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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...
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Mnm... not sure if I like the 4th wall-breaker honestly, or the doll thing either. You need to modernize her more lol. I do like the idea of an older girl in a youthful body, though.
I thought about that too~!
Because she spent a few years in the hospital, she doesn't really know about the world and that's why!
sora_coltrane wrote...
[spoil]I settled down and got even more serious about the Fakku Visual Novel, especially with regards to the story. I sincerely ask for your attention. Below is a premise I want to base the Fakku Visual Novel on. Please read the following and give me your honest thoughts.
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Future Fakku Userz exists in a virtual reality city where Fakku is tabooed.
People used to live in reality, however the world became inhabitable so they are forced into virtual worlds while their physical bodies are sustained in pods.
The new identity that the people have gotten since being forced into the virtual world, some of them choose different lives for themselves, seeing this as a second chance, while some live the same way.
The protagonist is someone who is trying to make a meaning out of all of this. From his lifestyle of constant Fakku to the virtual world where nothing is real and nothing remains. The lack of meaning in living in a artifical world.
When the Protagonist is at a Fakku Convention one day, he’s told by Anon to meet with Momoka alone. Instead of Momoka, he meets Heroine who is here to meet Momoka alone as well. Authority forces appear suddenly to crack down and arrest them. They escape together.
Along with a few others who got out of the convention, they learn that the virutal reality deems Momoka as a virus entity and they are trying to crack down on Fakku and H content. They want to reset the Fakku users into ordinary people leading predetermined life patterns to ensure stability so they can fix the world outside.
The protagonist and those who all got out receives a message shortly from Jacob Grady, who is no longer in the virtual world but the real world, about escaping the authorities and virtual world, telling them to find Momoka, because she will help them escape.
They each plan to search for Momoka and investigate the truth on their own because its safer. They keep in contact with each other through chat messages, irc, forum boards etc (the advanced and futuristic equivalent of these). According to the choices made and the relationships developed with the chosen character, they eventually team up with each other while some of them remain as loners.
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Notes;
There are 7 characters looking for Momoka. Protagonist is one of the 7, along with Heroine. Like what Cinia mentioned, I believe there is a lot of room for creativity and unique characters. With a smaller cast, we can focus more on building depth into them as well.
Like I said, this is a long term project so it’s alright to talk about where this will be headed.
These are ideas that I believe you will find interesting.
Multiple Perspectives – Each of the 7 Characters we can play from their perspective and make decisions from their POV as well.
World Exploration and Heavy character relationship building – The world map or rather the city map becomes open and we get to go to certain areas and interact with certain characters, and random events occur as well.
Cinematic Style – Mahoutsukai no Yoru is a great example
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fU-27H4XNAc
With the story being like this, we can also make the yandere loli as one of the 7 characters looking for Momoka. But she's actually being used by the authorities to find Momoka, so they can catch Jacob as well.
And instead of psychotic hospital let's instead make it so she's sealed in the virtual world. Still a hospital, but her mind is sealed in the virtual world, feed with assassination skill and stuffs to become the government's doll!
The authorities (it's always government right?) told her that the killer of her parents / brother was trying to imitate a guro hentai manga, and thus they said the one at fault is actually Jacob as one of the big fish in distributing h mangas. Done!
It's actually a bit ridiculous for a reason, but in this case, she is hypnotized after spending all the years in virtual world under the government's suggestions.
I've been getting paranoid about underage stuffs after my super awesome and cool loli doujin thread deleted by Jacob because of the ads stuffs.
Geez, it was the best loli doujin thread in Fakku... Geez.
Geez, it was the best loli doujin thread in Fakku... Geez.
d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
Why not just make the trauma more recent rather than give her stunted growth? That would work as well. Sounds good to me other than that.Some people don't like their lolis to be... Well, an actual loli (underaged and stuff).
This way people can pretend 'she's old, only looks young, so I'm totally not lolicon' to slowly make them fall into the abys- I mean, paradise called lolicon.
For the yandere loli character, I'm suggesting to make her to be the 4th wall breaker.
We can make her a bit psychotic / insane like Deadpool from Marvel (I'm going to asssume everyone knows him). So, she'll start breaking the 4th wall and she realize that she's in the VN, but no one will really understand and just think she's joking or think that it's all just her imagination because she's a bit insane.
How about... Making her a character that ran away from the psychiatric hospital and somehow she met the protagonist...
For the background :
First of all, become she became insane, she has a hardcore brother complex.
She's a girl that's put into a psychiatric hospital after she witnessed her parents and big brother (Onii-sama please) murdered in front of her (from robbery or stuff). The stress from back then stopped her growth (All can be explained with hormone and shit. Trust me, I'm a medical student). She always carry three dolls with her (just make it a small doll) because she thinks of them as her parents and brother.
Later, she'll see the protagonist as a substitute for her brother, and rips up one of her doll (yay for doll violence) that she thought as her brother.
