Yandere Club - You will only look at me, RIGHT~? ❤

yeah she is fiercely protective and possessive of her girlfriend, but not her boyfriend

Is it about My Little Pony? Just considering who it may be.

what? no its a book I wrote,

her name is Clover, based her on a ball jointed doll I own

Nifty, good luck on the story, it is probably more inclined to be romance correct? I wouldn't say a yandere-esque story is really big, so I doubt there would be horror elements in it.

What kind of themes do you want to use in it?

its more of a subplot, her love with her best friend and the lad her friend falls in love with (so they go polygamist)
It's really more a series of short stories, based around these characters, whom I own dolls of.
There is horror in the story, but Clover doesn't really hurt anyone, instead of killing the young boy whom has stolen her "beloved princess" from her, she instead confronts him and admits to, loving him too...
Though she isn't above killing humans, as she threatens to many times, for various reasons (one being, obviously, human males "crudely" talking to her beloved) humans are like flies to them, I guess

Hm... Now some here will say that it's not yandere if they don't have that one beloved to themselves, but I think there can be varying degrees of yandere. One may be a killer another yandere may be just a stalker It's mostly up to the author. But on to varying degrees of a yandere, if clover threatens the dude I'd consider it hidden yandere or yandere-to-be , I mean he knows that clover has killed people before right? I would feel a little worried.

But be careful as she could be just jealous and become yangere, I can't say I have a right to call something yandere or yangere, I'm not an author. But that is a bit of a gray area, just be aware of that. But again she isn't suppose to be yandere correct? She just has qualities of a yandere

Also the one thing I like about yanderes is not that they are devoted to the subject, it's that little mind break that they have. It gives the feeling that this isn't just a romance or slice of life story. But there is an air of mystery and a conclusion that can go two ways, good or bad. I just like bad ending more, because I grew up listening to story were the hero wins every time.

Shows like Justice League, Teen Titans, or batman for example.

I don't know, I think such a thing will be fully clear upon the story's completion. She does threaten the boy, though he isn't hugely afraid because she has only killed humans and they don't think that's really a big deal.
Though her sister Ivy is far more harsh then Clover is, Ivy doesn't fall in love in the story, (or in her spin off she's-a-vampire-now story, as a silly thing for my Magic the Gathering deck theme)

Actually I would do it more-so during the progress of the story, let the reader be on edge, it'll keep the attention, at least if I were to read it it would keep mine.
A little realism is better than a huge fantasy, after-all how many times do you like hearing about Snow White or Cinderella, I doubt you'd like to read a story about the same thing over and over again.

To me given what I have talked to people here about, so it sounds like Ivy would probably be classified as yangere or just yan. Also does she sparkle?

no she's more like Alucard from Hellsing (infact in most pictures of her that are drawn she is dressed like him, a few as the more classic Dracula)

Is that so, I haven't actually watched Hellsing, but my senses are telling me she probably wouldn't appeal to me. Considering I don't really enjoy when a character wins all the time if she does, (I know about Helsing and that he goes around and kills witches and stuff with ease). Also if she doesn't have any human characteristic like jealousy, pride, lust, slothfulness, or basically the seven sins. Or if she has too much of the seven virtues, temperance, dilgence, and humble for example. Basically if I can't relate to her it's not really engaging.

But, I guess the best part of this is just knowing that someone took the time to make a story, therefore cool.

its a lot more comedic then Hellsing, since Ivy is a child (faerie or vampire she is stil "young" to the world), so tends to embellish more, its a comedy first, and action second-I guess

Good write how you want and have fun doing it. But since we can stray off topic to much, are you interested in yanderes? Or basically obsessive crazy people who usually look 'cute'? It would be awesome to have another fan!

oh but of course, put me down as a fan

Awesome! But I actually can't, Harontiar can though, I don't know what you would prefer, but you know there are yanderes like Yuno Gasai, Kotohona, and Higurashi no Koru Ni's Sonozaki Shion, I didn't really care for all the blood in it.

Personally the yandere I like is Kaede from shuffle, just for the shocking find, that she was a yandere.

yeah Shuffle! I was just talking about that anime

No, I downloaded it. There's a link on the first page of the thread in the OP. Here's a direct link. Just download the file and double (or single) click it to install it.

Okay so it wasn't the VN, the VN has no yandere, it was a weird twist but, hey it was the first I had really seen a yandere. Also have you read any yandere manga/doujins? The eyes are generally what is the most notable of yanderes? There are a few good ones. In anime it's rare to find a yandere.

Also that is really neat font, I am surprised. Where do you put the file? [font=yandere]Nevermind

A bit small, even at 12.

Also a bit odd for me to type using it, now for a poem, this font is great.

your avatar sort of reminds me of Seiseiseki for some reason, donno why...
do you know how to draw?

I can draw maps, and make a history for it, if you count that. Honestly I don't even remember who it is.

the desu meme

remember that?

anyways, no I need a picture drawn for a magic the gathering mat I want made