New AMV
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NEXUS
Since 2010
Okay so I am trying to get better with making amvs so I'd like you guys to give it a watch then give me some creative critique that way if there is a bit of a flaw I can try and work on that the next time I make one. Personally I think I did pretty good on this one however there are a few parts I wish went a little more smoother in the editing process.
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NEXUS
Since 2010
killerkoolaid wrote...
I thought it was pretty good.Thanks, I really enjoyed making it except for when my computer started messing up and I had to tinker with it until I made it my bitch again.
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The last time some nigga wanted to show us an AMV he was told to fuck off with the long clips. Same problem here.
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Taking a good song, decent looking clips, and turning it into a boring crap, that's SLUYER NUBXAX for you.
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Small wall of words WAAR Brace yourself
You want my opinion of your amv
Ok here we go
Today is saturday
Wednesday I had emergency surgery on my eye In his office
Thursday went to the dr who said in effect
Well shit that didnt work Lets go to the hospital
3 freaking hours of digging into my eyeball took out all the juice
shot the tears with a Lazar and filled it up with propane gas
Put little stitches in my eyebsll to keep the gas from leaking out
Was up all last night cause it hurt
Went to the Dr this morning and he took the patch off
looked in my eye and said
Well in two or three months we should know if this worked (Read You wont be able to really see out of that eye for at least that long)
My Bro took me home
I started your vid
For the first time since wed I was actually able to concentrate on something besides the pain
I Liked it a lot
Thank you
Keep up the good work
n.b. Finally got a hold of the stupid dr who is off somewhere with Dr Wifey
And got him to give me some real pain pills
Now I cant drive and my brother wont be back in town till this evening
SO I am going to watch the vid till he does
Just an FYI I like pink striped panties Next time Please
My AVA is a One eyed One horned Flying purple people eater and will remain so until I am not
Poe Knee
You want my opinion of your amv
Ok here we go
Today is saturday
Wednesday I had emergency surgery on my eye In his office
Thursday went to the dr who said in effect
Well shit that didnt work Lets go to the hospital
3 freaking hours of digging into my eyeball took out all the juice
shot the tears with a Lazar and filled it up with propane gas
Put little stitches in my eyebsll to keep the gas from leaking out
Was up all last night cause it hurt
Went to the Dr this morning and he took the patch off
looked in my eye and said
Well in two or three months we should know if this worked (Read You wont be able to really see out of that eye for at least that long)
My Bro took me home
I started your vid
For the first time since wed I was actually able to concentrate on something besides the pain
I Liked it a lot
Thank you
Keep up the good work
n.b. Finally got a hold of the stupid dr who is off somewhere with Dr Wifey
And got him to give me some real pain pills
Now I cant drive and my brother wont be back in town till this evening
SO I am going to watch the vid till he does
Just an FYI I like pink striped panties Next time Please
My AVA is a One eyed One horned Flying purple people eater and will remain so until I am not
Poe Knee
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NEXUS
Since 2010
Pony wrote...
Small wall of words WAAR Brace yourselfYou want my opinion of your amv
Ok here we go
Today is saturday
Wednesday I had emergency surgery on my eye In his office
Thursday went to the dr who said in effect
Well shit that didnt work Lets go to the hospital
3 freaking hours of digging into my eyeball took out all the juice
shot the tears with a Lazar and filled it up with propane gas
Put little stitches in my eyebsll to keep the gas from leaking out
Was up all last night cause it hurt
Went to the Dr this morning and he took the patch off
looked in my eye and said
Well in two or three months we should know if this worked (Read You wont be able to really see out of that eye for at least that long)
My Bro took me home
I started your vid
For the first time since wed I was actually able to concentrate on something besides the pain
I Liked it a lot
Thank you
Keep up the good work
n.b. Finally got a hold of the stupid dr who is off somewhere with Dr Wifey
And got him to give me some real pain pills
Now I cant drive and my brother wont be back in town till this evening
SO I am going to watch the vid till he does
Just an FYI I like pink striped panties Next time Please
My AVA is a One eyed One horned Flying purple people eater and will remain so until I am not
Poe Knee
I'm very touched you like it. I enjoyed making it and since I made the video I was pm'd about entering it in an amv contest so I did.
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Waar
FAKKU Moderator
that would have been way better if instead of liking it it cause his eye to rupture thus killing him all thanks to you, he would have then proceeded to bleed out at the computer desk.
that being said: like the others I find your work is toooooooo loooooooooonnnnnnggggg.
that being said: like the others I find your work is toooooooo loooooooooonnnnnnggggg.
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NEXUS
Since 2010
Waar wrote...
that would have been way better if instead of liking it it cause his eye to rupture thus killing him all thanks to you, he would have then proceeded to bleed out at the computer desk.that being said: like the others I find your work is toooooooo loooooooooonnnnnnggggg.
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Waar wrote...
that would have been way better if instead of liking it it cause his eye to rupture thus killing him all thanks to you, he would have then proceeded to bleed out at the computer desk.that being said: like the others I find your work is toooooooo loooooooooonnnnnnggggg.
Waar
You Do have such a way with words LOL
I would have said it killed me
But I figured you would know I was fibbing
Besides I smoke and the tag on my wrist says that the "gas" is flamible
I wouldn;t have bled out. I would have exploded
Compared to my walls of words the vid was model of brevity
Don't you agree?
Note to self (Prolly Not)
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I actually quite liked it. The clips were a bit long, though. You go from two massive ones to spamming shorter ones, and it just screws the rythm of the video in relation to the track. Slow-mo bits where the baseline drops out are good, but they need to finish when it comes back in.
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NEXUS
Since 2010
doswillrule wrote...
I actually quite liked it. The clips were a bit long, though. You go from two massive ones to spamming shorter ones, and it just screws the rythm of the video in relation to the track. Slow-mo bits where the baseline drops out are good, but they need to finish when it comes back in.
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I didnt see any problems. Usually a good AMV is just good music and clips anyway~xD Unless the person does some editing with pictures and the animation I dont really know at all about~
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NEXUS
Since 2010
Odamust wrote...
Damn. The video's gone.Been gone for awhile. I deleted those vids because a few got copyright claims so I up and deleted everything anime related off my channel to avoid getting buttfucked from youtube.
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Sgt.broski
Where's the futa Jacob
NEXUS wrote...
Odamust wrote...
Damn. The video's gone.Been gone for awhile. I deleted those vids because a few got copyright claims so I up and deleted everything anime related off my channel to avoid getting buttfucked from youtube.
That's why you're suppose to prevent that by using disclaimers man!