Another few random sketches
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Just a random sketch I did based on, whom I think is the most beautiful AV actress, Harumi Asano while trying to be faithful to Oda Non's realistic style. Here's the end result.
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KanuUnchou wrote...
not bad tho more could be done with it.Yes, of course. This was done spontaneously anyway. Already sketching a few more as I'm writing now, haha. Thanks.
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Is this the girl you wanted to draw? I am not going to go into details, but I want to draw your attention on some few things.
This picture of hers in from the same angle as you have drawn her skull. But you have drawn her nose and mouth in another angle than her skull.
I have drawn some important reference lines:
And now a similar Asian skull (although with some noticeable differences) to demonstrate the relation of the forehead-line and the supraorbital-ridges-chin-line:
So, lets comment the reference lines/circles:
First of all i do know that in Anime the Eyes are drawn bigger, mouth and nose smaller, so I will not criticize that. I will criticize mainly angels.
1) Notice the space between the eyes (red line from eye to eye). It is quite big in your drawing. The space shrinks when the face is viewed from an angle. In drawing this is called shortening (if I translated correctly).
2) Look at the Nasal bone (purple line). In the photo it starts a lil bit beneath the mid of the eyes, in your drawing it is far beneath the eyes.
3) Now to the angle: If you look at the nostrils (red circles at the nose) you will see in your drawing only one nostril is visible, whereas in the picture you see both. And all of this while the skull is in the exact same angle! the same goes for the mouth. You have a far bigger shortening of the left lip (red lines) in the drawing than in the picture.
4) The chin (blue line) is far broader in your drawing than in the picture.
5) The cheekbones and the jaw (purple circles). In your drawing the jaw is hardly visible, and the left cheekbone is lower than in the picture.
6) Most IMPORTANT: The forehead. The forehead decides a great deal about the sex of a drawn face. Women have plain foreheads, while men have sloping foreheads. Weather or not the forehead is sloping is indicated by the forehead-line and the supraorbital-ridges-chin-line. The angle should be a little less than 180. If you see a skull from an angle, the angle of course also decreases a little bit (as you can see in the photo). But the angle of your drawing is just too big. It looks quite masculine.
7) I also noticed that the flesh between the index-finger and the thumb looks very strange in your drawing. Here is some more detailed drawing:
And the boobs are HUGE. But thats of course OK ;)
I hope i could help!
P.S.: You can find a lot about anatomy on the Internet, and if you don't you can ask me. I have quite a few books on anatomy in drawing at home.
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This picture of hers in from the same angle as you have drawn her skull. But you have drawn her nose and mouth in another angle than her skull.
I have drawn some important reference lines:
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And now a similar Asian skull (although with some noticeable differences) to demonstrate the relation of the forehead-line and the supraorbital-ridges-chin-line:
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So, lets comment the reference lines/circles:
First of all i do know that in Anime the Eyes are drawn bigger, mouth and nose smaller, so I will not criticize that. I will criticize mainly angels.
1) Notice the space between the eyes (red line from eye to eye). It is quite big in your drawing. The space shrinks when the face is viewed from an angle. In drawing this is called shortening (if I translated correctly).
2) Look at the Nasal bone (purple line). In the photo it starts a lil bit beneath the mid of the eyes, in your drawing it is far beneath the eyes.
3) Now to the angle: If you look at the nostrils (red circles at the nose) you will see in your drawing only one nostril is visible, whereas in the picture you see both. And all of this while the skull is in the exact same angle! the same goes for the mouth. You have a far bigger shortening of the left lip (red lines) in the drawing than in the picture.
4) The chin (blue line) is far broader in your drawing than in the picture.
5) The cheekbones and the jaw (purple circles). In your drawing the jaw is hardly visible, and the left cheekbone is lower than in the picture.
6) Most IMPORTANT: The forehead. The forehead decides a great deal about the sex of a drawn face. Women have plain foreheads, while men have sloping foreheads. Weather or not the forehead is sloping is indicated by the forehead-line and the supraorbital-ridges-chin-line. The angle should be a little less than 180. If you see a skull from an angle, the angle of course also decreases a little bit (as you can see in the photo). But the angle of your drawing is just too big. It looks quite masculine.
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7) I also noticed that the flesh between the index-finger and the thumb looks very strange in your drawing. Here is some more detailed drawing:
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And the boobs are HUGE. But thats of course OK ;)
I hope i could help!
P.S.: You can find a lot about anatomy on the Internet, and if you don't you can ask me. I have quite a few books on anatomy in drawing at home.
