Breqaya's Art
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MRG wrote...
Kuroneko1/2 wrote...
Also, don't listen to kanu, keep doing whatever you're doing.
Honestly this is immature, don't listen and keep doing what you are doing? does that mean that you don't want him to keep better? All Kanu is suggesting is that he tries to get out of his comfort zone to attempt different styles and to improve himself. Also the TC himself understood that he should do attempt things that are less anime, and has explained that it is hard to break that habit, never in any of his post I read that he was against what Kanu said, in fact he agreed to it. I know that you two have went against each other in the forums, but reading that just annoyed me.
Woah, I did not expect this. Hopefully I can clear it up.
Okay, I did not see Kanu's post as a suggestion for him to improve his art, but rather as a selfish request. So I said to Breqaya to not take that too seriously. It wasn't meant to be offensive at all.
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breqaya wrote...
EmiyaKiritsugu wrote...
the way you positioned her chin and neck makes her look a bit pudgey also define her center of balance on the indication of her legs since shes leaning on a side
the pose is nice but make one leg stand out more
(or can make her look like shes leaning against a wall)
relax the index finger on your right arm under the boob
it makes it look like the hand is pushing into the ribs rather than hugging the abdomen
(this all conjecture on my bad eyesight so don't mind any of the mistakes i have may have said altogether)
other than that my only complaint is that its not COLORED!
Lol Thanks For the pointers. I'll see what I can do about the things you pointed out. As for the pudgy look I was kind of going for that on purpose just to try out something a bit different from most of my other stuff since most of my other characters are all pretty skinny.
ahhh
then you can cross that out
it looks good as a bit pudgey
just that i was to used to criticizing alot of manga/anime type works or inspirations, especially my own bad art haha
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Here's the fully colored version of my previous line art. I want to submit this to the 2010 fakku art book. Any critiques would be much appreciated.
