It's Been a while... (SnO and a Chibi of AmagamiSS)

yeah... I've been out here on FAKKU for half a year already. Haven't drawn anything for the past 3 months... I might have gotten a little rusty. So I decided to make another one for FAKKU! Rate and Comment. depending on the results, I might make another one.




and a chibi... Kamizaki Risa chibi of Amagami SS, well I don't know if it resembles her... I was supposed to add this to squiby.net as a pet but a friend asked me to show it.



a bigger one here: my dev art

That's pretty amazing. Best drawing I've ever seen on fakku. Coincidentally, the topic image is also my sig.

I wish I could be able to draw like that one day =/

Thanks mate!!



too bad the topic image ain't movin' though... xD

That's pretty amazing right there O_O

yep, those boobs are really majestic... ;3

guess it would be amazing but highly doubt it be the best on fakku unless u wanna be that ignored and ignore the very good artist's who left this forums.

lrn2read baddie

lolumad?

funny how u pick something so generic to be the best... clearly baddies like u r fail.

I'm mad? I just pointed out your mistake, I don't see how that makes me mad. But ok, you can think that if it helps you sleep at night =)

I picked it because the picture itself depicted my favorite character. You might want to rethink how you use the word generic.

Sounds like a case of jelly to me.

Edit: We're derailing this poor guys thread. Leave it be or pm me if you have an issue.

ya cant please everyone... though it's true that there are better artist like Mycstea. they're not called "FAKKU Artist" for nothin'.
Guess artists can only be understood by other artists...

[color=purple]That picture's amazing. Very nice. :)
I'm still working on my skills with my tablet, and always wonder some things when observing others'--just so naive to a lot of things regarding it all.

+rep pour vous.

Keep it up. :)[/color]

It looks very nice! Only thing I think is worth mentioning is that Ikaros' eyes appear to be uneven.

u obviously don't get it by generic but Ill leave it at that since baddies r baddies and I don't want to mess up his thread.

I'll keep that in mind... and thanks btw.

It's quite lovely :) i'd like to point out a few things to help you.

Your touch with coloring is great you can only improve.Their facial expressions are done well with a few kinks but overall fine and attractive.

They look a bit pointy her shoulders and the males elbows along with the folds.Try softening up those lines.

quite right... I am a bit doubtful on those parts. I was trying to get the texture of the coat by emphasizing on the folds but I think I kinda added too much.

Thanks for the critique, I was actually hoping for someone to point those part out.

Seems like you want C&C so ill do what I can do provide some.
Here I go, your gonna hate me even more now by saying this but your previous drawings don't look as good as this one does, they look really off... so since you got more of your anatomy down more correctly,heads are proportioned more accurately, faces actually look like what anime faces should look like which is good but its also becoming generic but... not a bad thing just seen a lot and not so fascinating to see every time but is probably just me and friends I know tho its still good cuz your improving much better now. Colors seem good and matches the actual show so its quite identical, clothing is quite good too but got some problems on certain parts. Background seems like a copy and paste sorta thing but I could be wrong but if it is then avoid using actual backgrounds and try to design some of your own.

The girl with wings her left shoulder(my right) seems unnatural, too pointy and seems bit too short to where her arm starts to come down and gets smaller in size to where it gets to her hand. Same would go with her right shoulder as well.

The one in brown school uniform seems to have a chest going out too much... I don't think actual breasts do that, her folds don't seem natural, its like you tried to make it as even as you can and what ever happened on one side happened to the other exactly alike... you may want to avoid doing that cuz it wont turn out great.
His/her hand seems very odd... it just isn't proportioned correctly, thumbs aren't that straight and certainly aren't, pinky is not that thick and it isn't equal in length as the other fingers are... I would suggest looking at reference to get a more accurate result.

Hmmm I would say is don't use anime for reference on anatomy/proportions since it ain't correct I and will look terrible since your just drawing what you see that is flat, better to do life drawings for getting your anatomy down right.


my bad for terrible structure but hope it helps.

not at all... I admit that those were "bad", unlike this one. let's just say I improved a lot compared before.



hmm... 'guess so. I not really good at doing BG's. but copy and paste isn't my thing... I made those using brush styles.



hrm... gotta fix these..



y'know, when wearing a coat and raising you hand or raising it to shoulder length, the chest part kinda points out. I tried making that and I failed seeing that you noticed it was wrong. my bad on that one.



*noted...



failed yet again....




good deduction. will do-



helped a lot, thanks...

Your welcome!! Kanu's was much more helpful than I was but I'm glad you could see where I was coming from.As long as you keep practicing you'll find your way around turning a positive into a negative.

I posted this in the first page too...



a bigger one here: my dev art