Coloring [Thoughts?]

Well, I decided to take a whack at it (no pun intended) and I

turned this;

into this;

Any thoughts? This is the manga that I may or may not completely color and possibly uncensor: https://www.fakku.net/viewmanga.php?id=6984

I think that the colours are a bit sharp somehow. and don't you think that removing these spot like things would be good?

Do you mean where the "light" hits?

I am not sure to what you are referring to. But what I meant was that the colours makes the manga seems more like a marvel to me. and about the black spots (shadow.) shouldn't you remove them and draw a real shadow?

Okay, now I understand what you mean.

I tried, but I failed horribly and I just ended up giving up. >,>

Oh... okay. I just thought that it was possible to do better. but frankly this one is rather good.

[size=12] [/h] Looks nice to me. Uncensored would be awesome! good job! :D[b]

Has no consideration of light.

As Anes posted.... Try using burn tool for areas which has shadings... >_>