And then John was a Zombie

I just wanted to share this with you, cuz I really think that guy is gonna hit big and make the next best-seller story.

That was a cool little story. I don't really understand the caption under "amazing" though; is it refering to John or just the story all together?

*slow-motion facepalm* You know, a joke is never as fun if you have to explain it to someone.

It's referring to that the story (and its writer) sucks so hilariously much that it becomes good read anyway. I guess it's also referring to the totally random, but amusing end.

Oh~ haha *man, am I an idiot*, okay. Yeah, I didn't really get that whole 'zombie' part. I though "But, aren't the demons the problem? What's this zombie thing?" haha~

Hahaha lol

That read is ..........amusing in a weird way, full of un-predictable plot
I would read his stuff :D

What the....:lol:

Eeeerrrr... Awesome story

*rewinds the facepalm and plays it repeatedly*

I was like, "Hmmm this seems just like usual internet trash" right up until the punchline....er I mean...ending.

The sad thing is, if i'm right he is trying to make a Halo story with this. and completly uterley failed. good read though.

The reason I say Halo is cause the fact of it has plasna rifles, a main character named john ( masterchief for those who don't know ), and the fact that the covenant called the spartans, mainly john, Demons.

My first guess was Doom.... I thought "Cyberdemon" was a complete giveaway...

Not to mention, it's titled DOOM at the top.

Never really played Doom so could be.. about the really only knowledge I have of Doom is from the movie they made about it with Dwayne Johnson in it.

Oh god... that movie was terrible, didn't even follow the storlyine...

then again there really is no storyline except in Doom 3, which was superior to the movie anyway.

I thought Doom 3 was about you being in a place that was completely dark and stuff jumping out at you that would have turned out to really just be brooms and such if you had sufficient lighting. (I've never been a huge fan of Doom and didn't play Doom 3...but I did hear about how dark the game was repeatedly.)

Btw why is someone saying Dwayne Johnson when they could be saying THE ROCK?

Its about a failed experiment of teleportation. I think you can figure out the rest.

Did he teleport into a dark closet? That seems to match my theory. Even if you say otherwise, I think I'll just stick with my version anyway.

I never saw it comming, thats when u know it was a good story

what is that .........

so random its funny. LOL.

wonder where he gets that idea