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No, that is not the picture I referred to. Same girl though. This is the one:
http://models.japan-whores.com/harumi-asano-/harumi-asano-/pictures/060.html
I have already taken into account most of the things you've pointed out, yes, and these things differ based on my own personal tastes to purposely alter some of her facial features. Take shortening, for example. I know based on common sense that the angle shrinks as the face turn towards the right-angle, however I personally like it slightly further apart. That goes the same for the slightly elevated eyebrows and some other stuffs. I must admit that fingers are my worst enemies simply because of the amount of guidelines per area, and that's why I didn't really give much attention to it even though I know it's not anatomically accurate (actually more of not bothering to correct that; just a hurriedly-made sketch anyway) I would've rubbed off some of these otherwise "inaccurate" parts, but I let my own sense of style take its place.
Thank you, Tachyon. You point out many details that many people might not even be aware of. I do know about anatomy; I happen to major in physiology, haha. Now that you've mentioned about guidelines, I should probably apply the Golden ratio into some 'real' drawings next time. If I have the time to do that, that is. Thank you again, you've been most thoughtful.
http://models.japan-whores.com/harumi-asano-/harumi-asano-/pictures/060.html
I have already taken into account most of the things you've pointed out, yes, and these things differ based on my own personal tastes to purposely alter some of her facial features. Take shortening, for example. I know based on common sense that the angle shrinks as the face turn towards the right-angle, however I personally like it slightly further apart. That goes the same for the slightly elevated eyebrows and some other stuffs. I must admit that fingers are my worst enemies simply because of the amount of guidelines per area, and that's why I didn't really give much attention to it even though I know it's not anatomically accurate (actually more of not bothering to correct that; just a hurriedly-made sketch anyway) I would've rubbed off some of these otherwise "inaccurate" parts, but I let my own sense of style take its place.
Thank you, Tachyon. You point out many details that many people might not even be aware of. I do know about anatomy; I happen to major in physiology, haha. Now that you've mentioned about guidelines, I should probably apply the Golden ratio into some 'real' drawings next time. If I have the time to do that, that is. Thank you again, you've been most thoughtful.
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Quick random sketches I did during class for adreline's sake when boredom set in. Note that some of the guidelines are not exactly straight, tilted because I always shift the paper slightly sideways when I write and did so when I drew these (I should've aligned myself perpendicularly to the mid-section of my horizontal guidelines before I started to draw). I don't like to completely clean off some of those lines because in my opinion it gives sketches somewhat an artistic value (so yeah, I love seeing concept artworks).
Anyway, since I rarely draw nowadays, I thought I should keep these and share it with you guys. These are just randomly designed characters based on some stereotypes I thought of during then, which I think need not even be said because I bet you'll know.
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Anyway, since I rarely draw nowadays, I thought I should keep these and share it with you guys. These are just randomly designed characters based on some stereotypes I thought of during then, which I think need not even be said because I bet you'll know.
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Hahahaha sweeeeeeeeet I used to draw porn during lectures as well..
These are actually really good, I love the dicks pokin her tits in the third.
These are actually really good, I love the dicks pokin her tits in the third.
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baddie stick with the other thread u have, no point and waste of time making a new one for each new set of stuff.
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KanuUnchou wrote...
baddie stick with the other thread u have, no point and waste of time making a new one for each new set of stuff.I actually planed to make the other specially for Harumi Asano drawings. Sorry, I should've mentioned that.
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still a bad..
one thread is enough for each user, don't forget u can edit it and change things around to ur liking, hope u don't become like mangaka baddielol
one thread is enough for each user, don't forget u can edit it and change things around to ur liking, hope u don't become like mangaka baddielol
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Those were very nice~ o-o
Especially the first and third.
But something about the 3rd's face was off... I don't know what it was. Maybe I just don't like the hair. xD
Those were very nice~ o-o
Especially the first and third.
But something about the 3rd's face was off... I don't know what it was. Maybe I just don't like the hair. xD
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I was pondering whether to put up just the bust in detail or to display the action outright. Oh well, my indecision decisively led me to uploading both. May they help feast your boner, or something.
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mangaka350 wrote...
well then....the anatomy needs a little work man....
Oh? How so? Care to elaborate?
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Edited that third (paizuri) sketch... Didn't like the earlier hair myself; it was just meant for something different.
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too much penis lol
you have a good understanding of anatomy but your proportions don't seem that correct to some extent... if you want to improve and learn how things work its better to look at actual artist's like Andrew Loomis,leonardo davinci, etc... instead of anime since those are not always correct even tho it may look appealing.
try and stay away from anime art as much as you can because any good artist can do anime, it takes a great artist to work outside of there comfort zone.
you have a good understanding of anatomy but your proportions don't seem that correct to some extent... if you want to improve and learn how things work its better to look at actual artist's like Andrew Loomis,leonardo davinci, etc... instead of anime since those are not always correct even tho it may look appealing.
try and stay away from anime art as much as you can because any good artist can do anime, it takes a great artist to work outside of there comfort zone.
