FAKKU Writers' Lounge

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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
SamRavster wrote...
[font=verdana][color=green]If I wanted to, I could easily review a couple of stories a week - taking into account work and such. I like to think I am quite good when it comes to the descriptive aspect a story has; one of the pearls of writing is "Show, don't tell". If I feel that the story is merely a diary of a person's daily life, then I will implore that they change it.


[color=red][b]Noted!

Lol, I am yet to read a story which is actually one's diary of life, but that would be disappointing to see as it'd imply that the writer lacks creativity...
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TheWaywardMoogle Wayward Pervert
Rise-chan wrote...
SamRavster wrote...
[font=verdana][color=green]If I wanted to, I could easily review a couple of stories a week - taking into account work and such. I like to think I am quite good when it comes to the descriptive aspect a story has; one of the pearls of writing is "Show, don't tell". If I feel that the story is merely a diary of a person's daily life, then I will implore that they change it.


[color=red][b]Noted!

Lol, I am yet to read a story which is actually one's diary of life, but that would be disappointing to see as it'd imply that the writer lacks creativity...


I'd have to agree with this, its one thing to take experiences from real life and another entirely to transcribe the events themselves in detail
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
TheWaywardMoogle wrote...
I shall, its been in development for almost two years now but things are really coming together. to elaborate on your question before Rise-chan about why the world is crafted only for alice.

it is an escape. she is a teenager that is about to go through one of the most intense couple of years anyone faces...puberty! and this coupled with her horrible accident and disfigurement leads to alot of emotions and pain. she is crippled, she can't speak, and she is scared by burns and cuts from the crash. but even if you take these things away she is now faced with growing emotions, changes in herself both mentally and physically, and so she escapes. but your subconcious is a dangerous place to be and even if she is the perfect 'alice' in her mind, reality is always right there when she wakes up.



Makes sense. Kind of reminds me...
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About how the world of Ivalice on Final Fantasy advanced tactics were just a world made for everyone's fantasy desire to become a reality... or something like that.


[color=red][b]Seems like a story which WILL be a wonderful read... hopefully my laziness won't interrupted when you release it for the readers to read.
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TheWaywardMoogle Wayward Pervert
Rise-chan wrote...


[color=red][b]Seems like a story which WILL be a wonderful read... hopefully my laziness won't interrupted when you release it for the readers to read.


heh, I actually got the OK to release the first chapter (or so)on Fakku from my partner who is helping with story concept and artwork for me, I'd like to see how well it is received when that happens for sure.

OH and about the smiling cat, Cheshire is in the story, "Cheshire 'Chessie' Rose" a strong willed assassin working for the King of the Hatter's court. her design is very cat girl inspired (no surprise there) and she's black (as in race not coloring)

her IRL counterpart is a nurse that looks after alice, were Cheshire is thin and athletic, the real woman is in fact heavyset and is the type that you'd call 'mom' even if you barely knew them.

as for how/why the change between irl and wonderland. Alice imagines the real poeple in her life in a stylized way. she see's who they are to her and that is 'blown up' in her wonderland. the nurse protects and is kind to her. in wonderland that same woman is able to do that extraordinarily well etc etc

maybe that will give you an idea for how the character's are made. haha I'm probably talking to much, I get kind of excitable kupo~
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tsuyoshiro FAKKU Writer
It does sound interesting, I look forward to seeing more, considering how much I enjoyed the contest entry from you, moogle.
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
TheWaywardMoogle wrote...
Rise-chan wrote...


[color=red][b]Seems like a story which WILL be a wonderful read... hopefully my laziness won't interrupted when you release it for the readers to read.


heh, I actually got the OK to release the first chapter (or so)on Fakku from my partner who is helping with story concept and artwork for me, I'd like to see how well it is received when that happens for sure.

OH and about the smiling cat, Cheshire is in the story, "Cheshire 'Chessie' Rose" a strong willed assassin working for the King of the Hatter's court. her design is very cat girl inspired (no surprise there) and she's black (as in race not coloring)

her IRL counterpart is a nurse that looks after alice, were Cheshire is thin and athletic, the real woman is in fact heavyset and is the type that you'd call 'mom' even if you barely knew them.

as for how/why the change between irl and wonderland. Alice imagines the real poeple in her life in a stylized way. she see's who they are to her and that is 'blown up' in her wonderland. the nurse protects and is kind to her. in wonderland that same woman is able to do that extraordinarily well etc etc

maybe that will give you an idea for how the character's are made. haha I'm probably talking to much, I get kind of excitable kupo~


[color=red][b]Looking forward to it, then. Hopefully I'll see it posted soon!

