Erotic fiction: At the beach

I think that this was a great read. The perspective you've written in is unique and not something I've seen before, and you wrote it very well. Bravo!

One of the best erotic stories I read in my life. I'd +rep you for it, but I spent my 24h limit already ...

MOAR !!! I DEMAND MOAR !!!

Yes, pls. Post more of your stories. From a woman's point of view (since I am one, a woman that is), this is excellent fapping material.

The aspect of this story I enjoy the most would be that it seeps a metaphorical blood of pure liquid romance, mixed with lust. I'd like for this kind of love to exist and often question if it does, more specifically if I will be as attracted to a women as the male protagonist seems to be. I will also let you know that it comes off as successfully attractive to a fellow male. However, I probably won't masturbate to it because I find writing of this caliber to be too pure. Take it as a compliment, please.

Suffice to say you have given a representation that I have sympathized with on an incredible level. Congratulations and I hope you continue to write as magnificently as you have with this story. It's only a pity you arrived a month late to the winter writer's contest. Should you need it, you've made an ally out of this writing section frequenter.

I suggest you post a link to this story in your forum signature to attract anyone who is intrigued in your posts directly to this wonderful piece. It deserves to be proud of.

Xenon had it right, magnificent! As yet another male, I will attest to your erotic-fiction-writing prowess. I cannot express how much I enjoyed this read. I will agree that it is not fapping material; perhaps this is because males are more easily visually stimulated. However, this does not negatively affect the read in any way. I found this more fulfilling on a much deeper level. Thank you for sharing with all of us.

My dear Wordmangler2000,
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. That was the first I have read in a female perspective and was very stimulating.
I would love to read more... And I +rep you.
On to the next one!

Thank you again ~<3

-Came to check if you replied. Don't forget to edit your posts and quote the members you replied to.

Since I have never had a SO, this left me longing for an experience similar to this.

I just +repped you- it had finally reloaded. I will be sure to PM you if I think of one.

Ehhhh... yeah, slight problem. Editing and quoting doesn't send the notification. Only the initial button pressing of Post Reply does. Yes, a big hassle, I know. :(

Oh. I thought it worked for me... ;-;

Never mind then. Listen to Artcellerox. Not me.

You're of the feminine gender, right? I find this interesting and curious. Why?

Though, it's not uncommon for cum to drip out during sex, it is never possible to do some of the stuff that hentai implies, such as cum exploding from the vagina. Never possible.

Ah, thank you for humoring my question. You could say that was the inner psychology major in me getting curious. You may be surprised, but fear of over-cumming, I guess you could call it, can also be present in men. The feeling of ejaculation has a fine line between pain and pleasure and it can get painful and scare the hypochondriacs among us. I know I've experienced that feeling of nearing black-out because of the intensity, but that's why I try not to 'edge' for hours anymore. Haha.

Yeah... I blacked out from the intensity once. I fell out of the shower onto my ass in the floor. When I came to (became conscious once more, that is), I had a throbbing headache that lasted for an hour or more. I arrived at the same conclusion as you did: no more trying to edge for that long. >.

It's the post-ejaculatory blue balls, man. Bro +rep incoming on recharge.

I think what surprised me most was the insanely loud ringing in my ears that came with the headache. Crazy, crazy stuff man. I've had orgasms that made my feet turn numb before, but that one kicked my ass.

That's what I assumed was going on as well- a rapid change in blood pressure. Although that sounds like a nice way to die, I can testify as to it's painful nature.