(Mid 2017 Event) Just the Few of Us, Yet Another Song Parody

I figured we can do with another song parody that nobody wants! Does "Just the Two of Us" by Bill Withers and Washington Grove Jr. ring a bell?
Enjoy!

Just the Few of Us

I hear you groan and whine,
all that drudgery and grind,
†˜bout those things life throws at you.

I really have to say,
I too think that way,
what do you propose we should do?

Get a few of us
Get together and just gripe!
Get a few of us
Just the few of us
Lobbing sh*t while on Skype
Just the few of us
The few of us

Maybe one fine day,
We’d be tired of slave pay
Truck wrecks and collapsing cranes

Since we think the world’s a mess
And we think we know what’s best
Why not form a clean-up crew?

Just the few of us
Start a business. Why not try?!
Get a few of us
Get a few of us
Building castles to the sky!
Just the few of us
The few of us

When the rain of money falls
And the beauty of it all
Are all the things we’ve done.

Oh, one can only dream
Write it in a song that none will sing
Those things that we can do

Just the few of us
Couldn’t hurt if we tried!
Just the few of us
Just the few of us
In the end we all still die!
Just the few of us
Those few of us.

Not too bad, but Just the Two of Us has a very repetitive chorus so there's not much variety to it. Nice work on the verses, however.

https://my.mixtape.moe/wjqpae.m4a

Ayup I think it works out just fine.

Hey, nice job. You're pretty brave to submit that, and on key, also. It was amusing to notice your accent.

You did make a handful of errors. Honestly, I'm not so sure if it was your or leonard's fault for not completely mimicking the original.