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I need some CNC on this. My friends are too busy to criticize on it and I wish to improve the parts that are messed up before I outline+color.
These are my four OCS, from Left to Right.
Michelle, Lilith, (SHE NEEDS A NAME), and Nine.
The 3rd one needs a name...can someone think of a name that begins with K or O and it must be unique. CNC AWAY! :D
These are my four OCS, from Left to Right.
Michelle, Lilith, (SHE NEEDS A NAME), and Nine.
The 3rd one needs a name...can someone think of a name that begins with K or O and it must be unique. CNC AWAY! :D
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Your unnammed girl is the cutest IMO, I love the detail you put into her facial area(The glasses are a plus). Being a devil/succubus is also very appealing ^^ The creepy looking mask that Nine is wearing is good, simple, but good.
Well I don't have very well developed artistic skills. Nor do I know very much about how the body should be positioned. So I'll just point a few things out that I am not sure about.
Lilith's hip/butt/thigh area seems a bit mis-proportioned. It might the floor is a bit soft and her butt is sinking into the floor a bit creating that flat appearance. Also her thigh near the knee cap seems a little to thin. The scarf and left arm(on her, right if your looking at the pic) seem a bit vague or not well defined. Will be clearer once you color it.
Nine's breast seems a bit outta place. If I am looking at it correctly her body is slanted(maybe another word?) towards the ground, so the breast shouldn't look like that? Also the thigh you can see seems a bit too small, but that might because of the way it is angled.
It seems like there is a bit too much white space behind Nine and the unnamed girl, maybe add a bed/dresser/poster/couch or something that goes along with the theme. But you might be adding that when you color the background, so I dunno.
Good luck ^^
Well I don't have very well developed artistic skills. Nor do I know very much about how the body should be positioned. So I'll just point a few things out that I am not sure about.
Lilith's hip/butt/thigh area seems a bit mis-proportioned. It might the floor is a bit soft and her butt is sinking into the floor a bit creating that flat appearance. Also her thigh near the knee cap seems a little to thin. The scarf and left arm(on her, right if your looking at the pic) seem a bit vague or not well defined. Will be clearer once you color it.
Nine's breast seems a bit outta place. If I am looking at it correctly her body is slanted(maybe another word?) towards the ground, so the breast shouldn't look like that? Also the thigh you can see seems a bit too small, but that might because of the way it is angled.
It seems like there is a bit too much white space behind Nine and the unnamed girl, maybe add a bed/dresser/poster/couch or something that goes along with the theme. But you might be adding that when you color the background, so I dunno.
Good luck ^^
