christmas day
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There was a girl who thinks was Christmas is the most enjoyable time of the year.
once the ber months started she was just thinking of all enjoyable things that she can do that day. It's a year now that she's been working. her father doesn't want her to work her father wants to finish her schooling and not become a customer representative forever. but the girl doesn't want to go to school anymore because on the first place why she did get a job is because her father always thinks that she's not doing anything right. her father even told her that she's nothing if it's wasn't for him and why she can't be like her sister. that's when the girl started finding job on her own secretly without her fathers permission. since her father was so busy her father didn't realized that the girl is already working and after a month declared that she won't leave the house anymore. the girl received all the things you wound't want to hear from a father. the girl knows herself that she knows some things that she does is wrong for 2 years the girl worked hard and stayed on a apartment with his boyfriend. but sometimes the driver of her house goes by to fetch her to make sure she goes to work safely. for a year the father and the girl seems to have come with good terms again and the father wants girl to go back to the house again and she did go back again. the girl stopped working. after a year it's December again the father and the girl had an argument again because the father wants the girl to come to united states with her aunt. and the girl strongly oppose this. the father said again many things that will hurt the girl as if the feeling is like your soul is being crushed. the girl came back to her apartment. she was happy that her boyfriend is on her side. she said to him that as long as where happy here it should be fine. but the boy was worrying about the future. the girl said not worry about it. but the boy insist that we need to talk about it with a loud tone of voice. he said that he doesn't anything in the future for us it's so complicated he says he doesn't now what to do anymore. then the girl screamed "why are you like that?!" why so half about our relationship. the boy said it's because where not normal. the boy left the apartment. while the girl kept idle for a while. she stood up and just slept on the bed when suddenly a painful feeling coming from the heart came to the girl and then she just started crying. the girl thought that Christmas was the time of the year. but it was the opposite. she suddenly feel all the problem and all the worries that's been bothering her. the girl felt that this world is so cruel it felt like the girl wants to just fade away.
once the ber months started she was just thinking of all enjoyable things that she can do that day. It's a year now that she's been working. her father doesn't want her to work her father wants to finish her schooling and not become a customer representative forever. but the girl doesn't want to go to school anymore because on the first place why she did get a job is because her father always thinks that she's not doing anything right. her father even told her that she's nothing if it's wasn't for him and why she can't be like her sister. that's when the girl started finding job on her own secretly without her fathers permission. since her father was so busy her father didn't realized that the girl is already working and after a month declared that she won't leave the house anymore. the girl received all the things you wound't want to hear from a father. the girl knows herself that she knows some things that she does is wrong for 2 years the girl worked hard and stayed on a apartment with his boyfriend. but sometimes the driver of her house goes by to fetch her to make sure she goes to work safely. for a year the father and the girl seems to have come with good terms again and the father wants girl to go back to the house again and she did go back again. the girl stopped working. after a year it's December again the father and the girl had an argument again because the father wants the girl to come to united states with her aunt. and the girl strongly oppose this. the father said again many things that will hurt the girl as if the feeling is like your soul is being crushed. the girl came back to her apartment. she was happy that her boyfriend is on her side. she said to him that as long as where happy here it should be fine. but the boy was worrying about the future. the girl said not worry about it. but the boy insist that we need to talk about it with a loud tone of voice. he said that he doesn't anything in the future for us it's so complicated he says he doesn't now what to do anymore. then the girl screamed "why are you like that?!" why so half about our relationship. the boy said it's because where not normal. the boy left the apartment. while the girl kept idle for a while. she stood up and just slept on the bed when suddenly a painful feeling coming from the heart came to the girl and then she just started crying. the girl thought that Christmas was the time of the year. but it was the opposite. she suddenly feel all the problem and all the worries that's been bothering her. the girl felt that this world is so cruel it felt like the girl wants to just fade away.
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animefreak_usa
Child of Samael
Christmas is on the 7th of jan. THIS IS MY WORLD OF DELUSIONS AND FAIRY TALES WHICH I SHOULD ADD BOTH FAIRY TALE AND ONE PIECE SUCK DICKS OF AIDS PATIENTS AND SALT OF HIPPIES CUNTS.
I wait with great pleasure with the butthurts.
I wait with great pleasure with the butthurts.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
This sounds like a fine story, Reality. Have you considered joining the writing event at the writing section?
The link is here,
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-writing-contest-2013
My contribution can be read by clicking the link below,
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-contest-entry-2013-an-analysis
And your story would be much better received at the Writing Section.
The link is here,
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-writing-contest-2013
My contribution can be read by clicking the link below,
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-contest-entry-2013-an-analysis
And your story would be much better received at the Writing Section.
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leonard267 wrote...
This sounds like a fine story, Reality. Have you considered joining the writing event at the writing section? The link is here,
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-writing-contest-2013
My contribution can be read by clicking the link below,
https://www.fakku.net/forums/writing-and-fanfiction/winter-contest-entry-2013-an-analysis
And your story would be much better received at the Writing Section.
yeah I really want to try sometimes but I suck at grammar like the people says here on this forum plus i'm not really a good story teller. I suck.
animefreak_usa wrote...
Christmas is on the 7th of jan. THIS IS MY WORLD OF DELUSIONS AND FAIRY TALES WHICH I SHOULD ADD BOTH FAIRY TALE AND ONE PIECE SUCK DICKS OF AIDS PATIENTS AND SALT OF HIPPIES CUNTS.I wait with great pleasure with the butthurts.
hahahah
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I almost didn't read your post.
