FFXIII Tiem? Hyes!
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Finally trying my hand at hentai. I've drawn fanart for series before, but never hentai. Hope it isn't too terrible. While we're at it, how about you guys post your own FFXIII hentai. Or just regular fanart. Y'know, whichever. As long as you drew it.
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Vanille should be made more skinnier, and her left leg could use more work, otherwise for fanart and your first try at a hentai type it's ok.
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lelouch20 wrote...
Vanille should be made more skinnier, and her left leg could use more work, otherwise for fanart and your first try at a hentai type it's ok.Hmm, alright. :> Thanks for the comment; I'll probably try again later this weekend.
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Her whole middle body needs to be a bit thinner, and her breasts lack definition. They look like they were just drawn on (not like they weren't, but they don't look like how breasts would look in a doujin or something).
Other than that, the face was pretty good. :D
Other than that, the face was pretty good. :D
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When I saw this my mind just screamed: @∆@...18th century Japanese prints! Waaa~.... so I pretty much love it.
↑↑↑ Notice something weird....oh yea- no shading. Line and color. No concern for showing dimensions- the image is flat, and that's ok because it seeks to illustrate more so than to create [the illusion of space]. After all Hentai as we know it now started out as mass produced prints sold in the red light district around the 18th-19th century. I just love to see the same motifs evident in your work, whether intentional or not...doesn't matter XD
So uh don't change it much, but maybe some patterning? I'd love to see that, mhm.
As for the body, it's nice to see a fuller figure minus the baloonie breasts, I think it's natural and different (foreshortening of her left? foot makes me wanna flash 3rd graders <3). Good Job!!!
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↑↑↑ Notice something weird....oh yea- no shading. Line and color. No concern for showing dimensions- the image is flat, and that's ok because it seeks to illustrate more so than to create [the illusion of space]. After all Hentai as we know it now started out as mass produced prints sold in the red light district around the 18th-19th century. I just love to see the same motifs evident in your work, whether intentional or not...doesn't matter XD
So uh don't change it much, but maybe some patterning? I'd love to see that, mhm.
As for the body, it's nice to see a fuller figure minus the baloonie breasts, I think it's natural and different (foreshortening of her left? foot makes me wanna flash 3rd graders <3). Good Job!!!