Dansei no Fuun'na Jinsei.; Chapter 02.
1
Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
I'm warning you guys about the contents of the story (see below the spoiler), this is a story that I've just fantasized and have now decided to write for no particular reason, I just wanted to write something on my own for the first time I guess. So you can say that I'm a complete amateur on this field.
This is like hentai novel or something, containing sex and sexual as if its another normal thing. Also, it takes time for the sexual stuffs to take place too. But please bear with it.
If you find some mistakes be sure to PM me about them.
And so, well, here goes!
Everyone, Rise-chan presents, Dansei no fuun'na jinsei.;
Chapter 1 - The Futa Mansion.
Chapter 2 - Gender Bender!?
You guys should know that I was kinda low in time when I was writing this, so there may be spelling mistakes and grammar disorders whish I'll fix later when I log in again.
I'll be pulling the incest thing on the next chapter.
EDIT:
Note: Just thought that I should put the contents of the story so that you guys can decide whether to read it or not and I'm removing the warning thingy from the title because it might repel away people who might have an interest to such stuffs.
Anyways here's the contents list:
BDSM
Yuri
Gender Bender
Futa
Vanilla (you know the lovey-dovey stuffs)
Loli.
Incest
(more may be added though, if they are added then this list will be updated)
Except for Vanilla, if you can't deal with the other contents then you should know that I've warned you. Oh, and I've named the first chapter as well and changed the name of the title of the story from English (A Male's Unlucky Life.) to Japanese (Dansei no fuun'na jinsei.). Hope you guys don't mind that.
This is like hentai novel or something, containing sex and sexual as if its another normal thing. Also, it takes time for the sexual stuffs to take place too. But please bear with it.
If you find some mistakes be sure to PM me about them.
And so, well, here goes!
Everyone, Rise-chan presents, Dansei no fuun'na jinsei.;
Chapter 1 - The Futa Mansion.
Spoiler:
Chapter 2 - Gender Bender!?
Spoiler:
You guys should know that I was kinda low in time when I was writing this, so there may be spelling mistakes and grammar disorders whish I'll fix later when I log in again.
I'll be pulling the incest thing on the next chapter.
EDIT:
Note: Just thought that I should put the contents of the story so that you guys can decide whether to read it or not and I'm removing the warning thingy from the title because it might repel away people who might have an interest to such stuffs.
Anyways here's the contents list:
BDSM
Yuri
Gender Bender
Futa
Vanilla (you know the lovey-dovey stuffs)
Loli.
Incest
(more may be added though, if they are added then this list will be updated)
Except for Vanilla, if you can't deal with the other contents then you should know that I've warned you. Oh, and I've named the first chapter as well and changed the name of the title of the story from English (A Male's Unlucky Life.) to Japanese (Dansei no fuun'na jinsei.). Hope you guys don't mind that.
0
Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
I never really thought that people would even post on this thread, I thought that this would die in no time.
0
I'm just curious, but do you want us to criticise it at all? It couldn't hurt to get some constructive criticism :)
0
Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Huh? Posting more will take time as I'm pretty much out of money for the web cafes, but I'll try.
0
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
When I saw the tag list... I winced at that, but for some reason I still toughed my ass to read it. Didn't regret it at all, it's very well written. But still, full-on hentai is a bit too much for me... >_>
0
Wery interesting. +rep for the 1st chapter, I enjoyed reading it. So what's about the loli ? A girl with a huge dick like in the doujin "Futa Club" ? lol
0
Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
bfg10k17 wrote...
Wery interesting. +rep for the 1st chapter, I enjoyed reading it. So what's about the loli ? A girl with a huge dick like in the doujin "Futa Club" ? lolExactly, but with gender bender in the way, I have something special, but I'm in trouble right now, so I require more time, sorry, you can't really rush a user who said that he's leaving temporarily with a goodbye thread now can you.
@Mibu, thanks, I feel very honored that someone like you read it, now I'm fired up!
0
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Rise-chan wrote...
@Mibu, thanks, I feel very honored that someone like you read it, now I'm fired up!Ahaha, I dunno what is it about me that makes you feel honored me reading it. It's good though that you're fired up. But I'll really appreciate it if you thin the sex down a bit and put more romanticism. XD
0
Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Its because you're an Elder with almost 3000 posts.
About the sex thing, I was thinking of increasing it even more than the first chapter, I believe you'll find it all of that, after the mansion arc, I'm planning on removing that arc for good, does that sound good?
About the sex thing, I was thinking of increasing it even more than the first chapter, I believe you'll find it all of that, after the mansion arc, I'm planning on removing that arc for good, does that sound good?
0
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Lolol, don't let my words change the way you write tho. I think having it just the way you imagine it is always best~
And hey, 3k posts has nothing to do with it. :3
And hey, 3k posts has nothing to do with it. :3
0
Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Added Chapter 02
Yes please, but please don't be too harsh.
And hey, 3k posts has nothing to do with it. :3
I was just stating what I was planning really, wasn't changing anything for you baka.
Edit: Sorry for making some of you wait for Ch.2, wait did the readers even remember this?
Oh and the list of categories has been updated.
SamRavster wrote...
I'm just curious, but do you want us to criticise it at all? It couldn't hurt to get some constructive criticism :)Yes please, but please don't be too harsh.
mibuchiha wrote...
Lolol, don't let my words change the way you write tho. I think having it just the way you imagine it is always best~And hey, 3k posts has nothing to do with it. :3
I was just stating what I was planning really, wasn't changing anything for you baka.
Edit: Sorry for making some of you wait for Ch.2, wait did the readers even remember this?
Oh and the list of categories has been updated.