Renovartio wrote...
sorry desu i meant desu
i mean i sent the pm XD
here i will post story here
He woke up later on that night. His eyes peered towards the tightly shut curtains. His feet swiftly moved towards the window. His eyes glanced here and there. Outside world was dark and he wouldn’t have seen too far out if it wasn’t for the bright streetlamps which was on every corner. “I might as well go out for a walk.” He quickly changed out of his inside clothes which was just sweatpants and a tore up T-shirt into some jeans, a black shirt and a jacket.
He left his one bedroom apartment and went outside through the buildings back door. The area of which he lived was near the collage he was supposed to be attending. It was in the city far from his parent’s house and he felt it refreshing to be away from them. “What I’m going to do now… I love it but… It will end one day… what am I to do?” The bottom of his shoes got dirty due to him stepping in a small puddle. He figured it must have rained while he slept. Stuff like that happened all the time.
He kept walking until he realized that the bottom of his jeans were wet. “What in the hell?!” That’s when he looked around and saw that the water was coming from an apartment complex on top a small hill to his left. He decided that he might as well check it out, that it could be interesting. Well in that aspect he was right.
He looked up at the three story building. A cold wind blew; he shook off a cold shiver. “It’s weird for it to be this cold during this time of year, even at this time of night.” To his amazement the front door was opened. He stepped inside and a stream of water trickled down the tile floor under his feet. He followed it to a case of stairs which went onto the 2nd floor. He got up the stairs and went through another already opened door. He stepped into a big opened hallway. The stream led him to a closed unlocked door furthest to his left down the hallway, which would be the furthest right from the outside. ”Guess the water is going under the door.” The wet carpet made some very weird sounds under his feet. He walked over to the kitchen sink and turned them off.
He looked around still hearing running water. He made his way to the bathroom. He opened the closed door to find a beautiful young naked woman floating in an over running bath of water. He dashed to the woman; she was still alive and breathing! He quickly turned off the water and took the woman to the couch in the living room, “Since she is still breathing I don’t think she needs CPR…. So since her life isn’t in danger…” He grabbed a dress and hastily dressed the unconscious woman. He couldn’t do anything about the water; he knew he should have called someone from the next apartment for some help or something… but he didn’t feel right leaving the woman alone. Even though she isn’t on deaths door it didn’t look like this was an accident. The front door and the stairs door both be left wide open seemed a bit odd. Like someone wanted to find her.
The woman soon came to. Her eyes sprang wide open and looked up at Shawn.”Uh, w-w-who are you?” He smiled at sweetest smile he could at her. “My name is Shawn; I was walking down the sidewalk down the hill and notice water coming from here.” Her face gave away her shock quite easily. “Water… Coming from here? All the way down the hill?! Oh My God, how could this happen?1 I was sleeping in bed!” Shan frowned and looked at the bath and the faucet.”So it wasn’t you…. I think we need to report this to the police!”
“I think your right.”
“You should check around se if anything is missing.”
“But I do have one question.”
“What is that?”
“Well I wasn’t wearing this outfit when I went to bed… So what I want to know is… where did you find me and um… what shape was I in?”
His face went red and he averted my eyes. He muttered some words but she couldn’t hear and asked him to speak up. “I’m sorry but I found you naked… in there.” He pointed toward the bath. She glanced toward where his finger pointed. Her face too became red and she got up off the couch and looked him in the eye. “Well sir, please call the police while I get changed.” She sped off toward what seemed to be her room. He took out his cell phone and dialed 911. He explained what happened to the operator and said he would be waiting in the apartment with the woman; he wanted to stay with her in case something else happens to her.
The operator consented to it and sent over an ambulance and a few policemen over. “Okay sir, please stay in the apartment with the young lady, I will send some police officers over and an ambulance just in case.”
“Thank you very much!” He replied as he hung up his cell. “Thank god that went over well.” He heard a loud crash in the next room. “What was that?!” He ran over to the room which the woman had retreated to not that long ago. He found her on the floor dressed in a jeans and a shirt, a broken flower pot laid by her unconscious body. He looked around the room to see if anything or anyone could have done this to her. There was a man dressed as a burglar, with a black wool sweater, and a mask which hid his face. The fiend was trying to escape out the window down the emergency fire escape. The man looked back at Shawn. “Oh hell no! You aren’t going to get away with this!” Shan shouted at the top of his lungs. He dashed towards the window and grabbed the man’s collar before the suspect could even think. He pulled the man down onto the ground and punches him three times. Two medium strength punches to the face and one to his chest at full strength, knocking the man out cold.
Shan’s shout of rage had woken quite a few people and they were all running into the apartment. He stepped out of the room while caring the young lady in his arms an once again set her on the couch. “Why the hell is the carpet wet?!” One man shouted. “Hey who’s this guy?” another one questioned while pointing at Shawn. A few men stormed into the room Shan took out the would-be criminal. “Dear god I think it’s a burglar!” One man dragged the unconscious man into the apartment’s living room. “He’s out cold” One person stated.
More people started to crowd the apartment’s doorway. “What happened here?” A woman’s voiced asked aloud. “Apparently someone tried to break in and got caught.”
“Who did the catching?” Asked another woman,
“A young lad” A man walked over and put his hand on Shawn’s shoulder.
“I’ll have you know I’m 19 years old!”
“Don’t be like that! You did a great job here!
“I was just passing by.”
“Hey the cops are here!”
The woman was taken away by the ambulance, and Shawn told the police everything that happened. Him taking a stroll and noticing the water, find the woman, and catching the burglar. “Seems like you had a busy night” said one officer. “Well it was a bit too eventful for me to be honest!” Shawn wiped the sweat off his brow with his hand. “HA HA, I know what you’re talking about! Catching criminals always tires me out! But one thing sunny you have to come help us fill some papers out.” The officer sighed. “Well will that be all after that?” The officer looked Shawn in the eye. “Well I don’t see a problem with that!”
Shawn accompanied the officers and did as requested, by the time this was all done it was six in the morning and Shawn was tired. He went home and had a well deserved rest. The last thing he thought before falling asleep was, “funny… I never got the woman’s name.” With that he fell right to sleep.
Trying to help not hinder desu~
in the second para you spelled collage when its actually college~ desu
Please dont -rep me desu just trying to help >///<