Hentais my addiction By SLAYER NEXUS
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Ehrm may i ask. Is this the right place to put this really? IB?. . . Just doesnt fell like the right spot to put it at. . . Nice song anyway.
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can i take a shot in this song?
you know im a vocalist from a band XD
so can i sing this song? >:3
you know im a vocalist from a band XD
so can i sing this song? >:3
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yo dude! based on your voice are you an europe people. got the kind of voice that only the north people have....
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SLAYER NEXUS wrote...
mangaka350 wrote...
can i take a shot in this song?you know im a vocalist from a band XD
so can i sing this song? >:3
Hell ya you can.
>:3
without the guitar though >_>
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SLAYER NEXUS wrote...
mangaka350 wrote...
send me the damn mp3 :DYou got it.
Letupload it and I will send you the link but just a one question do you
want the instrumental version or the finished one with vocals?
instrumental >:3
and it will take time to practice this song.
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Nashrakh
Little White Butterflies Staff
I have a really hard time restraining myself from insulting you right now.
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Nashrakh wrote...
I have a really hard time restraining myself from insulting you right now.And you're doing a pretty damn great job doing it too.
Slayer_Nexus: uhhm, good job
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Nashrakh
Little White Butterflies Staff
Uzumaki101 wrote...
Nashrakh wrote...
I have a really hard time restraining myself from insulting you right now.And you're doing a pretty damn great job doing it too.
I know someone's gonna do it anyway.
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Nashrakh
Little White Butterflies Staff
That's why I didn't knock you over.
I can give you some critique though...
(Don't read if you can't take it)
I can give you some critique though...
(Don't read if you can't take it)
Spoiler:
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SLAYER NEXUS wrote...
I think I want to add a couple more verses to the song.it did seem kinda short but good job otherwise
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Nashrakh
Little White Butterflies Staff
SLAYER NEXUS wrote...
Nashrakh wrote...
That's why I didn't knock you over.I can give you some critique though...
(Don't read if you can't take it)
Spoiler:
I still don't get this whole singing off-key thing did I do this the whole song?
And yes it did take about 3 hours I had to do numerous takes for guitar and bass plus the vocals (I know not my best) But I am thinking of rerecording it and making it abit more technical, after all it was just kind of a demo version of it.
even when I was done I thought it still needed some work also I think I want to add a couple more verses to the song.
Hmm yeah, I didn't hear any bass in there at all... guess it was buried by the guitar, but mixing ain't easy, so...
If I may be really blunt, to me it seems as if you didn't really give this much thought, because it seems half-baked at best.
The singing sounds "off-key" to me since there is barely any variation in pitch, making it sound rather monotonous. But that's what singers are for haha, I can't sing worth shit myself... (that's not something you can get under control in a few days, sadly)
Make it longer and make the music more intricate and this may be much more well received. One thing you could also do is using a drum computer or midi drums, that will step up the quality a notch I think (an actual drum set may be the optimum but who has one of that standing around, right).
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Nashrakh
Little White Butterflies Staff
Doubling the guitar doesn't mean it has to be lost in a mix...
It's about making room for each instrument.
My advice would be...
- Turn gain on guitar down
- don't use a "bathtub" EQ (bumped treble and bass, scooped mids), try setting it flat first and go from there
- same for bass, flat EQ is usually best, for added punch, you may want to bump low mids (my favorite to make bass guitars cut through the mix)
- if that still doesn't work, cut some low mids on guitar to make room for the bass
It's some kind of science, really... haha (and as a bassist, I tend to turn up the bass guitar too much too =_=)
It's about making room for each instrument.
My advice would be...
- Turn gain on guitar down
- don't use a "bathtub" EQ (bumped treble and bass, scooped mids), try setting it flat first and go from there
- same for bass, flat EQ is usually best, for added punch, you may want to bump low mids (my favorite to make bass guitars cut through the mix)
- if that still doesn't work, cut some low mids on guitar to make room for the bass
It's some kind of science, really... haha (and as a bassist, I tend to turn up the bass guitar too much too =_=)
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SLAYER NEXUS wrote...
mangaka350 wrote...
SLAYER NEXUS wrote...
mangaka350 wrote...
send me the damn mp3 :DYou got it.
Letupload it and I will send you the link but just a one question do you
want the instrumental version or the finished one with vocals?
instrumental >:3
and it will take time to practice this song.
Well here it is the Instrumental version of my song. I am so stoked that you want
do a vocal cover let me know when it complete and send me a link okay.
Heres the link.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=RHXYHO0P
its going to be awesome
ill PM you man >:3
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Nashrakh
Little White Butterflies Staff
mangaka350 wrote...
its going to be awesome
ill PM you man >:3
Do we have to worry you'd auto-tune the shit out of it?
On a related note, how about using Vocaloid?
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Goddamn, dude, I wish I had your skill. Obviously, if I sucked at life as much as you do, I'd want to kill myself right now.