Ebony pencil is your friend

A few drawing I did.
Constructive criticism is appreciated.
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/145/3/6/Hand_Study_by_animeruler100.png
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/145/f/a/Donna_Banks_by_animeruler100.png
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/256/e/1/wasteland_by_animeruler100-d2yoahq.png

Now, I know I can't do any better myself, but is the second pic a midget? (was it intended that way?)
Also, the left shoulder joint seems to be way too far from the body.

Sorry if it's no constructive enough.
Just pointing out what caught my attention.

(still better than anything I could do :D)

good stuff but could use work tho your understanding of anatomy is quite good along but ill C&C later tonight...

No she's not. She was probably too curvy for your taste.

It's more like the proportions are wrong, because aside from the shoulder being too dislocated from it's place, everything is where it's supposed to be. I made a little trace over your drawing and kind of fixed the proportions so you can have an idea of what it should look like.
PS: I am no Yagaminoue, so don't expect something pro. This is just so you can hopefully realize what should be fixed.



For a side to side comparison: Original | Fixed

I wasn't aiming towards realism. You could say I deliberately made the proportions that way. But I like your advice. Sadly, I believe the link is broken.

It seems sadpanda is having some issues. I replaced the image host, try to check it now.

Still can't see it,sir KURO...

Try again now. If you can't see the imgur image in my post, check the sadpanda one I had before (in FireFist's quote). Sadpanda is no longer down.

Can see it now,
thanks.

I don't really see that much difference besides the shoulder. I think you just made her skinnier.