up more than once. My apologies, if it does show up more than once.))

Edit: Okay, it only showed once. Good. Anyway, I read the post again just to be sure that what I posted made sense. I'm guessing, from what I gained (while reading it over), that there are more undead, invading, right?[/h]
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You have a decent plot but then can you keep it together is what I want to see.
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Sounds fun! But did you just spoil the ending?
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Bioman007 World's Greatest Mang
HentaiElder wrote...
Bioman007 wrote...
Ok, my general ideas i have developed with the help of Saibot and Flame.

It will be set in the 12th century, it will be about an army of undead warriors which are advancing into the land of Eldras a peaceful land of farmers and traders fearing for their lives everyday. An event happened 2years ago in which a whole town of men women and childen were evacuated out of their town as it was burnt to the ground by undead. They were left homeless wounded and without any hope left. They were evacuated to a church a few miles from their town. The church was the kings secret lab in which research was being done on the undead, the townsfolk with nowhere else to go were used in a experiment to combat the undead. They had serums taken from the undead injected into them leaving them human but the characteristics of the undead, they would have a never ending thirst and a hunger for flesh, luckily enough the serum was thought out enough to make them hunger undead flesh. This lead the townsfolk to become the hunters of the hunters. With their new found powers of strength and regeneration they killed all the undead that had taken their lives from them and were trained in secrecy by the king to combat the invading forces.

The lead character will be named Deliga Black, named after a famous witch hunter from the 1700s named Elija Black.

sounding a little like Claymore here but it wont when i start writing it =P.

Feedback? Suggestions?


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It sounds pretty interesting so far. I'm just wondering where you'll be able to take it from here, seeing that the undead have been killed.

((This post may or may not show up more than once. My apologies, if it does show up more than once.))

Edit: Okay, it only showed once. Good. Anyway, I read the post again just to be sure that what I posted made sense. I'm guessing, from what I gained (while reading it over), that there are more undead, invading, right?[/h]


thats just one town =P

theres tons more undead, a whole army of em =P