Kaho's CG(Merry Blue Christmas!!) Ruu...
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Sabers Praetor
Unlimited Lewd Works
Kaho prefers to draw sexy curves, boobs, and a hot ass....not a muscled piece of flesh.......sorry sort of my own outlook on it in there >.> but as someone suggested trsps might be a good start should he ever wish to draw men though traps irritate the shit out of me.
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jmason
Curious and Wondering
Sorrow Bloodmist wrote...
Kaho prefers to draw sexy curves, boobs, and a hot ass....not a muscled piece of flesh.......sorry sort of my own outlook on it in there >.> but as someone suggested traps might be a good start should he ever wish to draw men though traps irritate the shit out of me.Now that's a good idea. Kaho-kun, fancy drawing some traps, e.g. Hideyoshi? ^_^
And regarding you last ToHeart2 work - it was awesome. Good work with the details.
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Sorrow Bloodmist wrote...
Kaho prefers to draw sexy curves, boobs, and a hot ass....not a muscled piece of flesh.......sorry sort of my own outlook on it in there >.> but as someone suggested trsps might be a good start should he ever wish to draw men though traps irritate the shit out of me.Personally, I find drawing muscles very entertaining. Sometimes even more so than drawing a regular woman's body. And he'll end up drawing male bodies sooner or later.
Anyways, I just wanted to say something regarding Yagaminoue's critique on your work, Kaho. To be honest, it's something I've wanted to tell you for a long while, but never had the heart nor the appropriate words to say what I thought.
I have seen you evolve quite a lot since I first arrived here. In human anatomy, drawing clothes, backgrounds, colouring, etc. But there are some aspects of your work that, for some reason, don't seem to have evolved. The primest example of it is as yagaminoue pointed out, the heads. The chins are often hit or miss, and the same goes for the eyes. I don't know if it's because you don't see enough variety of styles or something, but it seems you have some difficulty conveying emotions with the eyes, and they often end up looking rather 'dead'.
This is merely amateur speculation but perhaps your problems could be mended by looking into different styles and trying to diversify your own style. I am not saying you need to drop your leaf-like style in order to move on, but I feel like you certainly need to explore other areas as well to improve.
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Thanks Jmason !!
@Kuroneko : Thanks for telling me about your thought ^______^ I appreciate it !!
Ruu....
@Kuroneko : Thanks for telling me about your thought ^______^ I appreciate it !!
Ruu....
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I didn't want to say anything, since he seems to be enjoying what he do and everyone seems to do so, but all that was pointed is right.
A good advice Kaho, just has Yamagi stated, you can go back to draw your anime leaf style anytime. I know normal proportions doesn't apply I mean, if you were to draw real necks in leaf style, it would look gross. But you DO NEED to study anatomy, muscles, bones and all that stuff, instead of just doing it the way it is shown in an anime or manga. And more important, even if you think you'r pretty damn good at what you are doing, getting references always helps to improve.
For starters, I can pretty much tell you begin your drawings right away without making any skeleton. Even if you'r good, you should STILL make them, believe me, its a world of difference. (my example).
I have this tutorial I downloaded from a spanish site, I don't like at all the style, but it help me to improve and create properly my hentai drawing style (is good to have different styles so you can create pics with more impact by using the right style). If you want, I can upload it for you, I bet it will help you a lot as it did to me. Some samples:
- I know, its in spanish, but you don't need to pay attention, just by looking you get what they mean.
- I know, the drawing style is rather disgusting even to me, but some of their advices are really something.
Now, as a last point, where I agree the most with Yamagi, you must grow as yourself, not as a leaf imitation. I personally, forbid myself of doing fanart with my right hand, for a single reason: 1 well praised pic of one of my original characters, was way more important to me than 100 empty praises saying how cool is that crappy, half-assed drawn naruto/hinata pic that everybody loves just because is naruto and hinata and "omgzzzz its so hawwwwt!!!".
As a fellow artist, I don't want to see someone so dedicated to waste his talents. Please, take this as a constructive critic.
A good advice Kaho, just has Yamagi stated, you can go back to draw your anime leaf style anytime. I know normal proportions doesn't apply I mean, if you were to draw real necks in leaf style, it would look gross. But you DO NEED to study anatomy, muscles, bones and all that stuff, instead of just doing it the way it is shown in an anime or manga. And more important, even if you think you'r pretty damn good at what you are doing, getting references always helps to improve.
For starters, I can pretty much tell you begin your drawings right away without making any skeleton. Even if you'r good, you should STILL make them, believe me, its a world of difference. (my example).
I have this tutorial I downloaded from a spanish site, I don't like at all the style, but it help me to improve and create properly my hentai drawing style (is good to have different styles so you can create pics with more impact by using the right style). If you want, I can upload it for you, I bet it will help you a lot as it did to me. Some samples:
Spoiler:
- I know, its in spanish, but you don't need to pay attention, just by looking you get what they mean.
- I know, the drawing style is rather disgusting even to me, but some of their advices are really something.
Now, as a last point, where I agree the most with Yamagi, you must grow as yourself, not as a leaf imitation. I personally, forbid myself of doing fanart with my right hand, for a single reason: 1 well praised pic of one of my original characters, was way more important to me than 100 empty praises saying how cool is that crappy, half-assed drawn naruto/hinata pic that everybody loves just because is naruto and hinata and "omgzzzz its so hawwwwt!!!".
As a fellow artist, I don't want to see someone so dedicated to waste his talents. Please, take this as a constructive critic.
"If you follow someone's else steps, you'll never leave your own footprints"
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Kona-chan wrote...
Do you still take request kaho?NO I dont' Kona_chan !! so sorry , I'm still busy with commissions >______< !!
@C13: thanks ^^ !! Ruu...
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kaho17 wrote...
Kona-chan wrote...
Do you still take request kaho?NO I dont' Kona_chan !! so sorry , I'm still busy with commissions >______< !!
Auu... =_=
Well, I can understand that you are always busy...
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more BRS, tried something new with perspective and coloring !! Ruu...
Black Rock Shooter-Sora Kagami by *KahoOkashii on deviantART
Black Rock Shooter-Sora Kagami by *KahoOkashii on deviantART
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Sabers Praetor
Unlimited Lewd Works
Nice job kaho I can see some improvement as well and the bg contrast well.
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jmason
Curious and Wondering
Sometimes your drawings make me feel like a kid at a candy store ^_^
Also, nice background.
Also, nice background.
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kaho17 wrote...
more BRS, tried something new with perspective and coloring !! Ruu...Black Rock Shooter-Sora Kagami by *KahoOkashii on deviantART
Ooh~ I love this one, Kaho~! ^_^
Very nicely done~^^
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Based on my observation, the detail of your character is about the level of your usual works. Maybe that was your intention to emphasize the backgrounds more, I like the details in that, how you used some burn tool to add the roughness to the skin and the backgrounds, the rain effect filter itself add a fine finishing touch that made it a nice piece of art.
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jmason
Curious and Wondering
Arrgghh, so much talk about BRS. I'll go watch it now ^_^
And nice work again, Kaho.
And nice work again, Kaho.


