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                        Are those your original characters? they are pretty good.   Now, a personal comment, on the second image, the nipples looks kinda dangerous, like to sharp and pointy.   A personal recommendation, use black for the lineart so the drawing could be seeing better.   Right now is kinda hard to see how detailed it is since its so clear.                    
                
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                        C13R-66Y wrote...
Are those your original characters? they are pretty good.   Now, a personal comment, on the second image, the nipples looks kinda dangerous, like to sharp and pointy.   A personal recommendation, use black for the lineart so the drawing could be seeing better.   Right now is kinda hard to see how detailed it is since its so clear.Plus I'd use more shadow to make more 3D and it would remove the feeling that its a sketch :3
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                        Katamari wrote...
C13R-66Y wrote...
Are those your original characters? they are pretty good.   Now, a personal comment, on the second image, the nipples looks kinda dangerous, like to sharp and pointy.   A personal recommendation, use black for the lineart so the drawing could be seeing better.   Right now is kinda hard to see how detailed it is since its so clear.Plus I'd use more shadow to make more 3D and it would remove the feeling that its a sketch :3
Yeah, but since it is just lineart I wasn't expecting him to add details
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                        this is a style that I try after seeing some of michael turner sensei works. it's not easy tough
first attempt

second attempt

try different pose
third attempt
http://www.indomanga.com/gallery/860_04_05_10_10_15_24.JPG
Im too lazy to add some details hahaha
                first attempt
second attempt
try different pose
third attempt
http://www.indomanga.com/gallery/860_04_05_10_10_15_24.JPG
Im too lazy to add some details hahaha
 
                        

 
                     
                         
                        