How's that? \(^_^)/
We can make her a bit psychotic / insane like Deadpool from Marvel (I'm going to asssume everyone knows him). So, she'll start breaking the 4th wall and she realize that she's in the VN, but no one will really understand and just think she's joking or think that it's all just her imagination because she's a bit insane.
How about... Making her a character that ran away from the psychiatric hospital and somehow she met the protagonist...
For the background :
First of all, become she became insane, she has a hardcore brother complex.
She's a girl that's put into a psychiatric hospital after she witnessed her parents and big brother (Onii-sama please) murdered in front of her (from robbery or stuff). The stress from back then stopped her growth (All can be explained with hormone and shit. Trust me, I'm a medical student). She always carry three dolls with her (just make it a small doll) because she thinks of them as her parents and brother.
Later, she'll see the protagonist as a substitute for her brother, and rips up one of her doll (yay for doll violence) that she thought as her brother.
How's that? \(^_^)/
sora_coltrane wrote...
These are the artists that I've got a hold of.Artist : Beru
Artist: Haori
I'll get a hold of a background artist soon.
In the meantime I spoke to them about character design etc and they'll be doing sketches first for the characters you guys like and come up with.
It's really rather inconvenient for me to be active recently, but I'll be making updates regardless. There's really only one rule to this entire thing and that's, have fun![/quote]
I really love Beru's works. I think it would be great to have him draw lolis for the VN~
As long as there're lolis, I'm fine with others~
Oh, yandere stuffs as well please. No need to be a bloody one if you guys don't make a bloody VN but a yandere would spice the things up a bit.
If you guys need new sig or banner for the next contest (for example christmas/halloween even) then feel free to send me a PM :3
mibuchiha wrote...
In the first place, what game to use? Chess? YGO? Pokemon? Whatever else I know naught of?Someone's good at some game, others are good at others. How to decide which is fair?
Battle to death IRL. Broadcasted live online using skype and webcam.
Harontiar wrote...
Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...
Hello there, all of my fellow yandere loving maniacs!Anyone has good yandere manga suggestion? The one that has many chapters should be nice.
Sorry, Kuro nii-chan. I am outdated on the recent yandere manga.
Black PeachFlower
On a related note, Akarui Sekai Keikau already finished serializing. So far, 18 chapters have been scanlated out of 23. THE END IS NEAR.
Another potential yandere manga. Nejimaku Kagyu
I already read Akarui (I mean, Eyepatched perverted loli? AWW YEAH).
Going to try the Nejimaku then.
I actually wanna try... If only I'm not busy with IRL and stuffs.
I hope the next one who make the game won't make a rule like "you can't claim waifu that you claimed previous game" though. That's stupid.
I hope the next one who make the game won't make a rule like "you can't claim waifu that you claimed previous game" though. That's stupid.
*looks at Airy*
Don't care about gameplay. I'm playing this.
EDIT : I heard about the censor... I'm not happy...
Don't care about gameplay. I'm playing this.
EDIT : I heard about the censor... I'm not happy...
"I have no job, no friends, no lover, no family."
I will try to find a job. Get some friends underworld. Buy some slaves. Fuck the slaves, make her pregnant. And BOOM! Got a daughter.
Still no lover, but at least you get all the others.
Btw, that was fun. I love how everyone is going gloomy and all for valentine.
I will try to find a job. Get some friends underworld. Buy some slaves. Fuck the slaves, make her pregnant. And BOOM! Got a daughter.
Still no lover, but at least you get all the others.
Btw, that was fun. I love how everyone is going gloomy and all for valentine.
Xenon wrote...
Haha, what a twisting chain of events. This story has a fairly interesting plot, Kuro, one that is quite unique. I would say that it does have a lot of errors, likely due to second-language syndrome, but it does a great job despite that in conveying the message you wished to send...of a loli-incest-NTR-BadEnd.Great job with this.
Yeah... This grammar problem really stuck with me. Haha.
*pic not really related to the story*
Actually, I planned this to be longer but then I became lazy lol.
Enjoy!
Actually, I planned this to be longer but then I became lazy lol.
Enjoy!
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Hello there, all of my fellow yandere loving maniacs!
Anyone has good yandere manga suggestion? The one that has many chapters should be nice.
Anyone has good yandere manga suggestion? The one that has many chapters should be nice.
d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...
And stupid me change the whole storyline.Was going to make a "princess love prince while they're in the middle of war" kind of story like Romeo and Juliet. But the lack of loli, incest, and netorare disgusts me.
Why not do a "princess love prince while they're in the middle of war" kind of story, but then have it to where the princess' brother, who is also a prince, steals her from the first prince, and also make the princess a flat-chested 12 year old. Problem solved!
With that kind of storyline, it would turns out to be a threesome in the end... Not bad.
And stupid me change the whole storyline.
Was going to make a "princess love prince while they're in the middle of war" kind of story like Romeo and Juliet. But the lack of loli, incest, and netorare disgusts me.
Was going to make a "princess love prince while they're in the middle of war" kind of story like Romeo and Juliet. But the lack of loli, incest, and netorare disgusts me.