LOL smiling cat. But should you be revealing that much about her, or the elements of the story?

So... in Alice's "wonderland" people are almost reversed? Or very distinctive to how they are in real-life?

You're excited alright, lol. What did Sam said about giving out too much? >_>

-pinches one of Moogle's cheeks-
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TheWaywardMoogle Wayward Pervert
Rise-chan wrote...


[color=red][b]Looking forward to it, then. Hopefully I'll see it posted soon!

LOL smiling cat. But should you be revealing that much about her, or the elements of the story?

So... in Alice's "wonderland" people are almost reversed? Or very distinctive to how they are in real-life?

You're excited alright, lol. What did Sam said about giving out too much? >_>

-pinches one of Moogle's cheeks-


kupo~ I am discussing quite a bit but this is but the tip of the iceberg in terms of character development and their actions/personalities in the story itself, I am simply shedding light on my process.

But I should Probably cool it on the details. that is lest I ruin the story for anyone.

tsuyoshiro wrote...
It does sound interesting, I look forward to seeing more, considering how much I enjoyed the contest entry from you, moogle.


I am really happy to hear this (I do say that a lot!)I feel I could go back and expand on the idea but that would be tampering with whats there and a lot of people have expressed their enjoyment so I must stay my hand, well paw...*looks down* moogle like nub appendages?
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
TheWaywardMoogle wrote...
Rise-chan wrote...


[color=red][b]Looking forward to it, then. Hopefully I'll see it posted soon!

LOL smiling cat. But should you be revealing that much about her, or the elements of the story?

So... in Alice's "wonderland" people are almost reversed? Or very distinctive to how they are in real-life?

You're excited alright, lol. What did Sam said about giving out too much? >_>

-pinches one of Moogle's cheeks-


kupo~ I am discussing quite a bit but this is but the tip of the iceberg in terms of character development and their actions/personalities in the story itself, I am simply shedding light on my process.

But I should Probably cool it on the details. that is lest I ruin the story for anyone.


[color=red][b]I think you've given me just a bit more amount of light shedding for me to read it when it's posted. Lol.
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Wow, I'm glad to see this thread picking up activity =D

On the other note I think I'll start writing songfics sometime in the future. Songfics are the fics which contains my interpretation of a certain song that I like very much~

Also, here's some music to spice up the mood

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TheWaywardMoogle Wayward Pervert
high_time wrote...
Wow, I'm glad to see this thread picking up activity =D

On the other note I think I'll start writing songfics sometime in the future. Songfics are the fics which contains my interpretation of a certain song that I like very much~

Also, here's some music to spice up the mood

Spoiler:


that sounds interesting! I always like thinking up stories for the music i listen to based on the lyrics or otherwise, I can't wait to read some of yours
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TheWaywardMoogle wrote...
that sounds interesting! I always like thinking up stories for the music i listen to based on the lyrics or otherwise, I can't wait to read some of yours


Thx a lot! The piece I'm working atm for the ongoing Winter Contest could also be considered a songfic too, though that one will be based upon a song I tried to compose which contains my interpretation of the winter season~
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
[color=red][b]Finally done with my RP post...

https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?p=2626249#2626249

Any advices to give me about my writing, anyone?
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[font=verdana][color=green]And I'm back. I was out longer than I thought I'd be.

I'll give that a read then get back to you.
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
[color=red][b]Okay then, and welcome back.
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
[color=red][b]Music bump? Lol.
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I always did that in the other chat threads ^_^

Looks good so far but I'll be expecting some more activity in the next few days =)
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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer
[color=red][b]Inb4 Xenon observes but never bothers to speak... just because. Right, (evil) Xenon? >_>
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It seems he got a stalking fetish hohoho...
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echoeagle3 Oppai Overlord
well this could be nice. I have been writing a novel for years now but I'm afraid to post it on the internet. Don't want people taking my ideas.