First. Lineart. Ever.

I was actually considering NOT posting this since well its not finished and I highly doubt it will be for a long time...

But meh...



So yeah I cant call it mine since I kinda... traced it... and I feel bad for doing that... So I wont ever again... but I know that never in a BILLION years would I be able to get that pose right...(Looks simple enough... but I tried) trust me its fucking hard getting exactly what youre thinking about on paper and I happened to see this figure posed in the same way I was thinking so one thing led to another... and here we are...



(Actually it started with a Juri Pic on Gelbooru but thats besides the point)

I was getting some tips from some people before my PC died and I was able to save it so I might get back to trying to finish it sometime soon...

But yeah just thought I'd get people's thoughts so far... aside from her shoulder and hair... Cuz I know those need alot of work...

Your line quality seems very nice and smooth. You may want to vary thicks and thins throughout to make her more dynamic though- right now it seems as if all the lines aside from her hair are of the same thickness and it feels somewhat boring.

If you'd like some tips on her figure, I'd be happy to help with that as well. :)

I'll take any advice you can give...

make all ur lines as thin as possible which is what I do or you can vary them where some r thicker then others and the pressure to make it fade or look natural works well.



meh...


line-art looks alright just... more could be done with.

actually tbh the sketch imo looks kinda nice compared to the line art where the face and hair look nothing a like.

anyways... good luck