AzylSagara's Art Corner ಠ___ಠ (UPDATED 10/1)

Hello everyone welcome to my epic art thread of awesome-ness!

I'd like to show some of my artwork old and new to you all in hope of some constructive criticism,helpful insight and kind comments.This thread will be updated as soon as i don't get lazy!! Please enjoy!~❤ I draw traditionally but later digitally alter my work for added effect.

unfortunately i know have to add some rules....
-please do not advertise your threads directly unless otherwise asked for(if it's in your spoiler it's fine)
-i do not do requests(at the moment maybe sometime later)
-critiques are welcomed but not necessary
-If you have any questions regarding my art do ask i am more than happy to answer them

To start things off i present a bountiful array of beautiful girls!

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pretty cool!

here goes... proportions and anatomy that is all.

Yeah, some of the anatomy is kind of distracting me.

Great~! ^-^ So cute~! I like the sketches~

Nice going!
*bow*

Nice work.
But you should consider buying a large sketchpad, lined paper will kill you.

I agree. The lines are pretty annoying.

Good so far though. =P Keep at it.

I also concur, proportions and anatomy...not to be nitpicking, but you should use drawing pen to trace your pencil lines and then clean it with either a rubber eraser or PS to make it feel 'clean'.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you for all your constructive criticism and comments!!I will address some of the issues you have stated so far...

I will make sure to work on the proportions and anatomy but please be be more specific on what exactly about it i need to work on,like for example the drawing in the second spoiler her legs are too thick.I ask this of you because i may not see the faults in my art unless directly stated.Please be blunt if you will,i can take helpful insight.

As i stated prior some of these are older drawings when i did not have a sketchbook.I do own one as of now.I realize the lines do take away of the image.

I do not favor drawing in pen,i have a bad habit of smearing my drawings and putting a piece of paper under my hand makes it worse.I have learned how to sketch so my lines usually appear very gentle.I fear emphasizing lines in fear of a bad overall composition.
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And now another update!!I will introduce my own original character Skylar.Part 1

He's gone through quite a character development change thus some of the following drawings don't represent who he is nowadays...

This is the intro pic >:D

nice drawing i wish i can draw like that

Yesssh, very sweet.

Though try drawing a different character ahahah. XD

Thank you lol you sound like me!!

This batch was just suppose to be of one character only since i started this thread with a bunch of random females.Another registered user here on Fakku! requested to see this particular character so I felt obliged to post them up for that person and everyone else to see.

Thank you! which particular drawing though? o.o it took alot of time and patience to draw the way I do now,I'm sure within time you'll grow better as an artist!!Do you have an art thread I would love to see your work ^___^

Hi! It looks like your art is really coming along! :) As others have mentioned however, there are definitely proportion and anatomy issues you need to tackle before your art can improve even further. I would like to point out some of the problems that I see in each of your drawings, as per your request.

Starting off with the drawing in the first spoiler, the first thing that hits me is that her head is too large. If you measure her head and compare it with her body, her head is nearly more than half the size of her body, which is strangely awkward. The torso tends to be closer to two heads in size, so make sure you keep that in mind and continue to reference back to the size of the head as you draw.

The second drawing is a bit hard to make out due to the lines and the writing, but it seems stronger proportionally than the previous drawing, though I feel the head could still be a tad smaller. You might want to use a reference for the hand, as it looks kind of strange. Definitely study drapery and clothes more, as her sleeves seem very stiff and strangely bulgy at her elbow. I can't really tell what that thing below her elbow is with the stripe running through it though, so I'll just leave it at that.

You seemed to have a lot of fun with the details and designs of the third drawing, which is great. :) While I feel that you've nailed the size of her head down for this drawing, I think you've placed her head too high- it seems like she has a really long neck. Her hand holding the staff is too big (the hand when open shouldn't be longer than the head), her arm feels a bit long, and I think her torso is a bit thin and not curved enough for the pose that she's in. Unless she was leaning her back on something, her body should be curved and not so straight. Lastly, make sure that you draw through the clothes lightly to make sure the anatomy fits together. If I try and trace her legs back to her torso, they don't seem to connect with her butt at the bottom unless they curve in a very weird way.

The fourth drawing of the cat girl seems good- just make sure to keep the size of her eye in check. You don't want it taking up half of her face. :)

Your most recent drawing of Skylar is quite good. My only gripe with it is his hand. It looks like it's his right hand, but the way you've drawn it shows that it must be his left hand, which in turn suggests that his left arm is really long if you follow the direction of his wrist.

I definitely think you're off to a good start! You should really work more on anatomy and proportions though, so make sure to get in some good life drawings. Those really help you with tackling the various problems that arise when drawing the human figure. You should also consider sketching the structure of the drawing first before drawing if you don't already, which might help you spot errors more easily.

I really can't give more advice due to the material you've been drawing on, but if you'd like me to do a redline and a more thorough critique of a future drawing, just be sure to draw it on plain white paper so I can see your beautiful drawing more clearly. Do a full body drawing if you can- those are always fun and are a lot more challenging. :)

*clap* bravo i luv them

thank you for actually reading what i wrote and even following directions.It's rare at times so thank you just for this alone.



I see thank you i did not catch that.i didn't draw a proper frame before i drew her out.I never drew a character in this pose either so it was very tricky for me.I don't usually use the head sizes in proportion of the rest of the body i will try to do so.



I see the intention was to have the writing and lines be part of the drawing,perhaps that wasn't the best idea.Thank you i seem to have an issue with the head size of the character being too large i will make sure to work on it.Ah yes i has having a lot of difficulties with her hand.I need to look more into folds and such i tend to overdo it without making it looking actually realistic at times.i seem to have a reoccurring problems at reproducing folds correctly when their limbs are turned.ah,you seem like you had so much more to say haha.



Yes i did i had alot of fun with it.I usually don't draw characters in such a small size so i'm glad that this turned out better,but there was still to many anatomical errors as well.It must have been the pose once again.i will keep in mind to have the clothes and the anatomy all go in place.Your pointers are very concise.Once again many thanks !



haha i knew it looked a bit off but it looked so attractive i didn't want to get rid of the size!!



Thank you very much once again.Yes that would be correct.



Thanks!It is very tricky i always have difficulty having proper models for their body.At times i would love a model!Most of the time i do sketch the structure of the body but for most of these i didn't either due to difficulty of the pose or how much of the character i actually draw.



Okay i will make sure to post up images that are on blank paper.I suppose there won't be no need to critique the images on line drawings since those are usually more along the lines of doodles.Ah yes i have alot of those in stored!!

I cannot thank you enough!!I know it must sound very repetitious at this point but i am extremely grateful!! It seems like i still have a very rough way to go with a lot of room to improve! +rep for all your hard work!! <3

*bows* haha thank you very much!!

would give my opinion but yagami already C&C so ill pass till more new art arrives...

Cute!! But their heads are kinda big.

Alright another update of just pure Skylar! part 2 (plus one that isn't)

These do not need to be thoroughly critiqued unless there is something that horribly is off then do please note so...

had a little too much playing around with the sticker features...




i think i might have overkilled the auto-adjustment on this one


Lastly guest art by a friend colored by her as well

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The non-Skylar image of this update...an eechi schoolgirl for y'all to come back to my thread more pron

aiee i do need to fix it don't i?