my character sketch
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this is a character sketch for my mini comic. Each of them represent a element a wind, sea, and shore or earth but i prefer shore to fit in my story.
so the story goes like this, THE SEA likes THE SHORE and but she never has the chance to propose to him. until THE WIND come by and take a interest in THE SEA.
so THE WIND fell in love with THE SEA and tries to help her. THE WIND use his power to bring THE SEA close to THE SHORE. as THE SEA expresses her feeling THE SHORE rejected her. so THE SEA goes back crying.
but THE SEA wont give up so she kept asking THE WIND to take her closer to THE SHORE again. so thus to this day, THE SEA still at it and why there is waves and why wind is blowing at the sea as the sea being push back to the ocean over and over
so the story goes like this, THE SEA likes THE SHORE and but she never has the chance to propose to him. until THE WIND come by and take a interest in THE SEA.
so THE WIND fell in love with THE SEA and tries to help her. THE WIND use his power to bring THE SEA close to THE SHORE. as THE SEA expresses her feeling THE SHORE rejected her. so THE SEA goes back crying.
but THE SEA wont give up so she kept asking THE WIND to take her closer to THE SHORE again. so thus to this day, THE SEA still at it and why there is waves and why wind is blowing at the sea as the sea being push back to the ocean over and over
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It's about love triangle,
so give it a title "Bermuda Triangle" then..
Yoho~~ jokes aside,
I like the costume's detail, and the hatching looks pretty cool too.
If you don't mind with any advice,
Sorry if i sounds smartass... I hope i don't offend you
so give it a title "Bermuda Triangle" then..
Yoho~~ jokes aside,
I like the costume's detail, and the hatching looks pretty cool too.
If you don't mind with any advice,
Spoiler:
Sorry if i sounds smartass... I hope i don't offend you
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no no not at all. being a artist is to take advice and listen to no matter what. i really appreciate you oppinion. nice bermuda triangle huh. well it is a sad story might as well give a dramatic name.
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Hmm from what I see:
-Heads are too big.
-Shore's head/face is utterly fucked up compared to the other two.
-From the three characters, the arms are too small, too short, and all of the hands are too small.
-The poses are okay but needs some work, Shore has a very stiff and stupid looking pose.
-Feet needs a bit of work, all of them, but Shore's feet are the most noticeable.
-Heads are too big.
-Shore's head/face is utterly fucked up compared to the other two.
-From the three characters, the arms are too small, too short, and all of the hands are too small.
-The poses are okay but needs some work, Shore has a very stiff and stupid looking pose.
-Feet needs a bit of work, all of them, but Shore's feet are the most noticeable.
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mrg you have really sharp eyes i couldn't agree more. you right all their hand does seem small now. i didnt notice before but i know that hand are same size as the face or smaller sometime.
but also there is stylistic involved i mean you can tell clamp they drew they figure really long or akira toriyama with angle eyes and huge neck. i wonder do you complaint about those too?
but also there is stylistic involved i mean you can tell clamp they drew they figure really long or akira toriyama with angle eyes and huge neck. i wonder do you complaint about those too?
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Honestly I kinda do, but not that much when everything is consistent and it is very noticeable that it is a style. You're trying for a manga style, but there are inconsistencies that are pretty noticeable.
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[color=blue]I really like what you did there. It sorta has a classic anime feel too it. More like older shows than the new ones and we should appreciate that style too. Can't wait to see more of it. =P[/color]
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MRG wrote...
Honestly I kinda do, but not that much when everything is consistent and it is very noticeable that it is a style. You're trying for a manga style, but there are inconsistencies that are pretty noticeable.well you're right, but i didn't mean to sound rude and called you out like that. sorry but i will keep improving my drawing thank for the comments though.
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Haburi-Chan wrote...
[color=blue]I really like what you did there. It sorta has a classic anime feel too it. More like older shows than the new ones and we should appreciate that style too. Can't wait to see more of it. =P[/color]hmm then maybe i should change that. i mean i like old show and they have good quality but new time for new art. i should stop reading tezuka's pheonix and doremon now.
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If it help,
Since your art's style looks like people at Greek / Greek's Style,
you better see and take a lesson from Greek's Mythological Figure Costumes,
It is my advice,
search at Google, i often found some good art
I imagine " with your design combined with theirs elegant costumes, it will be ROCK "
Good luck :wink:
EDIT :
Since your art's style looks like people at Greek / Greek's Style,
you better see and take a lesson from Greek's Mythological Figure Costumes,
It is my advice,
Spoiler:
search at Google, i often found some good art
I imagine " with your design combined with theirs elegant costumes, it will be ROCK "
Good luck :wink:
EDIT :
Spoiler:
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[color=darkblue][font=Verdana]I really like Sea's hair and costume! These look really good![/font][/color]
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film_orange wrote...
[color=darkblue][font=Verdana]I really like Sea's hair and costume! These look really good![/font][/color]thank for your comment on my both art. your profile reminded me pepper from pepper project.
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fiveftwang wrote...
film_orange wrote...
[color=darkblue][font=Verdana]I really like Sea's hair and costume! These look really good![/font][/color]thank for your comment on my both art. your profile reminded me pepper from pepper project.
[color=darkblue][font=Verdana]Oh, yeah, by Art Germ on DA, too? Different artist, but from DA, yeah.[/font][/color]