Why ?
Don't post walls of text please. It almost hurts to read it.
Anyway.
About your problem.
I know it's not polite to ask how old someone is, but it's important in this case.
Also, what was the last school you finished ?
You may think it's not important to study as much as you can while you can, but I know some people who came to regret their decisions to stop too early.
Basicly, they want to get better jobs, but most of those require to have some form of education.
Just for a moment, try and see this from your father's point of view.
He wants you to study, because in the end, it would most likely grant you a better future.
Maybe think about what kind of school you'd want to go IF you do decide to continue your education.
Why ?
Don't post walls of text please. It almost hurts to read it.
Anyway.
About your problem.
I know it's not polite to ask how old someone is, but it's important in this case.
Also, what was the last school you finished ?
You may think it's not important to study as much as you can while you can, but I know some people who came to regret their decisions to stop too early.
Basicly, they want to get better jobs, but most of those require to have some form of education.
Just for a moment, try and see this from your father's point of view.
He wants you to study, because in the end, it would most likely grant you a better future.
Maybe think about what kind of school you'd want to go IF you do decide to continue your education.
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bfg10k17 wrote...
I almost didn't read your post.Why ?
Don't post walls of text please. It almost hurts to read it.
Anyway.
About your problem.
I know it's not polite to ask how old someone is, but it's important in this case.
Also, what was the last school you finished ?
You may think it's not important to study as much as you can while you can, but I know some people who came to regret their decisions to stop too early.
Basicly, they want to get better jobs, but most of those require to have some form of education.
Just for a moment, try and see this from your father's point of view.
He wants you to study, because in the end, it would most likely grant you a better future.
Maybe think about what kind of school you'd want to go IF you do decide to continue your education.
your not getting it it's just a story ahahaha. I just felt saying it to fakku to vent something.
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cruz737 wrote...
You're venting?So, what's wrong then?
no I mean. I was thinking of making some story to vent my frustrations. because you know. I'm a frustrated writer. I was hoping to put this on writer and fanfiction but I was thinking the moderator will just put it on the IB anyways since no one can understand what I'm saying. lol
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devsonfire wrote...
Yes, so?ahaha. I was thinking of what can be the best way to have fun today? I feel really bored so I did this. so anyone can tell me what's the best thing to do when your bored? so I can go out of this website and stop spreading my stupidity. lol
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devsonfire
3,000,000th Poster
You could edit that out, use paragraphs, and post it in the writing and fanfiction section.
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devsonfire wrote...
You could edit that out, use paragraphs, and post it in the writing and fanfiction section.ummm.. but I think it suits IB the last time i've post to anything part of this forum Ms.Tegumi putted it to IB. so I don't want to bother the mods here.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
RealityBell wrote...
devsonfire wrote...
You could edit that out, use paragraphs, and post it in the writing and fanfiction section.ummm.. but I think it suits IB the last time i've post to anything part of this forum Ms.Tegumi putted it to IB. so I don't want to bother the mods here.
I don't think it suits Incoherent Babbling, Reality. As devsonfire and I said, this and the other threads you write ought to go to the Writing Section. I have done something similar to what you have done, and compiled what I written into a thread, on that section and moderators have no problem with that.
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leonard267 wrote...
RealityBell wrote...
devsonfire wrote...
You could edit that out, use paragraphs, and post it in the writing and fanfiction section.ummm.. but I think it suits IB the last time i've post to anything part of this forum Ms.Tegumi putted it to IB. so I don't want to bother the mods here.
I don't think it does, Reality. As devsonfire and I said, this and the other threads you write ought to go to the Writing Section. I have done something similar to what you have done, and compiled what I written into a thread, on that section and moderators have no problem with that.
I see but I just you know. write something that happens to my daily life and I'm not really a good writer I want to but, it's seems writing doesn't like me. lol
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So I just made a serious post in IB, in response to a fictional story.
Post fiction in the proper sections.
Also.
Fuck this and fuck you.
No, seriously.
edit:
Tegs put your posts from Writing and Fanfiction to IB because your english sucks.
I know it's not easy, it's not my native language either, but when I don't know how to say something, I look it up somewhere, so I don't looks like an illiterate.
Post fiction in the proper sections.
Also.
Fuck this and fuck you.
No, seriously.
edit:
Tegs put your posts from Writing and Fanfiction to IB because your english sucks.
I know it's not easy, it's not my native language either, but when I don't know how to say something, I look it up somewhere, so I don't looks like an illiterate.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
RealityBell wrote...
leonard267 wrote...
RealityBell wrote...
devsonfire wrote...
You could edit that out, use paragraphs, and post it in the writing and fanfiction section.ummm.. but I think it suits IB the last time i've post to anything part of this forum Ms.Tegumi putted it to IB. so I don't want to bother the mods here.
I don't think it does, Reality. As devsonfire and I said, this and the other threads you write ought to go to the Writing Section. I have done something similar to what you have done, and compiled what I written into a thread, on that section and moderators have no problem with that.
I see but I just you know. write something that happens to my daily life and I'm not really a good writer I want to but, it's seems writing doesn't like me. lol
Neither am I, Reality. Neither am I if you go through what I write. However, the Writing Section couldn't care less if you or I posted lousy work there.