Erotic fiction: An afternoon at the cinema

This one was exhilarating!
I was very surprised when the story reveled that she was surrounded by men- contradicting her earlier statement of solitude.
The exhibitionism added a forbidden hint to the story- very kinky.

-Sorry for my rant. I look forward to March!

Quoting you, in case you don't see Mangler's reply to you.

OT: I'll try to get a review done when I can, Mangler. Got a lot of writing shit backlogged. Also, do try to get into the habit of quoting someone when replying to them, otherwise, they won't get a notification, and may not come back to the thread on their own accord.

It is also the thing that makes it extremely appealing. Women tend to have fantasies about being taken by one or more complete strangers, being reduced to the definition of pure sex, used to satisfy their urgent needs.

I don't have to tell your that your text is perfect regarding style/grammar/spelling. I saw your introduction thread and I am very well aware of your Columbia degree in literature.

Personally, I prefer the beach-story. It speaks more to me, but this one has it's own appealing, although it failed to make me feel anything until the moment the men started taking her. The rest doesn't do anything for me, but that has something to do with my own preferences and fetishes.

That's all from me.

Thank you!

OT:
Yes. Yes we are. ^.^

Don't worry, I know my soul does.
I believe it appealed to me because I could imagine myself doing that. Well, without the group-sex.

It is quite interesting on what you have found...

Definitely PM them to me! I look forward to them~

Loved it. You better watch out or you will make a reputation for youself of being marvelously entertaining.

Aww... :( Not as much fun for us :P

Sounds good to me :)

I think I like this one over your beach story, if only because there was group sex. I like the dirtier feel to this one, and not just because your MC fucked a few dozen random strangers. It's in public yeah, but you've no idea the state of the cinema. Considering that it shows adult movies all the time, who knows how many other men have sat in that seat and let off a few? Or just how clean the building is? I seemed to feel as if it was an older building, one that's seen a lot of use. I found that an additional turn on as she dropped on the floor and just grabbed the closest cock she could find.

You're a good source of inspiration Word.

Very interesting, I love the idea of just wanting to escape the "world" for awhile, and in the process abandoning all reserve and reason. I think all of us at one point or another reach that point, and I'm not sure if that is what you were getting at here, but it's what I took away from it. I also love how at the very end she went back out into the "world" and nothing had changed except for her. Great work, I'm eager to see what else you have to offer ^_^

Watch for his story "A Funny Thing Happened." Or you could ask him for it, if you are the impatient type. If you liked "An afternoon at the cinema" for said reasons, then you will like this other one, I think.