Feedback/Opinion on an original song of mine???
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Sorry to be a bother of a poster... but I actually really respect the opinions of forum members here. I am a musician and while I typically write/perform metal music, I have recently found a love for classical and acoustic guitar pieces. I wrote one a while back that I have been quite fond of working on in my spare time.
I recorded this rough draft clip of how the song is, and I was wondering if anyone would like to give a bit of feedback. I am looking to evolve this song and round it off into a finished piece. Keep in mind while listening that the piece is in its infancy stage, but that is also why it's crucial to get feedback now. Whether it has potential or whether I should scrap and start over. Thank you to anyone who takes the time, I really do appreciate it. <3
I recorded this rough draft clip of how the song is, and I was wondering if anyone would like to give a bit of feedback. I am looking to evolve this song and round it off into a finished piece. Keep in mind while listening that the piece is in its infancy stage, but that is also why it's crucial to get feedback now. Whether it has potential or whether I should scrap and start over. Thank you to anyone who takes the time, I really do appreciate it. <3
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I'll try to provide constructive criticism.
The transition in 1:06 doesn't sound smooth to the ears.
Also after doing your closing riff in the end, I think it would sound great if you'd do that riff in 0:50 before ending the song.
I'm not sure if this'll make it better but I'm just trying to help.
The transition in 1:06 doesn't sound smooth to the ears.
Also after doing your closing riff in the end, I think it would sound great if you'd do that riff in 0:50 before ending the song.
I'm not sure if this'll make it better but I'm just trying to help.
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Hiveminers wrote...
I'll try to provide constructive criticism.The transition in 1:06 doesn't sound smooth to the ears.
Also after doing your closing riff in the end, I think it would sound great if you'd do that riff in 0:50 before ending the song.
I'm not sure if this'll make it better but I'm just trying to help.
That actually does help. I was considering re-ordering some of it around, also switching tempo and make the transitions more seamless. Because I agree, it does not sound fluid.
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mdarkanima wrote...
Hiveminers wrote...
I'll try to provide constructive criticism.The transition in 1:06 doesn't sound smooth to the ears.
Also after doing your closing riff in the end, I think it would sound great if you'd do that riff in 0:50 before ending the song.
I'm not sure if this'll make it better but I'm just trying to help.
That actually does help. I was considering re-ordering some of it around, also switching tempo and make the transitions more seamless. Because I agree, it does not sound fluid.
Cool. Keep us in touch with the progression of your song, please.