My Jobs

the daughter

the niece

the mother

Are those your original characters? they are pretty good. Now, a personal comment, on the second image, the nipples looks kinda dangerous, like to sharp and pointy. A personal recommendation, use black for the lineart so the drawing could be seeing better. Right now is kinda hard to see how detailed it is since its so clear.

Plus I'd use more shadow to make more 3D and it would remove the feeling that its a sketch :3

Not bad...Not bad....

Yeah, but since it is just lineart I wasn't expecting him to add details

this is a style that I try after seeing some of michael turner sensei works. it's not easy tough

first attempt



second attempt



try different pose

third attempt

http://www.indomanga.com/gallery/860_04_05_10_10_15_24.JPG

Im too lazy to add some details hahaha

You know, you should be more into this. Your anatomy is just excellent, and the poses seems natural. If you weren't this lazy, you could be some real good shit.

Also, put a bit more into faces, as I can see, your focus is the body, but hey, the face is important too ;D