Ereine's Finite Works - 18/02/2011 - Reorganized

After defeating the semester exam back at my easy-kill college, I brought myself a gift. It's a wacom bamboo CTH-460/K, i posted this image to receive feedback of my (well i say it's improved but you could say otherwise) improved drawing and coloring style. Please took 30 seconds of your time to give me a short (or long) feedback that will be essential to improve my future drawing and coloring skills. Thank you :-D

All the works here are my own works including my pseudonym if you found it on other site such as AA and AD. Erwin1,Megaduck,Turboduck,Megarofl,Ereine.

My latest drawing, now using a Wacom Bamboo tablet :-) (just brought it, felt like i can't leave it at home somethings)

NOW Reorganized, thanks to azylsagara who point out my mistakes!

Without the sweat lines


With the sweat lines


My older drawings:

1.Bunny-chan

My older work, kinda shabby and had some anatomy failures though...


2.Verdhia

My next picture, took me a full day to complete this one. Well, what do you think?

Nude ver. Here

3.Misaki

My vector-based coloring test!


4.Melissa (the deathscythe girl)

So you drew this or just edited the background and skin tone only?

Because I'm confused -.-

i drew it :-) Got the BW scans if u want. I just edited the pic and re upload it. Last ver background is blurry

ah ok, then the top half looks weird. It's like blending in and doesn't have a dividing line from the bottom half. Needs more depth between the stomach area and the vagina part. (yes I said vagina so lay off me)

Ugh. I think you made the background too busy. It really takes away from the character. Also, did you forget to put panties on her, or was that on purpose?

What a Drawing..

Thank you everybody for your input,i will reduce the background for my next project. I'm relieved, turns out FAKKU didn't have abundance of "your drawing is ugly" troll as other sites. I will continue my training to further improve my works!

By the way, I'm in progress of building a blog. Should i take the wordpress service?

Once again, thank you!

I have to say very nice for a first time, hell pretty nice even if it wasn't your first.

The detail is really good. Nice work. Blondes aren't really my thing but you
made a really decent drawing my friend.

Thank you for your kind comment. I'll try to improve myself with the input you folks gave me. And yes, including the last picture it's my 4th image that i draw myself (and also color it myself).

Anyone had a request? Will work it as soon as i can!

Info for Tetsuya: The image is WIP. Il'' lost the image later at 10/08/2010

Regards,
Ereine

Oh sweet! Thank you. I'll looking forward to what you came up with. =]

A non NFSW for one in awhile, i was busy modeling my Gundam Deathscythe while watching a friend getting his butt owned in a prince of persia game. Somehow, i just wish that the prince is a girl and wields a scythe rather than a dagger. And here it is!



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Again! Now featured a little red ridding hood strikes back against the hungryterrified wolf. ;-)



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[color=blue]I just love your drawing style! The way you colour the images is really good as well![/color]

I want to say the neck is a bit long.

But that Red Riding Hood one is good! XD

[font=Verdana][color=green]I really like your works! Keep up the good work :3

Thank you for the feedback people! I shall turn it as motivation to keep drawing.

(Although it may take a while to be on Kaho's level)