theotaku's try at a writer.
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I found this on my computer since I lost it and totally forgot about this. I came up with this in HS, since I wanted to be a fantasy writer/novalist whatever etc. It still needs fine-tuning, and things added to it, it still needs a frackin' title, but I'll post it here for now.
My story takes place in an untouched Alaska, hell I don't know what time perod, this is fantasy here. Which follows Kuduk, a novice aleut hunter, that one day while in forest near his village that is sent a neighboring yupi'k village to protect the village chief's daughter: Nemeryuk. Where Kuduk is accompanied by his best friends:
Uliliq; a skilled hunter from Nemeryuk's village. Oddly Kuduk can only understand Uliliq...somehow.
Kipmizuk; a large Inupiaq hunter with his badarka. (badarka=small boat)
Ulugumak; the chiefs son of Kipmizuk's village.
Kuduk can only understand his best friends and his people. (What the heck, he can't understand everyone else?!)
Major villages all around have been plagued by an evil shaman and his followers and minions (haha minions); bringing death and despair where ever they go. Kuduk assumes it'll be an easy job, until things take a turn for the worst. The following night the village Kuduk was sent to is attacked by one of evil shamans trusted follower and his minions (figuring out what to name this big and powerful evil shaman.) Kuduk and Nemeryuk and kuduk's friends are forced to flee as the village is attacked. In the vast wilderness forest Kuduk promises Nemeryuk to get revenge for her fallen village. What he's getting into is more than he can imagine.
My story takes place in an untouched Alaska, hell I don't know what time perod, this is fantasy here. Which follows Kuduk, a novice aleut hunter, that one day while in forest near his village that is sent a neighboring yupi'k village to protect the village chief's daughter: Nemeryuk. Where Kuduk is accompanied by his best friends:
Uliliq; a skilled hunter from Nemeryuk's village. Oddly Kuduk can only understand Uliliq...somehow.
Kipmizuk; a large Inupiaq hunter with his badarka. (badarka=small boat)
Ulugumak; the chiefs son of Kipmizuk's village.
Kuduk can only understand his best friends and his people. (What the heck, he can't understand everyone else?!)
Major villages all around have been plagued by an evil shaman and his followers and minions (haha minions); bringing death and despair where ever they go. Kuduk assumes it'll be an easy job, until things take a turn for the worst. The following night the village Kuduk was sent to is attacked by one of evil shamans trusted follower and his minions (figuring out what to name this big and powerful evil shaman.) Kuduk and Nemeryuk and kuduk's friends are forced to flee as the village is attacked. In the vast wilderness forest Kuduk promises Nemeryuk to get revenge for her fallen village. What he's getting into is more than he can imagine.
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Maybe you should try to DESCRIBE your story and characters MORE! I have no idea WTH you are trying to write. Write out one whole chapter 1st before you post it here please!
