Fakku art project-a doujin?

I really like the doujin that you made for Fakku. I think its a really great idea. Now that I can give rep, I'm +repping you man.

Thanks everyone.
Somehow, this tittle makes me looks like an ero-artist, but i'm just a newbie artist. I still can't believe it, because this is also my first time making an H-doujin.
I also hope that there is another one doing things like me.

From the first one, i get some critique by my otherself. Just let you to know, here they are:
1. Line art, it's a shame that i used a 0.5 drawing pen.
2. Background, descreased the quality after some pages.
3. Story, it's rather long and without impact.
4. It's too "art work", than an H-art work.

So in the next one, i will:
1. Use the Kabura, instead of drawing pen
2. Descrease the page count, so i can concentrate, full at the art.
3. Give the impact at the story. I hope i can do it for this one.

Yah, it will still "art work" like.
Will keep the H-art for the next one.

Ah, i also open to have some critique from you all.

hey what you did was good not many people or even none where i live in so you better be proud is not something where you do it post it up and get thousand of downloads suddenly you know ?

What!? Well, it doesn't matter. I will keep my identity hidden.

But what site exactly, i want to see it.. :D (Rather feel arogant here)


For some reason, i just feel i get thousand download because i'm the first one. That's why, i need to increase the quality of my doujin, so people will consider as real FAKKU Artist.

Still waiting for FAKKU's critique for "FOR FAKKU!".

let me tell you something if ur work is not good enough would Jacob post it up for us to download ? just give it a thought then u will see why is not because your the first Fakku artist ...

Uhh, yeah. My bad. I just feel i'm not good enough. Now, after you said that, I feel more and more stupid XD. Well, sorry fella admin. I just not think about that..

Thanks to remind me Skyler998.

I personally think you did well as a beginner and from the people posted here I'm not wrong. I'm sure as you gain experience your style will get even better.

just to let you know that ur in a good form and pace keep it up and i'll see you as the next famous artist

I noticed the decreased background detail. For the imaginary parts, it's fine, but you could have added more details in the background for the "reality" part. I think a story without impact is fine, as long as it isn't a serious story. I don't get what you mean when you say it's "too art work". I suppose decreasing the page count is a good idea. Lastly, how will the use of Kabura change your art?

I think he meant he focused more on the characters being cute than actually making the artworks hentaish or very stimulation.

Great Work Still ^_^ Keep it up.

Yeah, no impact for this one i think >.< ... Also, Kabura don't really change anything XD...

I can promise one thing for the next one, "THE GREAT ONE!!". That what i must do for become FAKKU Artist.

Total will be 8 pages, done 1 pages for now.
*Start think, when it will be done....*

Well, I'm looking forward to it.

me too

XD Zannen i can't be part of this.

YAYY!! I will make Raze busy correcting my story again. :roll:

Change the story again, it will be 6 pages with 1 cover page.
Just want to make it better, and better, that's why i do that.

almost done 3 pages... But not colored yet >.<

congratulations.

Wow, already another one in the line of being done.
Keep up the good work!

It will be 9 pages(draft complete), 1 title(line art complete) and 1 comment. So total will be 11 pages..
Total complete pages = 4.
5 more to go.

Looks like an ages that i don't work for this one. Hard to maintain time, too busy for school.

But yeah, continue on working for it right away.. After finish my Kokonoe Rin ^^

Nice to hear a status update! I look forward to its completion.