I need artists for my VN

Can we see a script?
I don't wanna wait for the manga

I don't want the reveal the script (or what I have of it), until I get the team together.

@Colonel: Very nice! I like the art style and the way it turned out, but the body on the left seems a tad too tall.

I don't mind, not like I gave enough time for it.

You mean tall like proportion-wise or....? She is 7 heads tall, so that's good proportion. As for her "actual height", ya she might seem like she would be tall but that is because she is kinda skinny, which elongates the body, that is kinda my natural style but i can fix it if it bothers you. Also, her height is adjusted by the other characters and the settings around her.

Give me more character bio so i can try out more stuff, include personality too, ya?

Umm, I'll do that later. o3o

If your style, you don't have to change it. :|

lol don't worry, flexibility is a good thing when it comes to art and i don't mind changing my style, that doesn't mean i lose my identity or anything. I am an art student, i'm used to critiques so feel free to be a bitch to me XD

Your character on the left is actually nine heads tall, so you might want to shorten her torso and legs a bit.

I do like the other drawings on that page though. Very cute. :)

Yagami your avatar is it misaki Nakahara from NHK?

....anyone else?

I'd like to get more submissions. =3=

Idk im working on this but dunno if this is what you might be looking for...?



Ill try and do one after this

i would join... if you can accept the things as concept haha!



the left nipple looks a bit inward much.

you mean her right nipple...? cause that's the one that looks funky it's not exactly in the right place f you ask me.

i'd like to know why men always draw girls with erected nipples... it is majorly weird

I don't mind coloring and/or character designing.
Your story seems pretty cool so I wouldn't mind helping.

I didn't draw the jizz btw.

oh yea haha

stupid mirror in the morn

anyways this is how draw back then:

any update on this, a cover, story board, a draft

also how long is the story gonna be?

well

gotta hear from quad first

havent seen him on irc

Yeha, I don't want to give away too much of the story (because it sounds terrible when I sum it up), so sorry. =3=

Also: I need a bit more time to look over the art, and I have a few more submissions that still need to be finished.

welll

you can pm the story

copypasta style

i would definitely like to see what the scrap works are

Hmm... I'm interested. I'll help out with storyline since I'm a somewhat veteran and backgrounds since I can do those -> look at my thread if you want to see my work. I would leave character design to Clo