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Well, I'm doing this so I can get critics so I know how to get better :3
I mostly draw dogs and such. I can't really draw humans that well ):
DeviantArt :>

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[size=14]Looks cool. The proportions are a little off even for manga art but I'm not sure that that's a bad thing.[/h]
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ToyManC Forgot my safe word
Your animal characters are cute, and expressive, but that first cat is either really huge or it's carrying Barbie's panties.
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BagMan wrote...
[size=14]Looks cool. The proportions are a little off even for manga art but I'm not sure that that's a bad thing.[/h]


Well, I Just started to draw manga actually s:
But I will do more and get better! :3
But thanks !

ToyManC wrote...
[size=14]Your animal characters are cute, and expressive, but that first cat is either really huge or it's carrying Barbie's panties.[/h]


Thanks, I never realized that the panties were so small.. And the dog is supposed to be really small too.. I failed, again. :(
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I think it would benefit you to do some studies of real dogs/puppies. Doing so will enhance your understanding of how they are put together, and make your own stylization of them look better :).
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rin^2 wrote...
I think it would benefit you to do some studies of real dogs/puppies. Doing so will enhance your understanding of how they are put together, and make your own stylization of them look better :).


Yeah, thank you :3
I've started to look at the anatomy more now. c:
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Haven't updated this in a while Hahah
Two Mokou drawings I made today c:
Improvements ^-^

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I love your use of color
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For proportions, study some anatomy- and start your drawings from the inside and work outwards (rough skeletons, some loose musculature, and then the rest).

And for human/humanoid characters, starting with the head gives you a good reference point to size the res of the body. The average person is about 7-7 1/2 heads tall.

Some other proportions:

-Arms stretched out, the distance from fingertip to fingertip is pretty damned close to the height of a person.
-The distance between your wrist and your elbow should be about the size of your foot.
-Arms at rest against your sides, your elbows mark where your ribcage ends and your wrists should be at the same level as your crotch.
-Each part of your leg is about the same as your torso, which is about two heads apiece.
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My personal suggestions:

Your art is quite chibi/cartoony and the soft shading seems out of place. Again it's all personal preference but perhaps try using harder brushes.

Your outlines seem a little plain. Perhaps try trialing a wider variable radius to get clearer stokes going or perhaps adding some color to the outlines so they don't seem so out of place.
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Its a pretty nice image, although I think you can improve upon the profile of her shoulder a bit more, it doesn't have to be wider or too angular, but just think about the intersection of deltoids, Trapezius, and clavicles. As it stands, the constructions feel a bit loose, but I think it works pretty well in general.
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Sorry that I don't reply, but I read the comments. And I think I improved a bit again. c:
Even tho the shading isnt the best, I made it in like 1 hour, didnt have much more time xD

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I have to honestly and curiously ask, why furry?
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Your art has improved a lot, specially rendering techniques! I wanna see more dogs c:
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Chyort wrote...
I have to honestly and curiously ask, why furry?


If you mean the maid, that's not a furry.. Furries are anthro animals x3

R. wrote...
Your art has improved a lot, specially rendering techniques! I wanna see more dogs c:


Thank you :33
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artcellrox The Grey Knight :y
Your puppies are absolutely adorable. <333

I especially like the "wanna fuck" expression. I think it's pretty dead on.
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artcellrox wrote...
Your puppies are absolutely adorable. <333

I especially like the "wanna fuck" expression. I think it's pretty dead on.


Thanks ^^

Anyways, here is a Flandre Scarlet drawing I made today
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Dude, dat Moko-tan~ D:

hnnnngggg~
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mangaka350 wrote...
Dude, dat Moko-tan~ D:

hnnnngggg~


Mokou<3


Anyways, made this Rumia today
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JimmyThePlayBoy wrote...
mangaka350 wrote...
Dude, dat Moko-tan~ D:

hnnnngggg~


Mokou<3


Anyways, made this Rumia today
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That's cute!

Also, you got a spammer the post before me.
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